The Myriad Worlds Emporium

The introduction is very problematic. It treats old monsters who have lived for thousands and tens of thousands of years as fools.

I can't stand it anymore, it took so long to write about one world. Although it is very funny and the content is very good, the progress is too slow. After reading the Golden Elixir for a day, I don't know if I have to write millions of words, but I still have to say that the progress can be a little faster. Procrastinating. There isn't much written about grocery store, which doesn't quite match the title of the book. It's better to ask Bankai to pretend to be the grocery store owner.

As for the store manager, the store manager doesn't have to run around. He has to be a salted fish to be interesting. He doesn't listen to what's going on outside the window and only sells commercial supplies.

1. I have read the first three chapters of this book and would like to give my personal opinion. The idea of ​​this book is good and it is a systematic novel. The essence of this type of book is that the protagonist is cheap, but as a system, its thinking should be rigid and rigid. At least it should not show active emotions when you first come into contact with the protagonist. This will cover up the protagonist's growth history and make readers feel that where the protagonist goes and what he does is not important. 2. There are too many sensitive words in this book. It is recommended that the author replace or delete them. 3. Persistence. Before writing a book, seek inspiration from the outside world before writing. The effect will be much better. 4. The author does not mind personal opinions.