
Lamarck Game
拉马克游戏
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- Completed
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- 2.6M Words
- Genre
- Suspense Mystery
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Detective Mystery
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- 4y ago
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System! the Flow of All Heavens! Black Technology! No Bragging, No Blackmail! a Large Collection of Special Masterpieces!
Bookworm's book list, welcome to taste it!
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No Male Protagonist Has IQ
I'm tired of romances with strong women, and it seems that when it comes to emotional scenes, the characters fall apart and the plot can be illogical. A plot without a male protagonist is relatively less insulting to the reader's IQ. New books are updated from time to time Recommend "I want to be an empress, who is against it and who is for it?"
Miao Miao's Bookcase (Suspense and Supernatural)
Female channel suspenseful and supernatural novels. I recommend some supernatural novels that you like. If there are novels that you like, please like them and add them to your book list. Thank you. If the children have favorite books, you are welcome to recommend them. If you read them, they will be added.
[Strong Book List] There Is a Shortage of Books, but Here Are Some Good Books, Highly Recommended
The function of the book list is to recommend works that everyone likes and is interested in. I, alone, often have the eye for discovery and can find it for everyone. Every work can be judged in terms of material selection, theme, structure, writing skills, and text. With these analyses, it is natural to select good works. If the author makes serious revisions, it will be even more rare. Such works will be highly recommended. Let me talk about the recommended genres of this book, including fa
All Kinds of Strong Women, Dual Business Online
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🔥The Most Popular Suspense Work🔥
It has connotation, is not a noob, and is a good-looking suspense article. Good reviews on books are even more exciting, including new works by newcomers and old classics. 🍀Seedlings are looking forward to your attention. 🌴The old article looks forward to your review.
Arbor's Bookstore
This book only asks for good-looking ones, no restrictions on types, seedlings are welcome to poke. ♥♥♥♥ Finding a good book is like finding a good friend, and it's also like looking for My lifelong partner, looking at each other with a somewhat critical eye With. If you choose it, you will never leave it for the rest of your life. Those books will accompany you. How many lonely and long nights have we gone through, lonely and long outside When we are lonely, or when we encounter unpleasant thi
League of Faultfinders
Everyone has different tastes in reading books. Most of the books on the book list are read at the beginning and then discarded. However, I also found a lot of books on some book friends' books that I personally like very much. Some of them are even so bad that they have been missed by many book friends. I feel deeply regretful about them, so I wrote a book list, hoping that more book friends can see these gems. However, taste is a very personal thing, and people have different opinions. I only
There Is No CP for the Female Protagonist, and There Is No Novel for the Male Protagonist.
I am not sure if anyone can see this list of non-CP books that I like.
Stew Randomly. . ? . . . . . . .
Male videos don't have a female protagonist or there is a female protagonist who doesn't have a strong sense of presence🀄Female videos. 🐶 Either there is no male protagonist, 🐕 or it's a one-on-one story 🐭. They are all my favorite heroine stories, 🐱 serialized ones, 🐀🐁completed ones, 🐢classic ones, cultivating immortals, 🐰🐇🐓interstellar online games, etc. That I personally think are good-looking. 🐏🐑🐥🐦🐤🐣I am impatient to follow the article, 🐺🐃🐄🐮🐗most of them are completed articles, 🐚🐙🐳🐋🐟🐠🐜🐛🐌🐾 Th
Reading Experience
Memories will continue to fade away, and many novels are too thin to be afraid of being forgotten as I read them, so I want to write down those novels. As for those wasted years, I decided to complain about them in my heart and forget about them.
Ye Yu Bookstore
Life is alive, Everyone needs a helping hand sometimes. No one can be glorious forever, No one can ever end in despair. As the saying goes: A fence has three stakes, Three Gangs of Men. Don't always sigh, The world is hot and cold, love is thinner than paper, There are still many people in this world who repay kindness. When you have the ability, Give a helping hand; When there are difficulties, Someone must solve the urgent need. Give others hope, That is to give yourself hop
The Great God's Book, We Don't Want to Make an Appointment, It Focuses on Seedlings
A bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, we have all kinds of books, specially created for you who are picky!
This Is an Ordinary Book List
Science fiction, fantasy, games, two-dimensional Tweet daily articles, funny articles, and magical plots. Reasoning, Cthulhu style, with a complete world view.
Favorite Book List (Female Protagonist)
There are all kinds of genres. Most of the ones Xixi likes to recommend are stories with female protagonists, because I don't like harem stories, and stories with male protagonists that are obviously female protagonists but take up a lot of space (the same goes for male protagonists (ー̀εー́)) SO you may find that 90% of the stories in the recommendation list have less emotional scenes and less male protagonists~
Female Protagonist Without Cp
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Treasure article! ∑(°Д°)
Look what I found~ It's a treasure article! It's really rare to see this type of article in online articles. I caught the cover at first glance (completely different from other covers) in the limited-free recommendation. When I saw the introduction, I knew I must add it to my bookshelf! Although my IQ is worrying, I am still addicted to this kind of brain-burning mystery. In fact, when I read other online articles, I just glance at the plot and pass the time. In contrast, for this kind of articles, you must read every detail slowly, and even need to go back to the first few pages to read it again. Even if you subscribe to it, it is well worth the money! Great value for money! You can definitely use two or three brushes in the future! This is definitely not the current mainstream fast food article. Readers who have read it will definitely understand what I mean!
