Red Dragon King

What should I say~I have read the latest chapter~The overall feeling is... A bit~confusing~and some chapters in the middle give too much space to passers-by A, B, C and D~It seems a bit watery... Others are currently within the acceptable range... I personally prefer to read~muscles~obscene development~strong pretense...

It started out well, but ended up returning to Earth.

It's a very good novel. As expected, you can't read all the reviews when reading a book.

Will we be able to meet the protagonist's dragon-body mother later? Dragon mother? Also, the protagonist's power system is a bit messy, right? He is a giant dragon himself, so there is definitely a way to strengthen the dragon in the reincarnation space, right? Now this is a ninjutsu or a dance technique, which completely deviates from the protagonist's race. The protagonist can strengthen his bloodline in the reincarnation space. Moreover, it is mentioned in the introduction that the protagonist's sister is a reincarnation. When the protagonist returns, the protagonist's sister instinctively pays attention to whether the protagonist has a reincarnation watch. How come there is nothing wrong with the protagonist's sister in the later period?

The poison warlock released a wave of poison.

I don't know why a dragon needs to perform air dance. Can't you fly? Or is it easier? ? ? The key is that Long Fei is a kind of instinct, a kind of talent, and some messy settings are added.

The first one was okay at first, but after reading dozens of pictures, I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that the protagonist was desperately trying to force ninjutsu on the protagonist. You have to figure out your positioning. You are a real dragon. If you dig into your own power system, you can run rampant in the multiverse. As a result, you are desperately trying to force ninjutsu. What about Raikiri Chidori? Are you sure you have a big fireball? Raikiri turns his arm into a knife, and Chidori uses a laser sword. Then you might as well let the protagonist return to the earth to get a super machete, transform into a red dragon prototype, and lift a machete weighing several hundred kilograms to kill people. I remember that there is this in the early novel Beast Blood Boil. The super monster Fire Crane transforms into its own body and rolls up two super machetes to fight hand to hand.

Why do people who have traveled through time miss home? Wouldn't it be nice to travel through time with Jackie Chan? Even a jackal or an ogre will do! It's not bad to enslave goblins or something and become a chief, not to mention that a dragon can build a big kingdom when it reaches adulthood, which is no better than being an ordinary person.

Dragon➕Goldfinger lottery, it feels pretty good👍! But the reincarnation space feels very redundant. In addition to constantly traveling through time, completing tasks, and constantly gaining points, the protagonist does not dare to use the reincarnation space to strengthen his body, and the protagonist cannot practice human skills! The reincarnation space is specifically targeted at humans, so the role of the reincarnation space in improving the protagonist's strength is minimal!

Why can't we just write about dragons? I insist on adding a world of reincarnation and leave it to those messy hodgepodges.

Your poor writing style is not worthy of the number of words you write. Thanks to you, Red Dragon has the most words.

Creativity is okay. At least the introduction is very attractive to me. What I wrote earlier is okay, after all, the number of words is so small that I can't read it clearly. As soon as I saw the two hundred bill, I couldn't bear it. There is no main line, it just feels like a hammer in the east and a pond in the west, like writing whatever comes to mind. A real hodgepodge. It feels like the more I look at it, the more chaotic it becomes. The expression is very unclear and there is no power system. There is no main quest to get stronger or anything like that. It doesn't necessarily mean getting stronger or something. It just feels confusing. It's just an event written in a lot of places and there is no follow-up. Write a little here and a little there.

The will of the earth is so awesomeb that it can break down the barriers of other worlds, so why the hell do they need to be upgraded😥😥

Originally, the two worlds of earth and magic were actually quite good, but the author insisted on making fairy tales, martial arts, and reincarnation, which confused me. And I said that people who read fantasy dragon novels generally don't like fantasy fairy tales and other such content.

Lord Red Dragon, the Imperial Army asked me to bring you a message.

Is the author using this novel to practice writing? It feels very immature in every aspect, not like a veteran.

I haven't read this book yet, but I didn't want to read it when I saw the introduction. The introduction shows that this book has many topics that can be written about, and because of this, it is likely to create a situation: everything is available, but nothing can be written well. To write this kind of hodgepodge well requires a very perfect outline and plot control skills, but the author seems to be a newbie.

Who is the heroine? It's so confusing. Is it the sister? Shi Baiyun? Is it Saturday?

I'm convinced that I can persist until now despite being so miserable.

Can't write yet! Next book? !