Devil's Evolution System

I felt that the plot was so confusing, it moved too fast, and I couldn't keep up with my ideas. After just a few chapters, I ran a lot of places chasing clues. I had no idea what I was doing. I was just rushing for the sake of rushing.

It's up to you to guide the country and inspire words!

Let's just talk about the first few chapters, there is no clue, no foreshadowing, no plot, not rigorous at all, the writing is 💩💩💩

Before I started reading, I clicked on the details interface and found that 2.36 Million words had been written. I recommend 425, how about 10,000? Author, don't be discouraged. Although I am a trainee and I don't have a monthly pass, I can prostitute you for free. I support you with actions.

Don't have a sense of immersion? How to die and how to be reborn? If you don't write anything, do you want us to make up our own minds?

The beginning was inexplicable. How did he die? Who and whom?

Overall it's pretty good, not as bad as they said, keep up the good work

I would like to express my respect here, thank you

There seems to be a gap in what I wrote before. It looks a bit confusing. I'm still looking at the back part, so I'm not sure, but the front part feels a little bit (*＾ワ＾*)

After reading it, I feel that the author's writing is quite good, and the cover is also good!

If not, light a fire and use heat energy.

It's two million. Anyone with a knife can start the slaughter. You are welcome to taste it, first come first served! 🤭

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist is doing.

I finally know why this book is so bad, it can be said to be a mess.

What is written here? I thought it was another demon type! Waiting for it in vain

Why do you want to break off the engagement? The devil wants to marry that woman home and torture you every day.

It was pretty good, but the plot felt too fast. Destroying the enemy is simple and crude, but the protagonist is also afraid that the enemy will destroy his family.

A forced adaptation of martial arts? It's hard for the author too

An author with attitude! Wish you become a god soon! The author changed it again and again! It's not easy. Send me a recommendation! I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, in the next book, the character of the protagonist, the emperor, can be changed to be more decisive. The most important thing is the goal of the protagonist. No matter which book it is, there are goals. Some become gods, some dominate, and some pick up girls! I've revised this book several times and it still feels like a rough read. It's dry. It seems like it has no soul. Of course, this is a personal opinion and does not represent the views of book lovers! (

Although I haven't read the content yet, it's rare that I can persist with such poor results. Work hard and you will have a great day.