A Businessman from Another Plane Who Is Trying to Commit Suicide

Please, can you please stop using so many names in one paragraph? Wouldn't you use the third person instead? After reading your perverse behavior, the novel is very creative and humorous, but I don't know how many Li Huailin were used in one paragraph! How about Li Huailin, what about Li Huailin! You can't use him to do what he does, what to do with him? I feel like I can't stand my obsessive-compulsive disorder. It's no wonder that such a good subject matter isn't popular!

The sd protagonist's path to death hahaha

I said that the protagonist can open a secret room, tie up a few bad guys, and torture them every day. It's so hateful, and then give them a chance when needed, get a pistol or something, let them shoot, and kill one on each side. Perfect!

Ye Junwen just decided to be a rogue bandit in the whole continent. If any country disobeys, they will capture that country and then choose a person from their own army to establish a puppet government. When people on earth use absolute force to invade other planets, will they still consider the political relations of the indigenous people?

First write the devil code 😰

I just want to say that the author has already written this work at the beginning and the protagonist is invincible. Why should he worry about making money?

It's really a poisonous novel. You dare to sell medicine from another world directly on earth, and you also demonstrate its effects. Are you really not afraid of being arrested by the country? Wouldn't it be better to just sell high-priced dogs and cats? Isn't it true that a good horse can cost tens of millions? Just write a novel and pretend that the unreasonable things are reasonable to fool them. The author is really big-hearted, but he has a big heart. The novels written are also scum and no one can read them. After all, it is quite difficult to read a book without thinking! ! !

It's so disgusting that I have to write about Marvel even though I'm just a novice. I'm spending money to get the hell out of it

If it weren't for comprehensive strengthening, a group of scientists would imprison the protagonist, take out a thousand to eight hundred kidneys every day, the strongest kidney, and crush his right arm every day, the Qilin Arm. Don't take it wrongly when it comes to scientists.

After reading Chapter 40 or 50, I originally thought it was just a simple double-crossing development, but in reality, an ancient martial arts family suddenly appeared. Then another thing called a spiritual beast appeared in this world, claiming to have the bloodline of ancient ferocious beasts. Maybe it's because I've read too many similar novels before, and I really don't have any interest in reading this kind of novel. However, the plot writing is quite good, and it is a relatively good novel, but unfortunately it is not to my liking.

Is this the end? I thought I could write another 10 million words 😡

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The running account was very boring.

At first glance, isn't it easy to make others hate you and kill you? Do you need that much water? For example, if you catch a bad guy and keep slapping him, if you tell him that he won't kill you, he will keep slapping him. If it doesn't work, you can put some xiang on your face, or you may cut off the chicken directly. If he doesn't kill you, he will keep insulting him.

The so-called ancient martial arts in the novel means that once it appears, the law has become invalid. No matter how you engage the protagonist, there will be no police. The protagonist can only rely on force to defend his rights. And he will always beat the small ones to get the big ones, and the big ones to get the old ones. Therefore, ancient martial arts will always be the poisonous point of urban novels.

Don't read it, it's true The protagonist is still a virgin in the end

By the way, is there really a novel in which the protagonist is calm enough and can make the best judgment? It's not the kind of novel where the character is only a little bit successful in the first chapter, but then the character collapses in the next three chapters.

I'm going against the grain and starting a new book... I can guarantee the writing, but just don't change the person.

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and the shortcomings I mentioned only represent my shallow personal opinions. 1. There is a gap between the content and the title of the book. There are actually two places where I come and go. I thought it was really wandering in various planes. 2. The categories of supporting characters are: passers-by, admirers, and beautiful women of various styles. There is a visual sense of urban flower clusters. When a woman appears, and she is young and beautiful, then I can guess that no matter what kind of enemy-enemy relationship it is at the beginning, she will most likely not die, and there will be a story and ambiguity 3. Blind, there is no clear main line and purpose, there is no mission system, and the protagonist neither pursues the transcendence of personal strength nor seeks supreme rights. The protagonist is seeking wealth, but does not really need it. The ultimate goal is to increase the circulation of materials between the two worlds, but this behavior actually has no meaning, but is just a strange cycle. It is true that the other world is becoming more and more powerful, the earth is also developing rapidly, and it is becoming stronger and stronger. But it just lacks a resonant sense of achievement and progress, so why does he do this? The conclusion is that the protagonist is quite funny and the various strategies are exciting, but the excitement is not enough and the plot lacks a sense of immersion

I'm currently reading chapter 651 and I'd like to talk about some of my disappointments with this book. First, I'll talk about Pig's Feet's recent appearance in the Marvel world and Batman vs. Superman. The performance of the world is completely like a stick that stirs things up, but the effect of stirring things up is negligible. It is just pretending to be 13 for the sake of pretending to be 13. Really boring. Besides, in the original fantasy continent, pig's feet directly and indirectly controlled more than one country, and even vaguely unified the human race. The trend of aspiring to the mainland, pig's feet at that time were ruthless and unscrupulous. How come we have lost this ruthlessness after returning to modern times? Even if we don't To overthrow the imperial dynasty and decide on your own, you should at least kill the original top leader and replace him with a puppet. And for the vast majority of normal people Making money is not the ultimate goal, it is just to achieve the goal through money. After the goal is achieved, more money is just a number, but this Pig's feet seem to have no purpose, just to make money, and even to the point of giving up the good for the sake of the least, which is a bit boring. At first, I thought it was quite novel to try to commit suicide with pig's feet, but when this kind of attempt to commit suicide became a routine, it became a bit boring. . .

It feels like writing a running account, why is it so fun to write online? Because the reader is brought into the identity of the protagonist, but the author seems to be telling the story of the protagonist, and the writing style is not good, making it difficult to read. Just save it if you can. There are so many words in a paragraph, and it cannot convey the feeling of being there. There are no details, and it is dragging.

It's so long-winded, and even a small thing would take a long paragraph. The words are very dense.

Every time the protagonist travels through time, it is before his death. In other words, it can actually be seen as the protagonist returning to a parallel world. In other parallel worlds, the protagonist will die when he dies, and then go to a parallel world at another time point. It is very scary to think about it.

Seriously, does anyone know that the protagonist has a move called "Flying Dragon Flash"? It is indeed the trumpet of the Continental Army God. Based on my imagination, I have discovered the truth: After unifying the game world, the mainland emperor Li Huailin has always been worried about being unable to create the skill "Flying Dragon Flash". So he put Xiaomi in the xxx plane and opened a trumpet named Ye Junwen. Due to the different planes, he finally created the skill "Dragon Flash!"

To be honest, as soon as I read this book, I felt something was wrong. Isn't it possible to jump to different planes after death? There are so many planes, it's impossible to jump back and forth between two planes all the time.

What is the secret of water?

In the end, I started to copy the plot, what about Marvel, DC, the end of the world...

The key word is businessman, shouldn't the focus be on doing business?

It doesn't look good. There are a lot of narrations by the author in the article. It doesn't look like a novel, but like an expository essay.

By the way, can't you hate yourself? Just commit suicide while jumping.

How come it's over after just raising it? I thought it was at least five million words.