The journey from being a passer-by to becoming a fan
So... Let's start with a dark wave [Black] 1. Shortcomings in character creation 2. The heroine setting is the biggest flaw, Wei Zhong Er, this is the first time I have seen someone calling herself "Yiko". The key point is that Baidu does not have such a title. Narcissistic, arrogant, and arrogant, generally unlimited streaming still requires a bit of excitement and survival feeling. Even the protagonist of the life game cannot be relaxed and freehand as if he is having fun! It's as if the heroine knows that she has the script and is blessed by the heroine's aura of immortality. It makes me really want the heroine to die once, so that she can experience the hardships of life. Taking pity on the beauty, you can obviously be the king of solo, why bring a rookie to get points? After all, you should be a diamond if you match up with your teammates. Bringing up a cute new girl... Isn't she really Ji Lao? ? 3. In each volume, there is always a character who is very pleasing to the heroine, but very unpleasant to me The following is the review of the volumes.
[Doujin Contest] 0000 Preface: My Self (Part 2)
She just shook her head gently, wiped away my tears with the side of her clean palm, and then wiped away her own. The wounds all over his body were healing slowly at a speed visible to the naked eye. I instantly understood that she was also one of the so-called supermen in the world. Looking at my gaze, she smiled bitterly. "Thank you." I tried my best to smile back. I think that expression must be ugly. On that day, the capital fell to a major "natural disaster". The entire urban area of Nancheng, including Chongwen, Xuanwu, Fengtai and half of Chaoyang District, almost completely disappeared, and 80% of the buildings in the remaining areas collapsed. The final death toll exceeded 10 million. ———————————— After that, I was taken to the hospital by her, but I only found a temporary emergency center after dark. And her subsequent disappearance certainly did not attract anyone's attention in such a catastrophe. There followed a gap of two years, during which many things happened which need not be repeated at this time. During this period, the Chinese once again miraculously established a new capital city between Beijing and Tianjin. Although the scale is less than one-tenth of the original size, it fully possesses all the functions of a city. The university we just entered is the top music school in the country and has been rebuilt almost as it was before. The most interesting thing is that she and I, my roommate Lan Feng, lived together again after two years and strangely became friends. For ordinary people, charity and kindness will become a burden on friendship. But I understand that as long as there is no mutual distaste for this kind of thing, being carelessly pulled down by the benefactor and trying to get close is the best way to maintain the relationship, so I did it. In fact, Lan Feng has almost no friends. She is very beautiful, and her tall nose and eyes, although not too big or attractive, exude a kind of majesty that is rare among women. She often wears a plain blue dress that makes her look aloof. She has a lot of personality and is actually very smart. In my opinion, the reason why she has no friends is just because there is a subtle sense of disharmony in her behavior. For example, I obviously had a great time playing badminton with me in private, but I always found excuses to avoid various group activities in physical education class. Although her straightforward personality is more fun with people of the opposite sex than those of the same sex, she always behaves like she likes her as long as she has contact with her, and is indifferent to all boys, even if they just come to chat for a while. She is obviously... Very afraid of loneliness, but even if a classmate with a similar temperament wants to get acquainted with her, she will be extremely polite and keep a gentleman's distance. To put it bluntly, it is the feeling that a person is forced to carry something. But due to the lack of minimal communication, even this went unnoticed except by me. None of us mentioned anything about her personality, and most importantly about her superhuman powers. The way we interact with each other is just like her and other classmates who seem to be quite cold. We usually don't talk much, but occasionally we go to the cafeteria, piano room, or buy something together. In anyone's eyes, the way of communication between a very popular school beauty like me, who smiles at everyone, and a super cold beauty like Kaede, seems extremely ordinary. In other words, it's a complementarity. My petiteness, big eyes, long eyelashes, and doll-like face contrast with her uprightness and nobility. However, in fact, because we value each other quite a lot, a relationship of considerable mutual trust has evolved unknowingly and unspokenly over the course of a year. It was a small opportunity to finally get to know the other side of her world. On Maple's birthday, I gave her a small piece of cake. It's not a whole birthday cake, just a small piece of watermelon-flavored cake. The kind where you cut a corner off the whole piece and sell it alone will not cost more than twenty yuan. When I gave it to her, I didn't mention her birthday at all. I bought a lot of things in large and small bags and threw a box to her. At the same time, he also brought chocolate bars and beef jerky to the other two children in the same dormitory. They are also very cheap but are also their favorite brands and flavors. What the hell kind of opportunity is this? Many people will be curious. In fact, Feng never revealed his birthday to anyone. I took a peek during the entrance physical examination, and that was even before she saved her. At that time, it was mainly out of the habit of getting to know the people around me who might interact with me as soon as possible. Of course, I also paid attention to various information about the other two children in the same dormitory. At the same time, watermelon flavor is also her favorite. Of course she never revealed this, and probably no one except me even knew about it. And how do I know? If you try to notice and remember what the people you live with eat every day for an entire year, you'll find that it really isn't that difficult to determine. I handsomely threw the three bags of food into the hands of the three of them, turned around and ran to the toilet. For communicating with Feng, I know this is enough. When he turned around, he