Quickly Travel to Start the Luck of Koi Carp

It comes from a short video platform. The beginning is really good. It makes people want to watch it. I don't want to say very malicious things, but the more I watch it, the more I can't stand it. I want to make a few points and hope the author can be better. Firstly, the author still does not grasp the logic enough. When it comes to spending money, platinum bought at the counter must be allocated. When it comes to buying stocks, a large amount of liquidity cannot be withdrawn without any hesitation. It will collapse. When Lu Qingqing goes to school, her family has money, and they basically don't want her to go to a domestic school. She has money to buy diamonds, money to donate to this company and that high school, but there is no money to donate to an internationally renowned university? Although it may not be realistic to say that it is a novel, the function of a refreshing article is to bring readers into the story, as if they are also the protagonist, which makes readers feel very happy. Another cheat question, there is a system in itself, but as you write, you seem to forget that the system does not exist. There is also koi luck, which is the lottery ticket with the first 100,000, and it is gone? I ran off topic too fast. The third one is that the villain forcibly de-intellects her (there is no sense of achievement in defeating this kind of retarded person), and the heroine is a crazy person. The heroine didn't have any plans when she returned home at the beginning, but someone came to see her off. I'm about to get sick of stupidity after watching this... The sense of immersion is very poor. Speaking of so many shortcomings, the author also has many advantages, such as his imagination and writing style, which are still very good. Otherwise, we would not be able to read this book. What I am mentioning is actually just details. Although I can write, I can't write as well as I can. I still hope that the author can continue to work hard, write better articles, and make more money. ☺️

I thought the apocalypse would be fine. That world was trying to prevent the apocalypse from coming.

This book is a good book and can be read for a long time. The author's writing style has matured after the previous books, and he is very familiar with the main plot. Sometimes he can't help but write too much about other side branches, but it does not affect the development of the main plot. The protagonist has a golden finger, but the golden finger is not big and sometimes does not work well. The advantage is that it can be upgraded. I feel that I am quite looking forward to the upgrade effect. The protagonist himself is relatively self-improving. Some plots are taken for granted and do not conform to the actual situation, but this is a novel, and everything in the novel is composed according to the author's thoughts and is harmless. The author's previous books have been well completed, and the quality of the books is guaranteed. Some small worlds are not without cp, so if you like to see the heroine alone and beautiful, you can just quit without being dissatisfied after watching it.

The writing is really good. But it has nothing to do with the title of the book. It's clearly about self-improvement and not talking about koi... Where is the koi?

It's so fast... 😅 Except for winning once, I didn't see any koi... 😜 Making money depends on memory... In all senses... 😅

It's an old-fashioned female rivalry novel written by elementary school students, with all kinds of villains and ed female supporting characters, and no common sense about life, so run away

The writing is good and the slogan is koi. In fact, I won hundreds of thousands. Others relied on memory to save President Li, and some relied on memory to buy stocks. It's okay for a teenage girl to make a fortune by herself, but she has to tell a veteran who has been in the world for a long time. . . Secondly, is this female supporting role really lacking in brains?

The story is told very well. The female rivalry is hard to watch. The female rivalry at the same time has a lot of positive images of the men, which is even more unbearable.

It made me angry. I'm really convinced. Can't the chronicle novel be killed in one go? There are several of them. Damn it, I'm so angry. I'm convinced. If you can't kill it in one go, you have to be a demon and kill again. I'm really speechless. And the reputation of the chronicle novel is very important. I'm really convinced that the heroine has no common sense.

Why can't you invest? !

This article is so poisonous that I can't read it.

Personally, I feel that the separation between the first and second chapters is too great. In the first chapter, the self-improvement of the heroine and the innocent heroine who kills the green tea daughter are quite enjoyable to watch. Even though she is not married and has no children, she still lives a cool life, focuses on scientific research, donates her family property to the country, and is handsome. I originally thought that the second chapter could continue the character of the single heroine, but I never thought about Xu Zhiqing, who has basically no relationship. The heroine got married because of reputation issues, although she is still a strong woman who is constantly striving for self-improvement. The general setting, but I personally feel a little uncomfortable with it (especially in the following chapters, there are other CPs. It does not mean that the heroine cannot have a love line or get married. But if it is placed in the last chapter, it would be okay to have a perfect ending of pure love.) The above is my personal opinion, please feel free to comment.

It's no wonder that the boring first life male was also at fault, but the result was that the second female actor kept trying to die and the abused male member, Bao Meimei, became invisible and finally hugged the beauty back.

Why do fast wear always have to wear it to the environment of 70 or 90?

After reading a few chapters, I was speechless. There isn't much plot, just a lot of miscellaneous stuff. For example, when the protagonist says a sentence, there will be a lot of explanation of the background behind it. After explaining the explanation, the supporting character will continue to speak, followed by a lot of explanatory paragraphs. I forgot about the front.

If it were put on the fake heroine, the real heroine would be written as the villain. If it were put on the wrong real heroine, the fake heroine would probably be written as the villain. There is nothing new at all. To be honest, both people are victims, and both families are also victims. I don't know what the meaning of having to write it as a control group of life and death.

In the second story, the heroine is written like a ninja. Du wants the heroine to die three times and four times, but the heroine can endure it.

There are only 75 chapters in the first world. How can I get through the novel so quickly?

Having so many chapters in a single world can't be considered fast travel

I have read the previous two stories elsewhere. The main plots are the same and I finished them in about 30 chapters.

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I think it looks good🙂

I've been watching it for eight hours straight, and I feel like I'm going to die suddenly if I don't sleep. Here are two votes, one for more refinement and longevity, and two for a quick update.

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Let me ask you weakly, is it really over?

The ending was too hasty and didn't explain clearly.

Keep writing, don't stop. I've almost finished reading Ten Thousand Heartbreaks

It doesn't matter to me whether it has cp or not, as long as the plot content can be read, this book can pass the time when I am short of books.

Watched it several times. . What I like most are the stories of cultivation and the stories of the Republic of China. . I have read these two articles several times. . . There is an ice crystal beast in the cultivation story that is super cute. . The heroine from the Republic of China is so enjoyable when she carries a gun and kills indiscriminately! ! ! I didn't like the last story, it felt like it was a pornographic story. The author started driving and got run over. . Hahahahahahaha