Doomsday Photographer

If the author has time, he should design the plot development, world view, loopholes, and protagonist's abilities. When I started watching, I felt that the brainstorming was okay, but are you taking it too much for granted? 1: This is the end, 1 Anything can happen here 1 It's normal to kill people and seize treasures, isn't it? 1According to the world you designed as the author, it is too peaceful here. Also, according to the development of time, the end of the world may not be a matter of a month or two, it is too stable. 1 Is good, I think Doomsday is good, speechless, the characterization is not good, 1 is a bound protagonist, Finally, I really want to complain, the protagonist traveled to the game world, his performance was too zz, and so did the people around me. I saw the protagonist shooting with a camera, but it was like this. Later, I saw the protagonist shooting zombies with a camera, and that was it. He was not greedy, funny, and did not pursue it. He just thought it was his ability and no one came to snatch it away and force him to confess. Hehe, if this was the end of the world, it would be ridiculous.

Congratulations on basically getting out of the game😂 and unknowingly writing a science fiction novel! Um! Right! You read that right, this is science fiction now. If it is classified as a game, you should go to the ophthalmologist, maybe the degree of myopia is too high! 😁😁😁😁

Oh! It turned out that no one was watching. Silently heartbroken for three minutes Congested Two-hearted Three myocardial infarctions

As the title says, that's it. So if you see a reply from this ID, don't panic, it's me!

After reading some people's comments, I admit that there were indeed some problems in the early stages of this book, which I did not do well. The subsequent plot will continue to unfold and will be more exciting, so I will focus on the later stories. If I have time, I will revise the early stage and try to reduce some poisonous points. Thanks everyone for your comments.

To be honest, there are a lot of loopholes. It's good for a novice to write it like this. However, it's completely boring to write it like this. This book must either be practiced or put on the shelf and earn perfect attendance.

Emmmm, after trying the poison, the early stage was terrible, really terrible, and it always gave readers a sense of frustration. The protagonist has very strong abilities, but I didn't see the limitations. If there are any, they can be made up for by the younger brother. In other words, the protagonist is a humanoid self-propelled mobile zombie wave, which has been invincible from the beginning, but the author's writing is very stupid and useless. I can't stand it anymore. Have you looked at what happens next? If something changes, I'll come back and take a look. I'll withdraw. It's too poisonous.

Emmm... How to put it. There is a sense of stupidity in the writing style. Some of the protagonist's jokes do not require the protagonist to react in an exaggerated manner, and the details are not full. I just watched the early part, and the plot... Is a bit vulgar, about meeting people, working, etc. It's not very attractive. In other words, there's plenty of room for improvement. Come on, author, I'll check back in a while.