only caught a glimpse of Zhang Yang and Yin Xiyi on the two modular beds by the window, happily jumping around on the bed like hamsters. Lan Feng showed some surprise when he opened the box. "Qu Yun, I have something to tell you." After a while, Feng's voice came from the toilet cubicle. "Say it." "Right here?" "Then where else to go? The dormitory building is about to be locked. Should we hold hands like a couple and walk the campus boulevard at night?" Speechless for a few seconds. "I've never mentioned it. What happened at that time... Was more than three years ago." She started to talk anyway. "You must have taken this as my understanding, or you just don't want to think about the scary memories." "You actually just said it like that?" She smiled bitterly. "Let me ask you, what kind of person am I in your heart?" I got to the point. "You speak more directly than me, and you don't shy away from the emotional embarrassment of ordinary people at all." "Uh, hehe..." After a brief pause, she thought and spoke slowly: "You... If necessary, lie like breathing. A girl with no morals, no sense of justice, and no sense of responsibility. A bit of a middle-class, a bit out of line, extremely arrogant in her heart, and looking down on everyone in the world. I have to feel sincerely sad for the person who marries you in the future..." "Hey! Are you here to be friends with me to save the world?" "But, the emotional intelligence is amazing, and he is so careful, but he is hard to dislike... He looks so confident, and he is sincere when he treats people well. He is an idealist who is unwilling to accept the status quo, as if he is eager to get some proof or change something. In order to get himself. The kind of guy who wants spiritual things at any cost, it doesn't matter whether he has to pay for his own life or someone else's... Hey, even if you want to save the world, you can't do it..." As a child with a strong sense of justice, Feng's last sentence was a bit sad. But I knew very well that there was something else in it. I was slightly surprised to hear this small and unexpected confession. She actually knows me so well? If you really want to compare, my disguise in front of others is much better than hers. While I was inadvertently paying too much attention to her, was she also paying close attention to me? Without being discovered by me? "You must be wondering how it's possible for me to know so much about you, right?" "Ah... I'm actually surprised that you can speak coherent sentences with so many words." "If I said this was my superpower, would you believe it?" … "Xin," just listening to her voice convinced me of my judgment: "Although I am very touched, that is not what I want to ask... Do you know the idea of Social Darwin?" "Should human society survive the fittest like nature? The one that is widely criticized for being promoted by racism?" "In my opinion, those are all wrong interpretations and prejudices," I took a long breath and organized my words: "The essence of Social Darwin's idea should not be the criterion for judging which is better or worse, but should focus on the point that 'society needs to evolve'." After a pause, I didn't hear any questions, and then I continued to explain: "The most perfect world in my mind is not a world where everyone can be happy, and everyone gets what they need without having to endure injustice. If it really becomes like that, curiosity, thirst for knowledge, sense of honor, enterprising spirit, creativity, desire, dreams, fun... Human nature itself is very valuable. In contrast, a world with clear class distinctions where everyone has equal opportunities to climb up due to their own talents and efforts or fall down due to their own incompetence and laziness is healthier, right? It's better to be a hard-working person than a happy pig." "So you want to create a world where people with talent and hard work have the opportunity to climb up, kick the happy pigs down, and then go see the scenery at the top?" "The one who knows me is Miss Lan." "Excuse me, I disagree. It's not about conforming to the world, but asking the world to conform to you. Has anyone ever said that you are arrogant?" "No one who cares about me has said this. To be honest, I think death is much better than living a mediocre life." "No one would think you are mediocre! Hey, you did it all by yourself... Do you think you can do it?" "It's all about human effort." "Then, the point is, why do you think I can help you?" "For more than three years, I have done some research." "If it took three years to find out something, I'm afraid there would be less than half of the people alive in the world now." "Half like me?" "... Forget it..." Feng sighed helplessly and said, "Why are you mentioning it now?" "I wasn't ready before." "Prepare for what? Why prepare?" "I'm going to convince you to help me. After all, the three views are different, and I need to consider the feasibility. The reason for making preparations? Well... Because it is very important to me." I paused for a moment and said the last sentence emphatically: "Join, The Lamarck Game." … "And you concluded that I would help you?" "Just know me well enough... Like, now." "It's a curse..." "In your opinion." There was a longer silence, so long that I thought Lan Feng had quietly escaped. There was sweat on my forehead. Even on the day of the earthquake, I had never been so nervous. It wasn't until a long sigh that my heart dropped. I know I succeeded. "For a guy like you who will never regret any decision he makes in his whole life, I guess there is no need for more persuasion." "Natural." "When you are ready, sleep on this pillow. You must know that you will never be able to mention that name here again." A pure white card made of something between metal and plastic was handed over from the gap under the compartment. The card is slightly larger than a bank card, and its surface feels almost matte. It's all in one piece, without any markings or features. "Thank you, really..." I took the card with trembling hands, and countless thoughts flashed through my mind. Is this what it turns out to be? Sure enough, it is still very different from what I imagined. "I'm sorry, I really shouldn't be like this... I want companions, it's so hard and lonely..." "I know." The sound of flushing water "Lan Feng?" "Huh?" When she heard my voice suddenly coming from above, she raised her head in surprise. "Happy birthday." I struggled to stand on the toilet stall board and forced out a very charming smile from the bottom of my heart.
