Sweet Wife of the 1980s

Dear author, I found that your article has a slight flaw, that is, the writing style is relatively naive, the kind of verbal conversation, the conflict is not intense enough, it is a bit like a cup of boiled water, and it is boring to read. Personally, I feel that it is because you only focus on the description of lines when describing the dialogue of the characters, and ignore the conflict of the atmosphere and the description of the surrounding environment. You write too many memories, and the language is not intense enough, which makes it boring.

No need to wait for today's update. I went to visit the grave today, but I came back too late, and I was too tired to move. You all, I love little fairies.

The male protagonist put Du Fanglin in a mental hospital, how could she still come out? After he came out, he showed his love to the male protagonist as a demon, and was able to join the army, but then there was an explosion. Isn't Du Fanglin's family already defeated? So weird. . Is it a brain trap? People said that she hit her like that unintentionally and she didn't even wake up. She also thought that the male protagonist would take pity on her and always appear in front of him.

What a bug, the author doesn't find it contradictory. . Wasn't Du Fanglin put in a mental hospital by the male protagonist? Why did she come out again later? . The successful portrayal of Du Fanglin's character is very annoying. Everyone knows what kind of person she is, and the male protagonist also revealed in front of others that she set up him when she was ten years old to steal someone else's husband. Afterwards, she went to the male protagonist's house to confess her love. Women are so stupid that they forgot about her being slapped in the face not long ago and continued to pester the male protagonist. She also thought that the male protagonist would like her to get him. . Also, he said he couldn't touch Du Fanglin, but everyone knew that the woman he could touch was Du Fanglin. The male protagonist is so weird. If he really doesn't care about her or hates her, why doesn't he explain it and let others say that she is the woman he can touch? Don't talk about not having a wife, he doesn't care about rumors, this is nonsense, doesn't he think that he is provoking others by doing this. . He also knew that Du Fanglin liked him and had been persistently trying every possible means to get him, but he did nothing. Otherwise, even Du Fanglin wouldn't be able to hop around for so long and keep doing things like a fly.

Does the male protagonist have no love history in his past life?

A simple novel, with the same beginning and the same plot,

50,000 Words, seven comments, did I read it wrong?

Update soon, I can't wait

Grab the sofa. I like the author's writing. The plot writing is really good. I have read so many articles and so many books. I really like this book. I support it greatly.