Endless Mode

It seems like no one has read this book! Really, everyone is cursing the collapse of the Seventh Chapter. They seem to think that science is useless. As the saying goes, extraordinary power is just undiscovered science. No clue, really no clue, just forget it if you don't like watching it. But at least everyone hasn't complained about No. 7 Yet, and the promised Shennong didn't show up either, which is a little bit gratifying. However, the environment set in the early stage is just like this. If you don't like it, just leave it, lest the seventh defendant blinds the readers. I just don't know how many people are still reading this book.

From the appearance of Bai Duoer, the flaws were seriously exposed. I think the author probably didn't introduce the protagonist. The following are all interpretations, not the original text. If it is different from the author's meaning, it is normal. When Bai Duo'er discovered that the protagonist might be a soul person, she held the protagonist's hand to the point of breaking it. The description here is that the protagonist didn't believe Bai Duo'er said she had no ill intentions, and looked at her expressionlessly. I couldn't feel the protagonist's anger. Later, Bai Duoer said to the protagonist: I contacted a soul person for you, and he said he wanted to see you. In the evening, the soul master came, taught something, and left. Then the next day, Bai Duoer said, it cost 10 million to invite the soul master, so you owe me 10 million now. Pay back the money, or join my team. The protagonist chooses to join. Here, I don't feel the protagonist's anger. Then Bai Duoer took the protagonist to meet his teammates, and was attacked by a teammate named Luo. I still don't feel the protagonist's anger. Then Bai Duoer called the protagonist out, and when he arrived at the location, he said, I have given you a task, now you go and complete it. I still didn't feel the protagonist's anger. So far, when Bai Duo'er grabbed the protagonist's hand hard, I wanted to crush her. When she killed her first, and when the protagonist was "owed" 10 million, I wanted to cripple her. When the protagonist was attacked by Luo when she met her teammates, I wanted to beat her to death. When Bai Duoer called the protagonist out and then asked the protagonist to complete the task, I wanted to beat her to death. The supporting characters are made to look like villains. As the author, did you miss 60% of the protagonist's inner drama? Or do you think this kind of plot is ordinary and not considered abusing the protagonist? Super poisonous.

The author is not good at writing and cannot control it. The separation between different modes is very serious, except for the academic masters, others just come out to make a fuss.

A time-traveler, it was fine in the past, and he studied alone, but when someone with superpowers appeared, he was abrupt. Inviting him to join the organization is an attitude, and me taking the initiative to join is another attitude. Is this different treatment? And why does a newcomer who doesn't know anything have to take on the mission? Why the sudden temptation? Owe you? Or is it your turn? Have you given benefits? Pig's Knuckle's attitude is almost characterless and personalityless. In short, what we see is a robot with a layout.

The most important thing is that it is too impatient and develops too fast! Now is the time for the protagonist to accumulate knowledge, and then he always gets into fights, provokes grudges, and develops the plot. Does the protagonist have any power now? The reader was discovered by the surname Bai before he could obtain a powerful enough pattern, and was then controlled. The next step is to fight against monsters without any trump card, and then be attacked by others. We can't slow down, let the protagonist become stronger first, and then go out to attract hatred and develop the plot!

The first ten chapters. . . That's the best part. .

Collected it, the idea is very good! As a writer, when I see a good-looking book, I must leave a message to support it. For nothing else. The book has become popular, maybe I can help with a chapter recommendation. Delightful!

I don't understand, can you write novels? Let me just say one thing, if it's not a Wudi-style novel, don't give such an awesome introduction. I don't care what the protagonist becomes in the future. After all, the final achievement is the finale. There is nothing after the finale. I can't see what happens after the finale, so it's not the first time it comes out. It's so awesome. Don't mention this kind of introduction. I don't want to be happy to find this invincible novel. When I open it, I find that it is an upgrade stream. It's just like when you go to Taobao to buy something, you buy a watermelon, but what you get is watermelon seeds and it is said that it will become a watermelon in the future!

When the academic master mode is turned on, there is no detailed explanation of the reading direction in the book. Judging from the fact that reading comics is useless for the protagonist, but the textbook is effective, it is necessary to learn something. Wouldn't the protagonist find some books with less content to make up for it? Like baby and toddler books? Anyway, I'm learning something. The protagonist can also review the past and learn new things (besides, I really don't think the protagonist knows it all). There are also things like maternal care, traffic rules (required for driving license test), labor protection, and public security regulations. These things are not much in content and are in separate volumes. The key is that what he says is meaningful. You can't really say that he read it for fun (although it's not very useful). But collecting 100 copies is just a drop in the bucket. Reading is much better than reading a textbook. The key is to save time and effort.

No more updates? Author, what's wrong with you? 🐷My book is so rubbish but I still insist on it, but you shouldn't give up if your prospects are so good.

It's only been on the shelves for a few days and it's already a waste of my money.

Since I met Bai Duoer, it's not that there is a problem with your plot arrangement, but that there is a problem with the timeline. What is the purpose of constantly pressuring the protagonist to grow up quickly? So we know that the protagonist can definitely grow up and not die young? Even if there is a calculation, what about the protagonist's thoughts? How many days have passed since the entire above schedule was arranged? How old is the protagonist? I wish all the time could happen within a few days. Many things take time to settle and describe. Many novels are like this, as if someone is following you later, the timeline in the novel wishes it all happened within a month. The plot is arranged one after another, dozens or hundreds of chapters have passed, and the time in the novel has not passed long.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, is a joke. He is a top student at level 8, but is as good as Einstein at level 5? Is the protagonist daydreaming? Judging from the protagonist's performance, the eighth-level academic master is probably the protagonist's own imagination. The protagonist is so awesome, but when the critical moment comes, all the pretentiousness is of no use. Muscles determine brains.

Finished reading it in one go I feel that the general plot of this book is good, and the settings of the protagonist and supporting characters are also okay. But it was written too fast, which gave me the feeling that it was just to express the plot or content, but many details were ignored. If the author could slow down, for example, describe the inner activities of the characters, what about the protagonist's views and opinions on some things? For example, in the foreshadowing of the story, the sister suddenly left and became an awakened person? Just like the discord, the city turned to fantasy with supernatural powers? It's too blunt. And the supporting characters shouldn't just call 666, right? Some of the characters introduced at the beginning and the protagonist's college roommates later turned into passers-by who only called Su Shen? What about the connection between the Awakened and real time? Can the background of the story be more detailed or revealed slowly? . All in all, the story is a good one, but the author was a little impatient and I hope the author will take his time. Expect

If you don't mind a new book opening on the seventh day, choose 1; if you mind, choose 2.