Cute Dog Daddy

A cool song for you 😏

Give me a supporting role😏

I just silently voted for recommendation without saying anything.

Let me answer the question, that guy is in hospital and I don't know when he will be released!

I've been saving up the updates for the past few days and finished them in one go.

Comments have been quiet lately!

What's going on? Where's the author? Come on.

Awesome👍, come on! The dog's perspective is harsh

Lion, here to see you😃

Lion head, no more water, come on and update

Very nice! Guys, please update. 🤓

Come on, the writing is much better than most novices, and it makes people read it with interest. I feel that the main thing that needs improvement is the refining of the language. Some parallel paragraphs can be streamlined, as can the layer-by-layer expression. The number of layers should not be too many. If there are too many, readers will jump directly. There are also character language descriptions that are a bit written. For example, many words in the words of the emergency nurse and the teacher on the phone can be deleted, because both parties in the conversation are very familiar people, and there is no need for a complete sentence structure. The purpose of communication can be achieved by just saying the key words. Putting the subject, predicate, object, and subject list all feels wrong. In addition, adapt to the reading rhythm of online articles and add a few more commas to break sentences. Readers of online articles read ten lines at a time. If a sentence is too long, the reading will be slow and the pleasure will be compromised. What's more, you can read about the creative experiences of famous authors and avoid stepping on a few minefields. The rest is accumulated experience. A person who travels a hundred miles can only do it half a century. If you like writing, keep at it. If you write a few more eunuchs (yes, the great masters used to be eunuchs and then changed their pen names and then opened new books), you can get a good grasp of the reader's psychology and develop the skills needed to tell stories.

Volume One, The Road Home, is over. Please leave a message here and express your opinion. If there are any shortcomings, I will correct them. I just want to write well. The second volume, Mengmeng's growth diary, so stay tuned.

This turn of events almost cost me my waist. If you want a piece of gambling money, please tell me earlier.

Very awesome, looking forward to the next chapter

I have to update 😢 today. I see it's neither up nor down, so I'm stuck here.

One move KO! If you are called an iron lion, you can roar like a lion even if you are called a dog!

Although there is a suspicion of drunk driving, the car is driving smoothly. Be careful before arriving at the destination. The traffic police will probably not check it.

It feels pretty good, please come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Have you been visiting prostitutes these days? The novel won't be updated if it doesn't bubble up in the group!