Dbq... Although I like the setting of this article very much, but 😭😭😭 I really can't stand Lily (whether it is light Baili or not). Pure no cp is acceptable, but the Lily in this article is too obvious for me... Goodbye, sorry
I claim to be really uncomfortable, and it doesn't fit the heroine's character. The plot is ok, but the characterization is poor. I hope there won't be a self-proclaimed Yiko in the future. It feels too pretentious.
[Xiaoyun said] What kind of story do you want to see?
Others are playing supporting roles, but most of Xiaoyun's supporting characters have their own meanings and will not accept supporting roles for the time being. However, for the time being, this is still a book with an infinite flow cover. Each chapter will play in a different world (story type). So why not tell me what type and theme of game background environment you like to see? Dead Rising? Ghost story? World of immortality? Interstellar development? Dark fairy tale? Although I can't guarantee that I can directly arrange what you want into the story, but let's give Xiaoyun some interesting ideas. Maybe one day you will see a scene tailor-made for you www emmmm~ The second chapter has just been released, so the following stories and games will not feature specific movie and game novels, but will be completely original backgrounds from beginning to end. The seemingly bizarre world actually has a rigorous structure. Don't be dissatisfied, anyway, other unlimited streaming movies are either poorly written fixed scenes or movies you have never heard of, right? Www, maybe there will be some surprises here (ω< )★ Thank you for supporting Xiaoyun. If you have any ideas, please reply here~ Let's roll around~
How to put it this way, this book will definitely be able to retain readers who like reasoning and other aspects, but for me, it is a pity that the impression is not good. I just want to relax when I read novels recently, so I don't use too much brain. The biggest focus is on the writing style, plot, setting and character description. It needs to be comfortable to read, and the direct perception of a book is these things. Now that I have seen the beginning of the fourth game, I feel a little uncomfortable. It is not that the plot is not good, the brain-burning design is not good, or the world view is not set well, but the other most obvious, prominent, and direct writing and character description designs have affected my perception. Although I don't know what the author's previous living environment and psychological condition were like, this book was also written two years ago, around 2020, but based on the parts I have seen so far, I feel a bit out of touch with the times. First of all, the name design related to levels, organization names, etc. Is undoubtedly a bit difficult for me. It is really not suitable for the environment in 2022. However, I personally think it is okay for the protagonist to call himself a character. It is very unique and has good reviews. The second is the writing style. Since I have not studied the relevant issues in depth, I will not show off my shame and will only talk about the direct impression. Overall, it's actually okay. This is because I personally have a high degree of acceptance of special things, and the struggle passages are very attractive, but for most people, it's not "Internet text" and their minds can't move. The last part is the part that I don't want to accept. A relatively simple summary is that the description and design of the characters are really uncomfortable. I read some comments and I can understand that the author wants to describe a real world, not too Mary Sue. I have also thought about this, but this is the problem. Generally speaking, I classify this situation as a literary youth The category is overcorrected and makes people feel very unreasonable. In other words, if you, the author, had related descriptions before, it would be more reasonable, but no, this is a problem with the description and design; Also, the image design of individual characters is very, very uninteresting and boring. Is it still the same problem as above, is it reasonable? Unreasonable; is it distinctive? In fact, it's not very distinctive; can it make people's eyes shine? It doesn't feel that good. (In my personal opinion, the author's design of your characters is a bit like shooting arrows first and then drawing targets. You first set up a few characters that feel relatively real, and then designed them according to the plot outline. This is just my personal guess, and I may not have guessed 90% of the time correctly. If I offend, please forgive me.) For example, the design is very smart, very strategic, and very experienced. A conceited person, his behavior is too one-sided to describe through words, because it is necessary to highlight the characteristics and add some complexity of human nature. The detailed description is not enough, which will lead to a sense of fragmentation. In addition, the text description removes the first level that can filter out 90% of people: "observation ability", resulting in this person's somewhat The ability is beyond ordinary people, but in some places it feels like "that's it?", But it feels a bit disconnected; in addition, the character Ren in the early stage has obviously endured a lot of torture, and he is still the older person and predecessor of the protagonist, but he behaves like a junior high school student with some mental problems, who does not understand the basic principles, lacks thinking ability and logical thinking, and does It was a shock at first sight, as if her past and her days in the veteran regiment had turned her into half a "domestic animal". Maybe it was because I didn't have enough experience. After all, I did have too little experience and low emotional intelligence. The above comments were something I came up with slowly. After all, I still had too little research on the current chapters, and they were just my first impressions. Finally, what is your opinion about the author, about the "Mary Sue" issue. If "Mary Sue" means "Long Aotian" to you, the protagonist is not actually a "Mary Sue"; but if you want to express to readers that the protagonist's "protagonist halo" is relatively small, and you just selected a unique and powerful character to tell her story, then there is a problem. , Because she is indeed the protagonist of her story, and she does have the "protagonist aura", which is talent, background, and experience. "Those who can achieve great things cannot do it without great wisdom, courage, and great fortune." There is no need to weaken the independence of the protagonist. It has been designed like this, so why should we feel uncomfortable? Can the writing style be improved to make readers accept it, or do you, the author, prefer a sense of immersion? I rarely post long reviews, and after writing them I feel that they are not very rigorous and have some omissions. If there are any mistakes, please point them out.
