Invincible Entertainment

It seems that the author does not understand the word "invincible" deeply enough.

When I see a protagonist writing n new songs in a short period of time (perhaps within a few days, or within a month), I think it's so damn fake, and generally I can't stand it, it's too much.

Also, the development is a bit fast, unless you want the protagonist to develop into film and television. Otherwise it will be difficult to write the next issue!

This corner is a bit sharp, I need to get off

The first chapter says that the age of the protagonist in this parallel world is 25. In the second chapter, when introducing himself during the game, he says 23, which is inconsistent.

If you have any opinions about this book, or if there is anything unreasonable in the book, you are welcome to raise it. I will read your comments, 🤝