Traveling Through the Dream Countryside

The writing technique is especially like that of primary school students writing narrative compositions, that is, writing everything, and it feels like it is OK if it is written clearly. It's too streamlined, the visuals aren't very strong, and there are no emotional ups and downs, so I really can't watch it. I lost my patience after reading a few chapters and started to lose focus. After reading twenty chapters, I started to forget the previous ones. After being distracted, I read other books and then came back to read them all and forgot all about them. . . As a result, I read it back and forth for several days and there are still more than 40 chapters. . . 😅😅Don't embarrass yourself

Generally speaking, I like this kind of article. I found that the previous chapter about getting rich was too long. As a result, the story of the hero and heroine getting back together or even getting married was briefly mentioned, which seemed a bit sloppy. At the end, it only said that the heroine was pregnant again, and it ended in a hurry without even giving birth to the child. I hope that I can adjust the structure of the article in the future, so that I can write about a very happy life after marriage. Because it is already such a long article, you can definitely read it 🙂

I feel like this article is like playing a farming game. I have been playing it for a long time and I have made money and figured out the rules, but the garbage game has not allowed me to upgrade.

Come on, the author comes in and takes a look

As long as I write about the heroine, it's all about food. Is it necessary to write in such detail about how to cook and eat the food?

I grabbed the sofa and waited for the fattening article.

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I feel like the writing is well written with lots of details. There is no need to write in such detail about trivial things.

He looked so anxious, as if he was writing down a running account. The plot is obviously very interesting, but it's too slow and has too much nonsense. I'm tired of watching it. .

The blocked chapters have been unlocked, so please feel free to enter.

Why do you explain it in such detail to understand the cause of your illness, just to make up the word count?

Very annoying. . . Not suitable for my impatient temper😥

In more than six hundred and twenty chapters, the male and female protagonists meet each other but don't recognize each other? ? This appetite is killing me. . . .

This book is generally good, with a clear main line and vivid descriptions of characters, which makes it feel like a finished book. There are a few points left unexplained: Brother Shu is admitted to Jinshi, how is Brother Qi's development, and what is the situation in Cheng Zhechuan's Duke's Mansion. It is not logical to ignore the son (or grandson) getting married and having children... But the book is still good.

The male protagonist spends hundreds of chapters making excuses, which is really tiring to watch!

Beautiful, well written, I like it very much 😍

I read a comment saying that there are more than 600 chapters where the male and female protagonists recognize each other. I like this. I like that the female protagonist is all delicious. It would be better if the male protagonist didn't travel through time. It would be better if there is no male protagonist.

After reading more than 60 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The author's writing is fine, mainly because of the plot arrangement. First of all, the heroine is the soul of an adult, but many things she does have a childish mentality. Among them, peppers are highly poisonous. First of all, peppers are not delicious for most people when they eat them for the first time. It is the first time they eat spicy peppers and they can't stand it, but they have an aftertaste. Also, the heroine is a child. Even if the child is pampered at home, she will not blindly listen to the child. She does not research the market before starting a business and directly invests heavily. She would not do this even if there is a mine. However, the heroine's family is poor and still owes money. The story of making money can be done step by step, but the author is too anxious. The author can take a look at Little Lucky Girl from a Farmhouse, the narrative technique there is very good. Each of their businesses started from a young age and became big. How is it like this book? I really doubt that after 100 chapters, the heroine becomes the richest man.

Other people's homes can't even eat, and there's no meal left, but the heroine's home is so nice, with big fish and meat, hot pot and barbecue,…

The name Chen Heiya has to be used throughout the whole story. At least it has a formal name. Erya doesn't have a formal name either. Da Ya's name is officially decided. Why don't the family members change their name to Yi Jie'er or Ran Jie'er? It sounds better than Da Ya. Is it possible that when the family business gets bigger in the future, they still call the heroine Da Ya in front of outsiders?

Very beautiful, very beautiful! People who like rural life will definitely like this story

The tyrant boss pursues his wife from modern times to ancient times. Judging from the deep love, it is quite exciting! Especially in the previous part, the heroine first arrived in ancient times and was busy getting rid of poverty and becoming rich - hunting and growing vegetables, discovering secret places, developing hot sauce, and promoting chili peppers. The family worked together to make a fortune, and the life was solid, plain and warm! For those who like farming stories, this is quite interesting! However, we still cannot avoid the common problem of many farming articles - no matter how exciting the previous efforts are, they will eventually return to mediocrity! In other words, when the heroine leads her family to start a business together, she plays the leading role behind the scenes. She is smart, wise, calm and calm! However, once the male and female protagonists meet again, that is when Zhong Tian Wen reaches his peak and Su Tian Wen begins - when falling in love, it is a matter of a man's rapid intelligence! It is hard to imagine that a person who has lived for more than 40 years in two lifetimes would be shy and angry whenever marriage is mentioned, blush and heartbeat when thinking of the male protagonist, and hide his face in laughter! When encountering the slightest situation, he would yell and make a fuss. He was once so wise and calm! Perhaps it is the normal state of happiness for a woman to turn into a fool instantly when she encounters love; perhaps, returning to mediocrity is the final destination in life! Okay, occasional gaffes can be understood as rare expressions of true nature/emotions, but it shouldn't feel like this as time goes by and comes back! As for the latter, Su Tianwen is indeed ideal. The boss single-handedly blocked the storms in the court and cut off the interference of family forces, and personally created the "Peach Blossom Valley" for the heroine to live a worry-free life. There are also the boss's earthy love words three meals a day, and the occasional innuendo! Not to mention, living in the kitchen of the back house among the maids and children, being protected from the ups and downs of the world - is this the life that women dream of? However, if you want to read farming stories, Machiavellian plots, etc., I suggest you don't read any further! Let's stop reading Taneda Novel and stop at the reunion between the male and female protagonists. Personally, I think the first part is still worth reading!