It's a surprising book. The IQ of the whole story is quite online, and the protagonist's IQ is even more online. Although it is a bit brain-burning, it is very refreshing to read. There are many books now involving cheating, big cheating and small cheating, many categories, but no matter what kind of cheating, what I value is how you use it. Third-rate novels give people the impression that only cheating is powerful, and the characters are like puppets, with no sense of existence. What surprises me most about this book is that from beginning to end, I feel that the heroine's thinking dominates everything. She allocates the resources and abilities at her disposal very rationally and skillfully. Even things that have nothing to do with hanging can become her winning hand. In addition, this book is a light book, which is really great. After reading books for so long, it is not easy to find a novel that suits my taste when my taste is becoming more and more picky and biased. Finally, let's talk about the recent plot. Although for the character of Zhang Yang, I can feel that the author is trying to talk about human weakness or something, but the protagonist's character is to be accurate, principled but not a virgin, and decisive. Now that Zhang Yang has achieved this, there is really no need to linger and tangle anymore. Be decisive, otherwise the character will collapse if this continues.
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Good book, but there is still a lot of room for improvement
After reading more than two hundred chapters, I will leave my thoughts first. First of all, it is a really good book. It has great ideas, rich settings, and interesting characters. But there is still a big problem: the author's lack of control over words, too much information and too little description. Sometimes you can see a lot of comments saying that you don't understand a certain way of the character. If there is a better description, wouldn't it be easier for readers to understand? For example, in order to explain Qu Yun's attitude and behavior towards Zhang Yang, the author wrote several paragraphs to explain the rationality of these treatments. The general idea is what kind of character Qu Yun is, what kind of atmosphere are the people in their dormitory like, and how do they feel about Zhang Yang. However, such a dry [information] is not as good as [describing] a short period of specific events from that year, such as Zhang Yang coming to school from his hometown and bringing an apple to everyone in the dormitory, Qu Yun's reaction, how others reacted, and how Zhang Yang responded to their reactions. Instead of [telling] readers that Zhang Yang is a "poor person with strong self-esteem", it is far better to [describe] the shoes she wears or how she responds to someone else's words. Instead of telling readers that Qu Yun once felt warmth from Zhang Yang, it is far better to describe what exactly makes her feel warm. I think the author sometimes feels aggrieved and explains the character's character. This is indeed reasonable. Why do many readers not understand it? But this is because telling is far less powerful than description. A situation is always more empathetic than an analysis. A lot of space is used to talk about the author's weaknesses, but this does not mean that I think the advantages of this book are not great or numerous. It is just that I love it deeply and blame it deeply. The above weaknesses are entirely technical problems, which can be solved with practice. However, the advantages of this book are unique and precious, and they are enough to prove that the author is talented. If this talent can be fully developed with the help of better writing skills, it will be a good thing for the author and a blessing for the readers~ Will continue to read~
To be honest, it's a bit sad to see some people dislike the heroine, The Virgin. I generally don't like reading this type of writing, because it's basically full of naked human evil, and people will do whatever it takes to survive. What attracts me to read this book is precisely the rigorous logic and the little warmth that the heroine can retain in the cruel reality. It is undeniable that the first priority in life is to ensure one's own survival. This is true human nature, and the basis of human nature is animality. But after all, in the long process of human evolution, in order to ensure the reproduction of the race, family love and love were born, laws were established, and morality was created. These were actually all to protect the weaker members of the race from surviving. Therefore, the vast majority of parents are willing to sacrifice their lives for their children, and soldiers shed their blood for the sake of the country. I believe that most people are ordinary people. 99% Of those who enter similar scenes in this book are "Sister Ren". They are humble and cowardly, coerced by the strong, and pushed out to be cannon fodder. At this time, most people will definitely hope to have someone like the heroine to save and lead them to live a better life. It is undeniable that readers are generally willing to lead themselves into the strong, but as a strong, retain a little compassion for the weak (of course it is not without a bottom line, the heroine has her own standards.) Helping the other party when you can, sometimes it may be a kind of self-rescue. The heroine of this book looks very good so far, and the scale is appropriate.
The three laws of Lamarck's game: energy is immortal, time is irreversible, and life is irreversible I have been wanting to try to draw it for a long time, but I have put it off until I am almost finished the book, so it is too late🐶 (I tried my best to draw it like this😂, if you have any comments, please feel free to comment👻)
Fan pictures
Zhen Cheng and the Doll - I said I wanted to post it here too, so I did.
