Marvel's Powerful Heroes

To be honest, the plot is rather blunt. The protagonist contacted SHIELD himself and said that Tony was in danger. For two days, SHIELD did nothing to prevent Tony from getting into trouble. When the protagonist contacts SHIELD, he should be aware of being troubled. After all, agents are suspicious of everything. Coulson comes to the protagonist, and the protagonist seems to be afraid of trouble. Why didn't he care about it at that time? The protagonist can't think of it, let alone Teacher Saitama, the teacher is just really not afraid of anything, resulting in a character, not a fool. The protagonist here is like an inconsistent fool, too stiff and embarrassing to watch.

There is an air of arrears in IQ everywhere. I forget whether it took Tony Stark two months or half a year to make a first-generation Mark in a cave. You are so cruel, the author. It was over in a week. Modern industry cannot be used. Besides, Tony is a manual worker.

Before I even finished the first chapter, I was already going to die of poison! At first I thought Pig's Foot had a golden finger that could help him train to awaken the power of One Punch Man. Can! ! ! It turns out that Pigfoot himself copied Saitama's training routine, and inexplicably gained the power of One-Punch Superman. After that, there is a magic ring of Makatei chicken inexplicably. I won't say much more. I just want to ask, did the author use his brain when writing this chapter?

Dear book friends, the protagonist is a One-Punch Man who has the ability to strengthen his body to the limit of the universe. However, the protagonist's brain was originally only as big as an egg, but after the strengthening, it was condensed to the size of Myolie. So, readers who read this book should not read it with their brains in mind, otherwise you will be persuaded to quit in the middle of the chapter and die in the third chapter. If you can persist in reading it, your IQ will definitely degrade to the level of Yuanmou people.

Obviously, this is a self-pleasure article! Obviously, this is a self-pleasure article! Obviously, this is a self-pleasure article! Important things should be said three times!

I'm a novice writer, I've read a few chapters, and the setting instructions are all jumping up and down. When the ring comes out, you should explain where it comes from. You should also consider whether you want to stay away from S. H. I. E. L. D. Or kneel and lick it. I said at the beginning that I didn't want to get involved, but then called, and then ran over to help after being threatened. . . Well, I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind, without carefully considering the rationality of the plot and characters. . . The above is just my personal perception

I have to say that the author's idea of ​​creating a Saitama-style super strong protagonist was quite attractive. Originally, at the beginning of the story, the protagonist was a former agent of SHIELD, which was a poisonous point. However, when he was talking about Tucker, he said that he had nothing to do with SHIELD, which was considered a poisonous point. As a result, the protagonist actually started to develop Shit Tucker as a superhero later on, and gave Black Coal a careful analysis. I can only say that if one piece of shit is not enough, add another piece of shit. The author is really unwilling to poison people to death. The setting of Saitama in this work really discredits One Punch Man.

=-=, Tony in this book is completely written in a different style. Where did this fucking giant baby come from? Except for the setting of high-tech talents, which still exists, the others seem to be imbeciles who will be indecisive when encountering problems.

Once the pit is set up, the bald head will become stronger, and then the whole world will be a superman.

He has the strength of One Punch Man, but it was so difficult to fight Chitauri soldiers, hahahaha

You ruined the image of King Arthur in my heart. The first thing I felt when I saw King Arthur was Saber, but this is a bald head. You succeeded in making me sick.

It sounds good at the beginning, with all kinds of high spirits and no cares, but as soon as the plot begins, she becomes a nanny with a completely shy face. She endures all kinds of difficulties and has to step in to save people.

I read a few chapters and then came here to read it. Not bad. Are there many normal readers? If you criticize the author, I will give it a thumbs up. Continue! Abandon the pit

Wow, I really don't know how the author wrote it down

Sorry, I tried to give up 60% of my normal thinking to read it, but I had no choice but to quit after ten chapters. I was very addicted.

Although the novel is poorly written, I have to say that the author has perseverance. There is not a single good review in the book review section, yet I still persist.

Author, you are confused. If this is a good article, can you please quickly jump over this hurdle? Isn't it a bit too stupid to write the protagonist? Choice? To protect humanity or to leave the earth, the author must have forcibly reduced the IQ of the Avengers as supporting characters. Stark, Captain America, Widow, Hawkeye... Which one is not a battle-hardened agent warrior? Traveling back in time and being fooled by a simulated old Stark? Maybe Captain America was poisoned by Hydra in the previous article, which caused a rift in his soul, but aren't there others around him? It's impossible for the others to follow Captain America without any brains, right? I hope the author can write the following article as soon as possible! Please be sure to update more

The writing is a bit retarded. Anyway, I was persuaded to quit after reading the first and second chapters.