Under Nine Punches

NB, author, how did you survive? You managed to reach the top of the update list!

As the title says, the author has run out of ideas! I hope all of the one hundred collectors who are still reading this book will provide you with various tricks and certain creative ideas. (Once a character is provided, never be dissatisfied with the character's ending.) Since the next volume will be the protagonist's personal volume, these things will be useful. (If no one cares, just pretend I didn't comment...) Well, that's all I want to say. This is something I have already thought about doing, and I will start the next volume soon. So let me say it now and collect your thoughts. (The readers' creativity is really bad! ╮(￣⊿￣)╭)

Those parentheses in front of this are pretty bad. That's just the reason why I just wrote it, it will be better later. If you are still not used to it, you can read other books. Maybe what I wrote is not suitable for you. After all, I am a newcomer who doesn't even have a written book, so I will slowly improve. But the problem with the drama in the early stage was because the book was locked. And it has already been formed, so it is very difficult to change. If you have to change it, it will be easy to feel disconnected. It feels like the preface is wrong... If it really doesn't work, I'll try to see if I can fix it... _(:з∠)_Please forgive me!

The first three chapters have been changed. If there are any parentheses that make you feel weird, you can tell me. I'll go see if it can be changed.

I read three chapters, and I probably feel that the novel you wrote is not suitable for the current mainstream. The first three chapters are said to be the golden chapters. In fact, I feel it is a bit cumbersome.

To be honest, the author, your writing is really good. Just write this step slowly first. It doesn't matter. Just read more of the popular ones now.

Good! If you are ambitious enough and work hard enough, I will wait until this book is finished, then read the top fifty novels, and push aside the outlines of the top fifty novels. The next book will definitely become a god.

To be honest, this one is written in a more old-school way, and it really feels like I have read a book. The translated novel is actually pretty good, but... It does not conform to the current trend. You must have one or two before you get to the point. For example, what kind of character the protagonist was in his previous life, but you don't want to design it in an exaggerated way, because it's possible that you designed a person who lived forty or fifty years in his previous life, but you can't describe what the state should be like at 450 years old, so use this. The background of the world is very complicated, and it is introduced very comprehensively from the beginning. You only need to introduce it a little, and then you will slowly expand the world view of this world. I looked at it, and I didn't remember your world. You can have a preliminary understanding of this world with us, but you can slowly expand the world view of this world later, so don't write it. I feel that your first three pictures are just an introduction to the world. Their main purpose is to give the audience a sense of the world. I feel like I watched something. Maybe I just watched it a few minutes ago and I don't remember it? What extraordinary powers are there in this world? I just remember one that makes machines, machine armors and the like. Oh, and one more thing, I just read Chapter 6 now.

Sofa, as the first fan.

Martial arts is not easy to write. It's not easy. Get some popularity, buddy.

What should I say, give it a read, it's better than most books. I'm not disgusted with it. I have to say it's funny, refreshing, and refreshing. I haven't read it for a few chapters. Then, I understood what the three golden chapters are. Newcomers who sign contracts without practicing will be very tired from writing.

Awesome, great, completely finished.

Damn, this is almost over. No, do you want to open a new pit? (ŐдŐ๑).

The punches are good enough, but the main character is not tough enough and there is nothing awesome about him.

The overall feeling is average, but it can be used by authors to practice their writing. Recently, there is an author who is crazy about writing entertainment articles and has become very good at writing entertainment articles. Authors can learn from it and always read the news and take advantage of hot news.