Blessed Land

After reading the first few chapters of the book, tell me your feelings. The language and writing are pretty good. Anyway, my standard is that I can understand it. What I care more about is the plot and logic. But I found something here, I don't know whether it is a shortcoming or an advantage. You write about killing each other in the prologue, and then suddenly it goes back to before they were born. The prologue has already written about them killing each other, and then it turns back to them falling in love. It is a test of the author's writing ability to handle it here. If it is not handled well, it will be equivalent to a spoiler, or the previous part will be a bit redundant. Wouldn't it be better to write it as a narrative, starting from when they were killing each other? Okay, the logic is still wrong. You have spoiled too much. I think it would be better not to have a prologue, so that the plot will be more unpredictable. What you wrote like this is like guessing the general plot of the book. I have read a book written this way before, but I couldn't handle it well and it seemed like I was disappointed. If you were writing a rebirth stream, this would still be a decent beginning. I hope the author will continue to work hard. These 300 words are my humble opinion. If you think they make sense, just listen to them. If they don't, just skip them.