Quick Travel: Cannon Fodder Turnaround Strategy

A novice author writes a new article without understanding the language of the previous article. Surprising people post book reviews, and the author knows the immature writing. Colors add new words and phrases, and whimsical twists and turns. Thanks to my friends for not being dissatisfied, I will be happy in the following chapters. Thank you, thank you readers, for shamelessly asking for comments and collections. Thank you to all book lovers for your support, thank you!

The overall writing is pretty good, but I don't like Mu Yihan. If the heroine hadn't come through, Liu Xingge would have been beaten to death. He was present, but he allowed Taimei to beat people to death, and then he wanted to dig up some secrets, haha. If a person of the same age is unable to prevent the crime, he can also choose to secretly call the police. Mu Yihan is obviously a capable person, but he condones the crime. This guy has a bad character.

The overall writing is quite good, but I have a small suggestion. The writing of the teacher in "The Scumbag's Counterattack" is a bit overdone. The teacher-student relationship is immoral. Although the soul of the heroine here is an adult, she is not in the eyes of others.

Is there a male protagonist? I hope it will be a story with a male protagonist.

The idea is good, but the writing is not good enough. Thank you for your support, author🌹