The Ultimate Slacker Comeback System

I can't describe the feeling of reading this book. It's like a third person is telling you a story, this Lin Xiao, that Lin Xiao, this sister-in-law... And the story is also like the story is not told well, which made me a little embarrassed. Can the author change it? I can't read it seriously.

Damn, do you have CP?

Finally I understand why no one watched it. Whether it's the story or the writing, they are all of an embarrassing level.

How do I feel about it? The article looks rather embarrassing, feels aggrieved, and makes me feel uncomfortable.

I read 2 more chapters and caught the problem. This book is all sentence by sentence, and there is no connection between the upper and lower parts, or the inheritance and connection are not obvious. Like this: Xiao Ming had breakfast today. Xiao Ming goes to school. Xiao Ming eats fish for lunch. Xiao Ming's good friend is Xiao Hua. It's not just a few sentences that can be turned into an article...😓

The author actually wrote eight books. What a joke 🥵

You actually still have the will to write it down, nb

😂I feel that the way of narration is weird, the sentence pattern is "what is so-and-so doing?" Which is too colloquial, just like what was said on the first floor, the third person is telling the story (should it be the plot?). If you read too much, it will feel too cumbersome and boring. The author can look at what other people have written, come on