Why is there a no cp label for Lily when it's obviously Lily? Hey, why didn't the author tell us in advance? This is very misleading to readers. When I saw the second half, an emotional drama suddenly appeared. I wanted to give up but couldn't. The sunk cost makes people think 💔
[Doujin Contest] 0000 Preface: Myself (Part 1)
People always want what they don't have. But what you have is not cherished. I agree with this and appreciate it. It is precisely because of endless desires that civilization, society, and every individual can develop and progress. It is a pity to miss the beauty around you, but nothing is as important as pursuing the unknown and moving forward. If you miss it, you can still look for the same, similar or better one. And once you stop moving forward, what you have now will become what you can only have forever. For those who are happy to be content and those conservatives who stick to the rules, is this really enough for you? As a human being, are you really willing to be this ordinary? Take myself as an example, in the eyes of others I am a genius. Excellent IQ and EQ can help me learn faster and deal with people more easily. My exquisite facial features and petite figure show me that I am much younger than my actual age, which also makes it easier for people to like me and want to protect or... Possess me. However, if you want to truly succeed, be recognized, or even make a contribution in any field, then just like any ordinary person, you still need hard work and opportunities. Because there are too many geniuses in this world. I hate leaving my reputation to luck, and I hate mediocrity even more, so much so that I am deeply tired of myself and this world. I want more, more more more. It's not that I'm dissatisfied, it's not that I don't know how to cherish it. Rather, Qiuji devotes his talents to a certain cause throughout his life, but in the end he has to rely on opportunities to write his final conclusion. This kind of life is too boring and too unfree. Can the world really be so boring? If being a genius is not enough to control your own destiny, how about being a superman? —————— There are supermen in this world. This is a fact known to everyone. But like most ordinary people, I never thought I would have the chance to meet a Superman. I never thought that I would be saved, and I never thought that the other person would be someone close to me. The catastrophe happened on the day I checked in as a freshman at the beginning of my freshman year. Those who have experienced it and are still alive must still remember it clearly. The leading music school in the country, a high-end dormitory with four people to a room, and a few cute roommates. To the peaceful daily life, everything seems so perfect, but in my heart, I feel like there is something missing in my daily life. Everyday life is like daily life, cooking young desires, ambitions, aspirations and dreams like warm water. Until the years go by and the heat is just right, the vulgarity and numbness that settles down to the bottom of the pot leave us, the walking dead, for the rest of our lives. Most of the time, I'm not a sentimental girl. The reason why I think of this is because when she and I went shopping at the school gate supermarket to fill the new room, my tired routine was broken for the first time in my life. At that moment, amid the painful and terrifying natural disasters in the eyes of the world, the world in my eyes began to become colorful. We are not talkative people, and we are not very familiar with each other, so we walked side by side every sentence. The disaster happened at this moment. Without any warning, a voice that could be heard for hundreds of miles suddenly exploded in the clear sky in the ordinary afternoon. We raised our heads together with the unknown passers-by around us, and did not see the source of the sound. But that was obviously the work of Superman, and no amplification technology could achieve such a shock. It was a gloomy and arrogant young male voice. He first roared in a language that no one understood, until the last sentence turned into blunt Chinese: "You can't stop us. The balance ends here. Your territory and your civilization should come to an end today." "If you can kill me, you can take the territory. If you destroy everything, what good will it do even if you win in the end?" The voice that answered was an ethereal but slightly sullen female voice. There was no deafening volume, but the voice seemed to come directly from inside my body, and it was extremely real. The former snorted coldly and spoke again in that unclear language. Then the sky was quickly filled with roaring, blazing fire and some incredible luminous lines. The explosions continued for ten minutes, and most people on the street stared blankly at the sky, but no one rioted and ran for their lives. Soon, military jet fighters and helicopters appeared. Whether it was because they came from different bases or were coordinated by unified dispatch, different types of aircraft with very different speeds arrived almost at the same time. Then... Then they all disappeared in the light of the fire before they could do anything. The violent movement moved from far to near, and finally came almost a few hundred meters directly above our heads. With the naked eye, you can barely see a thin black man with tattoos all over his body stretching his hands downwards from high in the sky, and a series of explosions hit him from top to bottom. The person blocking it was a woman with long light blue hair. She has curved and branched horns on her head, a thick and long silver tail behind her, and shiny silver scales vaguely exposed on her neck, wrists and other exposed areas. Because his back was to the ground, he couldn't see clearly in the firelight of the explosion. The only thing that was clear was a pair of domineering wings on her back, shining with silver. Facing the rolling explosion, she shouted: "do ti-do-di fa". When I almost subconsciously held my head to dodge, all the explosions seemed to be blocked outside the city by an invisible but very smooth-angled film. Both the explosions and the blocking force spread to places in the sky that were difficult to see with the naked eye. For some reason, I feel that her voice is more beautiful than any music I have ever heard. There is a natural and majestic power in the beauty, a kind of extreme that I have always wanted to pursue in music. It seems that I have caught something at this moment. However, there was no time to capture this glimmer of inspiration, because more serious changes followed one after another. "Despicable! Do you just want to destroy everything?" The voice of the blue-haired woman above her head was still empty, but it could not cover up the anxiety and panic. What erupted in the next moment was an extremely powerful earthquake. It took me about two or three seconds to react. I grabbed my newly-acquainted roommate and rushed to the corner of the supermarket. The one closest to us is in the corner of the warehouse at the back. The most stable triangular structure in architecture, the angle between two load-bearing walls. Even primary school students should know that this is the only correct place to survive in the supermarket at this moment. Unexpectedly, no one except us two girls hid here anymore. With himself unable to protect himself, no one was paying attention to the two