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I just read one chapter. The writing is very sophisticated, and I feel like I am reading a junior high school textbook (even though it is a long time ago). Be sure to pay attention to segmentation. Because most readers read it on their mobile phones. . Two screens and one paragraph, this is considered a long paragraph in a physical book, right? ?

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It is recommended that people who do not like to read this type of book should not post this kind of red envelope recommendation by themselves, or publish it in some novel groups, which will be more effective. I said it was well written but I still don't like reading it.

In the first few chapters, each paragraph is quite long. From chapter 7 onwards, the chapters are divided into separate chapters, which looks pretty good.

A foreign cannon is just a gunpowder gun, right? The recoil is very powerful. It's powerful.

The Deming family is quite representative, probably on purpose.

The paragraphs are too long. I read one chapter and my eyes were dazzled and I couldn't stand it anymore.

The He family is really unlucky, I wish you peace

The writing is very serious, with almost no typos or incorrect sentences, and even the punctuation is paid special attention to. Come on.