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After reading a few chapters, the author had better make the paragraphs shorter. If they are too long, they will make you tired and make you feel like you have abandoned the article

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It feels like a narrative written by me. . . .

I feel like this book is going to be a hit🔥. Although the beginning is quite cheesy, the more I read, the more interesting it becomes! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up

Okay, it's actually fictional history... Okay, okay, as long as the police don't write it well, there's a high chance that this book will become a hit.

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Boy, this article of yours is so confusing~ The paragraphs are too long and the description is awkward, but the advantage is that you can persevere. I'll give you a friendly subscription~

Come on, come on. Every author who writes seriously is great. 😡😡😡😡

I think this book is okay. There aren't too many grammatical errors (in my opinion). But I feel that there is nothing that attracts me (maybe I don't like the size of the book too much?) The following are my own thoughts 1 The first three chapters (mentioned in many book reviews) are very important. Many book friends' impressions of this book come from these three chapters. I think a good imagination is needed here to find out the attraction. Of course, I don't mean that the author's writing is not good,,,,, but I feel like there is no catchy part. For example, why some protagonists travel through time, or what kind of cheats there are, and what interesting settings and relationships are there to attract the attention of book lovers. 2. I think more settings can be added to the characters' personalities and world settings. For example, the characters in "Jiang Ye" are somewhat similar to this book. Modern people traveling through ancient times do not necessarily have to follow the historical flow and break some ancient rules. But I feel that there should also be a collision of ideas created by different environments in modern times and ancient times. The character traits of the protagonist are not reflected in some details. 3 I followed Xiao Qin in the plot and felt that the story needed to be more exciting. It would be more interesting to introduce some detective thinking into the patrol. In the initial martial arts training, I think it can be used as a reference from other novels. The martial arts training can appropriately introduce something similar to scientific cultivation of immortality. It would be better to think about martial arts cultivation using modern thinking. (Of course it's just a suggestion, it doesn't have to be this way. If you have a better idea, the author can tell the story in his own way.) Finally, come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, the paragraphs are so annoying that many readers will probably close the page and leave as soon as they see this paragraph.

I'll keep it for now, I hope the author will work hard!

I used the wrong words in some places,,,

I feel it's awkward to call my teacher Lao Suntou. It doesn't bring any other benefits. It always makes people feel that they don't respect teachers enough.

I'm so impressed. The author is so perseverant that he can insist on writing so much.

The terrifying perseverance has 910,000 words 😥😥😥

I think the title of the author's book is not attractive enough

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

The preface says that the troops of the Shu Kingdom were divided into three groups, with a total of 300,000 troops attacking the other three countries. With only 300,000 troops, they wanted to conquer the mainland. What does this mean? It shows that this continent is not big. What is there to see in such a small continent? I was told to quit in the very beginning, and I was also drunk.

What makes the author persist?