supermen in the sky. There was about a minute between the initial earthquake and the complete collapse of the entire building. Except for a few people who were close to the door and reacted quickly enough, all the people who ran towards the exit to escape were, as I expected, hit by the outer wall of the main entrance of the supermarket that collapsed first. A row of glass doors and windows without pillars supported a three-story building. It would be strange if it did not collapse first in such a violent earthquake. The next to die were those who were crouching down and lying on the ground. This has become the choice of most people when emergencies occur. I observed with great interest the people in the supermarket who were either crying and howling, pretending to be calm, or shrinking into a ball with their five senses autistic, one by one paying for their own irrationality with their lives. If human beings can maintain sufficient sanity in critical moments, they will have the illusion that time slows down. It's as if you have entered the world of a slow-playing movie, which is caused by the overclocking of the brain under stress. Today is the second time I have experienced this feeling. The first time was when I just got my driver's license at the age of 18. The legendary curse of female drivers... In the end, what was supposed to happen came. As the center of the building collapsed, and within a few seconds after all the people around it died, the corner finally fell inward due to the weight of the large undissociated building materials firmly connected to the top. The ground was shaking so violently that it was impossible to stand up even if he calmed down. Seeing the concrete slab above my head being smashed down, I was unwilling to give in. I let go of her arm and tried to avoid the large scratches on my arm, but I struggled to crawl toward the dust-laden ruins in the center of the building. But the faster calculations in my brain told me that it was too late anyway. I, Qu Yun, am still going to die. There is still not much fear in my heart, but I am extremely unwilling. As a spiritual arrogant who is incompatible with the world, the greatest sorrow is to discover when he is dying that he has not been able to change the world at all with the ideas he firmly believes to be better than this world, and has not been able to defeat this world that is different from himself in any form. For the first time in my life, I felt how small I was. Is it possible for an ant that cannot yet control his own life or death to control the future of the world? At this moment, the collar on the back of my neck was violently pulled, and I flew upside down into her arms under the irresistible kinetic energy of gravity, so fast that even my overclocked brain could not understand or react in any way. In the blink of an eye, I felt that her tall figure was perfectly covering my petite figure. Almost at the same moment, a concrete slab hit our heads. The roar lasted for a long time. Until the smoke and dust around us had almost dissipated, we could still hear the huge roar of the ground and the sound of collapsing buildings mixed with the sound of car sirens and sirens in the distance. The first thought that came to my mind at this time was that the rising and falling sounds were such a magnificent piece of modern music. If it could be recorded and recomposed, it would surely surpass the famous Elegy for the Victims of Hiroshima. Then the second thought, the scene of two bloody beautiful girls in torn clothes clinging to each other in the dust of ruins, if the lighting angle is chosen to capture it, it will definitely touch countless people. Thinking like this, I actually touched the mobile phone in my bag. When I touched it, I discovered that first of all, my satchel was missing. Secondly, I felt a sharp pain whenever I moved my arm. The forearm of his right hand may have been cut lengthwise by the falling steel bar, and the bone was deep in the wound. Although there were no broken bones, and I was used to being beaten since I was a child, it was not unbearable, but I still shed tears physically. She patted my head gently, and that's when I noticed she was still holding me. There is no superhero in the movie who saves the world and then flies away handsomely. She was injured more seriously than me, with many pieces of building materials stuck in her back, blood all over the floor, and she also endured the pain and shed two lines of clear tears. But he just moaned softly and refused to fall. There is no more fire and smoke in the sky, and the two fighting gods have long since disappeared. The world in my ears was strangely quiet at the moment, as if everything had disappeared, leaving only the weak-looking girl in front of me. "Does it hurt? Don't move. I'll find someone for help. Can you stand on your own? If not, I'll help you lie down. Your back is injured, so don't touch it. Don't be afraid. It's not serious. You will be fine." I tried to comfort her.
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It's just my personal feelings after reading the previous chapters 1, 2, and 3! A little bit of complaint..._(:з∠)_If it causes discomfort to the author's wife, I can delete it immediately! After reading Chapters 1 and 2, I think the author's wife's name is quite interesting. The first chapter I just started reading really made me feel like my head was going to explode. But I will feel much better after the first chapter. The second and third chapters make me feel that the author is getting better... But to be honest, I don't really like the two characters of Ren Mian Shuang and Zhen Hao Qi, especially Zhen Hao Qi. I've actually seen a lot of particularly unlucky characters, but they really make me hate them. I thought about it, and I think it may be that the characterization and preparation of the characters in the early stage were not in place... I think that as a protagonist's teammate, there can be many shortcomings, but there must be obvious shining points, so that I can tolerate this character until I gradually like this character. But when I saw Shi Hao Ling appeared on the stage, I didn't feel the charm of this character. I feel that the author's wife wanted to write about the charm of this character, such as being discerning, but maybe because she just started writing the book, she didn't portray it enough. This also causes me to feel very uncomfortable when I watch the heroine save her misfortune again and again. I would question why the heroine likes this character and wants to save him again and again? The reasons given by the author's wife in the early stage were not very convincing to me... Also, the growth of these two characters (in my personal opinion) was not highlighted in the first few chapters. When I first watched it, I thought they were going to enter a maze. But if you enter the maze, it will be like the supporting role template in the traditional routine "Although I am weak, but I will grow!" But because they didn't have the courage to take this step, it was difficult for me to like these two characters, and it was also difficult for me to have a favorable impression of the heroine's behavior in saving them. Especially if you are really unlucky, you can forget about your own misfortune and trick others? ! But I only saw the front part now. I believe the author's wife will definitely improve a lot in the future!
