Tao Teaches the Common People

The sworn relationship with Jinlan feels a bit too far-fetched

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I read a little bit of the beginning, but not the rest. Let me tell you my feelings, the appearance of the characters, the dialogue and emotions between the characters, etc. It is very far-fetched. Author, you need to know that today's book lovers are becoming more and more demanding for online articles. It is not like eight years ago. Eight years ago, if you wrote like this, you would be able to read it. Yes, now the tastes of book lovers are becoming more and more sophisticated. Once the old bookworms see your beginning, they actually have little desire to read on. Therefore, the more attractive the beginning of a book, the better. If the writing style is not up to par, you can write a more ordinary beginning, and then slowly improve your level, so It is very important to start with the current online article. Maybe you will gradually become more proficient later, but many book friends stopped reading after reading the beginning. I also did not read the rest of this book. I hope the author can see that this is my inner feeling as a ten-year-old bookworm reading this book. The online article is It's a kind of fast food. Your writing is too literary and youthful. Many book friends don't have the time to understand it slowly. The writing is too plain. People call it novice or hydrology. The requirements of this field are not high and it is difficult to work. If it were ten years ago, I would write a brainless novice like Long Aotian. Now. . . .

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Why do modern people have to use ancient words when speaking? It's against harmony and embarrassing.

Let me tell you my feelings after reading the first two chapters. . . The author's writing is very powerful. . . . But because the introduction to the Yellow Emperor and Chi You in the first chapter were really ironic, it hooked me inexplicably. At the same time, I felt that it was a novel with a single heroine, so I didn't want to abandon the book too early. I hope some book friends can tell me how the author's writing skills are now?

It looked good at first, I thought it was a good book, but when I saw "Sister of Faith", I was instantly turned upside down. Pig's Feet stepped into the spiritual world, met several practitioners, and then had a fight with others, and then became sworn sworn friends with them. How simple you have to be to do this. Judging from the previous performance of Pig's Feet, it doesn't look like a silly and sweet person, why did it change its style of painting all of a sudden?

A fairy comes down to earth, has an extraordinary background, practices training, slaps her in the face, and steals beautiful women?

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The writing is okay, but the power system is too low. It is not a novel with a high-power urban cultivation system.

Why do I feel like I've seen this before? Is it an old bottle in a new bottle?

I feel like the first few chapters are a bit like Jiu Deng's kind-hearted super physiognomist