Destroy the Saint and Open Heaven

Although I have just started reading, I know that it is not easy for every author to conceive and write, so I support you in your efforts.

I hope everyone will support me, come on

I have finished reading the official first chapter. The basic questions have been marked in the corresponding places. Let me summarize. 1 The paragraph is too long. This is a problem that many newcomers make, so be careful. Otherwise, it is easy to increase reading fatigue and burnout. 2 Punctuation and typos. Let's talk about punctuation first. The main problem is quotation marks. You should be coding the words on the China Literature website. There is a problem with the input. Sometimes the first quotation mark is inexplicably input into the back quotation mark. You only need to change an input method, such as Sogou input method, and type a pair of quotation marks directly every time. As for the problem of typos, you can read the article yourself on the mobile app after posting it. If you read it once, you can check for omissions and fill in the gaps. It can also inspire inspiration, add new interesting points, and sublimate the article. 3 Grammar issues, some places are symmetrical and descriptive, please also pay attention to the neatness of the contrast. The article has bright highlights and contains a lot of descriptions of the Immortal Lord of Heaven, and most of them are familiar, making it easier to read and understand. The description of the environment and the characters are relatively well done. It should be a result of hard work. A few additions and revisions will make it up to the mark. ps: I am also a new author, and my ability is limited, that's all. I hope to have the opportunity to communicate more and have in-depth discussions. How boring is it to be single-player all the time? Right.

You can consider adding a suitable written one, don't make it too complicated.

The update speed is not very fast.