Zhu Xian Qing Yun Zhi Ming Yao

Personally, I don't think I like it too much. Why do you have so many dramas? Don't connect the novel and the TV series together. That would be very embarrassing, and you may not fully understand the novel. In addition, the protagonist is too inferior and thinks he is not good enough. Will he know if he doesn't try? I'm done with it, I'm done with it 😅

Why are you so cold to other people and so obsessed with Baguio? Even if you feel a little pity after watching the TV series, you don't fall in love without even seeing anyone. At least add some more natural emotional development clips, otherwise it will be too abrupt and dramatic. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist is written as a savior. In a world of killing immortals where the jungle is strong, strength is the most important. Well, I can't save myself and still feel pity for others every day. Alas! Absolutely nothing.

What do you say about this book? What Baguio likes is Zhang Xiaofan's simplicity, kindness, innocence and lack of scheming. So if you randomly arrange a person to find out the path Zhang Xiaofan has taken and what happened, there is no need to fall in love with him, which is a bit of a forced cp.

The description of the environment in this book is the second best among all the online novels I have read.

I can't find any Zhu Xian fan fiction that I can read. The author's book is quite consistent with the original work, but it's a pity that there are many fewer chapters.

What does the last paragraph mean? Why is there no movement from the protagonist after Shi Wuxin wakes up? Could it be that he is trying to seize the body? If it wasn't a body snatching, but the protagonist's death, this paragraph would be redundant and would make people think wildly. Moreover, if it was really a body snatching, it would be too disgraceful. Can the author explain it?

I finished reading it in one day. Some of the unreasonable parts of the plot are because the characters have come to life and their personalities have changed, but they still revert to the original plot. The front and back are a bit off, but the middle is okay. Come on, author.

The whole thing is a rant, a fighter among trash.

At 9 am on March 13th, I have read 40 chapters so far. The strange thing is that there are no chapters 13 and 14. Has the author been harmed? Can you add a friend and send it privately to me for a look? By the way, 4 recommendation votes have been cast today

After all, I couldn't escape the curse of Zhu Xian

See ￣ ￣)σ becomes a single heroine

This chapter is missing and the first three chapters are gone.

·····What the hell, were the first three chapters eaten by the author himself? ?