Time Travel Begins with the Era of Louis XIII

The biggest advantage of this book is its wide-open imagination, smooth and delicate writing skills, and easy-to-pick-up jokes. Its shortcoming is that the conflicts are not intense enough. Personally, I think that for a novel to attract readers, contradictions must be everywhere. The whole text must have main-line contradictions, branches and branch-line contradictions, characters and character contradictions, and scenes and scenes. All narratives must revolve around "contradictions".                                                                                                                                                                   need to be artificially created to create some contradiction. In a scene, a dialogue with each other's swear words can make things clear, and this kind of dialogue makes people more comfortable to watch. I have read all of Daji's paragraphs and commentaries. Personally, I think they can be summed up in one point: the plot has too few ups and downs, it is just a straight line without peaks or troughs. To put it bluntly, there are too few "contradictions" and a lack of suspense. The above is my personal opinion. In any case, it is still a good book 👍.

The author has superb time and space layout and language control skills. Good articles are not to be missed.

I admire Lao Li Tou's perseverance the most. Since my Eight Senses mind body was split, the new book has only produced more than 40 chapters, and Lao Li Tou has already published 663 chapters. Even if I started with 500 chapters, I wrote more than 40 chapters, and Lao Li wrote 163 chapters, which is four times as many as mine. It is really like sailing against the current. If you don't advance, you will retreat.

Staying up late every day writing is a hobby, a perseverance, and a mission in life! People must live their lives to the fullest like Lao Li! 👍👍👍 Remaining a child forever is really an ability. I wish Lao Li a happy Children's Day! 😅😅😅

Why did you suddenly change the title of the book? I didn't notice it at once and deleted it from the bookshelf. It took me a long time to find out what was going on, and then I added it to the bookshelf.

Come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Return visit! Thank you so much! Come on together!

It was as if I saw the five hundred wastes in Lingao. . . .

Like first (/≧▽≦/)

Millions of Gods.

I forgot about today's recommendation vote and will make it up tomorrow.

It is really rare that the author can persevere until now. Come on, keep working hard, and you will definitely succeed. I have only written 40 chapters in my second book, and I don't have the perseverance of Lao Litou.

What leave request? I am writing an article, who do I need to ask for leave from?

Thank you (´-ω-`), I have played a lot of games in Renjun.

I wish in advance that Da Da's new book will be a hit😊😊

Abba Abba, the drama is almost over, right? Come on duck

This book has been a long time coming! It's over a million words, I admire it! 😁

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Is Louis XIII the Titanic in the Heart of the Ocean?

The writing style feels a bit like Mr. Xu, so I collected it first 😊

The first sentence of the introduction will make many NCs unhappy, because in their view, the Ming Dynasty has always been a paradise, and it is not a bad thing. All bad records about the Ming Dynasty were tampered by the Qing Dynasty.

I think Lao Li's article is a bit condensed at the beginning, but what is condensed is the essence, but this is not in line with the reading habits of online readers. For online readers, reading a book should be enjoyable, in other words, it should be smooth and mindless. This old Li's writing is not up to standard. However, looking at Chapter 277 of Lao Li's update today, it is obvious that Lao Li has exerted his strength. The writing in this chapter is no worse than that written by any great master! That's all I dare to say. If you don't believe it, everyone comes to see it.

It feels a bit messy. But overall it's still pretty good-looking.

Lao Li's writings become more exciting as they are written, just like aged wine, which becomes more fragrant the more you taste it. His writing skills are also becoming more and more sophisticated. Although there are many characters, they are not cluttered, and each one has a vivid image. Come on!

Lao Li's articles become more story-telling and interesting as they go on. Obviously, after 700,000 words of practical writing, his writing techniques have become richer, making it worth reading. Come on.