Superstar

The girl who handles the case by herself... Doesn't know what to say at all

I did some things here and there, I used to be an undercover agent in my previous life, and I could play many roles as I wanted them to be, but in the end I didn't even want to act, so I continued to be a director, and I came up with a new trick. It looked very messy, and not everyone can read books that are vegetarian and vegan. Maybe some people like this hodgepodge, but maybe more people don't like it.

It's very good. The three lines, Taoism, entertainment and solving crimes, are written by the author with great content. The two golden fingers, past life experience and Taoism, are enough. At present, it seems that it has reached the level of Sanjiang. It is better than most of the books that are strongly recommended, but there are too few.

Author, I would like to remind you that from these chapters, the three lines are a bit scattered, resulting in a feeling that the protagonist is exhausted and in a hurry. If not, let's divide it into priorities. Mainly supernatural or entertainment. Supernatural is more interesting, and entertainment is better. The word count is better. It is recommended to use some fragmentary small cases to intersperse the plot and bury one or two long-term hidden clues, which can increase the attractiveness of the article; entertainment articles and love suggestions should be written in daily life; supernatural suggestions should have a clear sense of upgrade, be more exciting, and have more plots to reveal the saint in front of others. Each of the three has its own merits, and it is better to combine the advantages, but now they are a bit scattered.

So far, it looks pretty good, keep up the good work

I just want to say that the author is too ambitious and exaggerates the plot so much that there is no main line.

There are too many lines, especially I don't like the undercover line~~ It's a good work originally, but it's annoying for people to read Nie Xiaoyu. I don't know how much I weigh? Do you just want to take revenge? ? ? This is disrespectful to your own life~~silly

Don't be unhappy if others say it's confusing. See for yourself. It's not that the combination of entertainment and supernatural arts is not good. This is a good idea, but before I finished saying this, I immediately took a sharp turn and kept talking about the bracelet. You suddenly came to a Tianzi No. 1 Store. What the hell? (ŐдŐ๑), So sudden.

It feels like it's written like a suspense. Don't force yourself into entertainment.

Why does it seem to me that there are missing chapters? It feels a bit incoherent and a bit confusing.

Author, have you watched the live broadcast? Will the audience not know if you are doing a live broadcast or a video? Okay, even if there is no prompt in the live broadcast room whether it is a live broadcast or a recording, even the background of the live broadcast platform does not know that you are playing a video. Is this possible?