Our Two-Dimensional World

The sound of a land shark biting is a bite~

By the way, why does Oscar sell tofu, not sausage?

Who is the protagonist? Why do I feel that Ye Feng is the slave of the system elf😅

There are many problems with this novel. Question 1: There are too many chapters written in Douluo Continent. The protagonist is invincible there, so what is he still doing in that plane? Question 2: There are too many words about water. Many chapters of Douluo Continent are copied from the original work, but with some changes and the addition of the protagonist. Question 3: If you bring anime characters to class, won't others be suspicious? Even callplay can't be like this; Question 4: Tokisaki Kurumi is the most evil elf, and his previous memories have not been erased by the system, so how can he be so easy to follow this protagonist; Question 4: Have you seen any system popular novels where the system elf is as big as Ziyou; Question 5: The protagonist said to the heroine of the original novel and asked her to follow him, and the heroine just followed him. This is too casual; Question 6: The two plane world authors started from the beginning, so it is easy to see that this is a low word count , and since readers can search for this book, it means that they have read similar books, and those who like to read this kind of books have not watched some two-dimensional animation, and it is also the most popular date battle this year, so from this point of view, it can be seen that this is a waste of words.

I can't stand the previous Douluo. Damn, Titled Douluo is so useless. The protagonist has the strength of Titled Douluo but can't use it. What the hell is that?

Make a date for a fight, make a date for a fight, if you don't want a fight, just send me the blade

At first, I thought I could hold on. . Until now, my body is rotten and my soul is broken, I finally know that I am still too naive. . This is extremely poisonous! !

First of all, this is not even as good as a primary school student's composition. The primary school student's composition at least has double quotation marks. And I have just read a few chapters. It is obviously a sign that it is about to collapse. And newcomers should not use it if they can't master the invincible essay. After all, there are so many settings, and a reasonable explanation needs to be given. The writing style is not enough to set off the feeling of "there is no opponent ahead". It's embarrassing as hell, and it's fun to make it nondescript.

By the way, I'll finish the first few chapters, thank you.

. . . . . I just finished reading Douluo Dalu and I finally couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

No way, I forced myself to read Chapter 14 and already wanted to give up three times. I couldn't read it with my brain at all.

Come on and update. It still looks good, although there is something wrong with it.

Please update soon. I want to see it. Can you update it quickly, or post a few more pictures? . .

How many soul rings does the protagonist need to have at the beginning? It's extremely poisonous. If you can't resist it, take the first step.

I just wanted to complain but was restricted, so angry! My chapter says!

Directly to Chapter 6? What about 1 to 5?

I can't bear it in the first chapter, it's too poisonous, I'm trying to persuade him to quit!

It's not that I'm just thinking about what to do if a boy is drawn in the lottery that day, whether to stay with me or not. . .

Let's open a new book. This time, I'll save more manuscripts, so it will take a little longer, because firstly, there are a lot of things this semester, and secondly, because I want to save more manuscripts, and I will still use this author's name when I open a new book.

I couldn't hold on to the first chapter... It's like the settings I set for myself in the little notebook when I was in the second grade of middle school... I also wrote several similar chapters... Face-palming (in the little notebook when I was in the second grade of middle school)

Wouldn't it be nice to change the title of the book to Beautiful Girl Summoning System?

The martial spirit at the beginning seems to be a poisonous point. It's too open at the beginning.

Author, are you sure that the protagonist is weak at the beginning?

The plot is messy, the word count is low, it's a mess, and it's a badass.

So this book is about eunuchs?

If the author makes a new update, recommendation votes won't be a problem. I'll give you two basically every day. I hope the author will be more like him!

Is the Titled Douluo in the early stage so rubbish? , Can't even beat a Titan Giant Ape, it says don't rubbish, can you show some respect for your work and understand Douluo Continent?

My body, which is invulnerable to all poisons, cannot bear it

Author: Do you still have too many soul rings ?

Except for the pig's feet, the other characters following the pig's feet are all female, and even the Pokémon are female.