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The author's football concepts are so backward that I really don't know how to describe them. He is probably still in the Jianlibao era. Secondly, the conflicts arise out of nowhere and cannot stand up to scrutiny at all, and the plot conflicts are thoughtless. It involves descriptions of gang struggles and the brokerage industry, and the related characters are also very simple (I was wrong, there is no character at all). To summarize, this is a typical football article from the 2000s, but it is now 2018.
Breaking off legs at every turn, threatening other people's parents at every turn, you can let the protagonist have a financial crisis, speculate in gold, form a mercenary group, kidnap the parents and children of a celebrity you don't like when playing football, pay someone to break off the legs and feet, anyway, this is the main theme of the world you write😁
I really like the heroine, I really wish the author would publish all the books in one big breath!
Some words are used incorrectly
Author, NB was not popular yet in 1992, right?
Writing is very strange. I want to do everything but can't do it well. It's awkward to put it together. Can I write about football well?
I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 101. I'm already thinking about setting up training. Are you thinking too much? First of all, I'm thinking about others even before I'm kicked out. In the second week, there are not many supermarkets in Meng, so where does the money come from? Even if Zhou Meng has money, is he willing to waste the money? It's too natural.
Many books recently are too fast-paced and purely for entertainment. Not many can write with such connotation.
Well written👍The pace could be more compact
Very good article, although it is a little lacking, but the fattening is definitely worth the slaughter. Ha ha
The beginning of this novel surprised me. Two people were reborn to play football, and they were reborn at a young enough age that they had developed a taste for playing football since childhood. But let's not talk about your update. Although a primary school football match is the final, is it necessary to drag on so many chapters?
The author creates a new type - rebirth of urban football. It can be said that the essence of rebirth literature and football literature are combined into one, and everything that should be included is included...
Seeing the mysterious ancient Eastern country again, I really... Is the vocabulary used by football novel authors to describe their own countries so poor?
When writing about football, why don't you put a cover of Kobe Bryant?
This kind of story is told like flowing water from the perspective of God, and it is a bit boring without the twists and turns of expectations.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I support you, but don't give up.
Persuade to quit
I've been reading these recent chapters so depressingly and not happy at all, I'm trying to persuade them to quit!
Injured, healed, abandoned? Restart? A slap in the face?
The author is very thoughtful and describes many things that other novels have not considered. I must praise it. But actually going to Catalonia, the most openly racist country in Spain?