Law of Immortality of Energy - Extreme Hardcore Edition
Thank you Liao Jiang for the birthday gift😘
Very cute☺️Hehe~
Qu Yun...
When I had time, I drew a picture Qu Yun looks like a human being, do you like it (灬°ω°灬)
Whim
The command issuer and its combat form
Happy Halloween everyone www Because it is Halloween, Yun'er is wearing a Halloween ninja costume this time. Changing the original plaid stockings into leg-exposed black stockings, the feeling is even more cool... Holding the Death Scythe... Maybe every mage has a dream of close combat...
If you are not a fan of the Heart of the Holy Mother, you should not come to see it. Qian Mian really didn't think there were so many problems. As a result, this dungeon was completely blown up. It was completely blown up.
The author is great
It was a bit uncomfortable to read at first, but then came the complex game plot. Character information and game information were revealed slowly, and there was also some false information to confuse readers. I saw that it took the second or third game to adapt to the author's rhythm. However, this discomfort is also the author's highlight. It gave me a sense of reality that I was participating in the game. In addition, the author describes from many angles and gives a lot of information. I can start from different roles, observe the game, observe other candidates, feel my own dimension, and find the rules of the game. I rarely read books on Qidian before. I downloaded Qidian just to support the author. I can feel that the author has made a lot of preparations. The rules in the game seem to be well-supported by knowledge, and there is no sense of déjà vu. Currently, I have seen the part where Qu Yun and his party attend the little lizard's birthday party. The previous game plots are quite exciting, and the author's imagination also attracts me. For example, the spaceship game is very interesting to watch. I didn't expect the ending to be like that. It's fun to watch the characters upgrade, unknown and novel. As a girl, I really like Qu Yun. She has an open mind, dares to think and act, is good at strategy, and loves learning and growing. She is a very good person, she is a woman, and she still cares about her. It's great!
I just finished reading the third copy, and the thing I want to complain about the most is Yiko's self-identification. Reading novels is nothing more than a sense of immersion, pictures, and immersion. Using Yiko to refer to herself as a novel has a great impact on the perception. It's also possible that the author tried too hard to portray the protagonist's confidence, which actually made the protagonist seem a little "artificial". The current overall evaluation is that the plot is very good, but the characterization is not.
Names you may not know (2)
In stories, the protagonist's brilliance is often too dazzling for us to care about anything else. But don't forget that the supporting characters are often the ones who support the plot... Chapter 0124: The waiter in the shop, a man next to Huo Xin Chapter 0169: The official officials Kangxi and I met, the little hooligan who wanted to molest them, was raped The seven or eight girls captured by the boss Chapter 0172: The master carpenter Chapter 0176: Three servants of the Mei family Chapter 0181: The disciple who sang the trumpet, the two maids beside Gou Yan Chapter 0183 : Two farmers fighting on the fighting platform Chapter 0184: The older female monk, the boy with an arrogant look Chapter 0185: A group of disciples, the referee on the fighting platform Chapter 0186: Registered disciples, Shao Zong Main Chapter 0189: Foundation-Building Elder Chapter 0192: Elders who came to search Chapter 0193: Dark-skinned female disciple (To be continued) (Purely funny, don't take it seriously and don't argue)
Names you may not know
In stories, the brilliance of the protagonist is often too dazzling for us to care about anything else. But don't forget that supporting the plot are often the supporting characters... Chapter 0003: The Briefcase Wife Chapter 0037: Coach Zheng Chapter 0040: The hooligan, the boss lady, Xiaoqing, Xin'er >Chapter 0041: The aunt buying pancakes Chapter 0054: Long Tao's friend Chapter 0055: Superman investigating the 426 incident Chapter 0080: The seven or eight boys who are looking for trouble with Hao Han, the bodyguards around Huo Xin? (To be continued) (It's just a joke, don't take it seriously and don't use it as a joke)
Names you may not know (3)
In stories, the protagonist's brilliance is often too dazzling for us to care about anything else. But don't forget that the supporting characters are often the ones who support the plot... 0194: The alchemy elder and his disciples, two middle-aged disciples, and the preaching elder 0195: A chubby little boy, everyone in the Immortal Sect 0197: A group of disciples, two elders 0199: Two maidservants 0204: Houde Tianzun 0226: Leon Redfield 0223: A gray man 02 97: A certain young man 0300: Boss Wang 0321: Officials 0322: A group of black suits 0323: A fair and clean man 0328: Laoton, Duer (To be continued) (I can still remember it and come back...)