The Big Devil Who Hangs Up

The writing is okay, but it always feels uncomfortable to read. Are the supporting characters a bit IQ deficient? Or are you used to it? When a person loses half of his head, are the people around him not surprised? Your heart is too big, right?

I always feel that it has little to do with hanging up! ! !

Urban superpowers, joining an organization, taking on quests to defeat monsters and leveling up, and stepping on geniuses to pretend to be attractive to girls. Although this plot mode is classic and easy to grasp, there are also successful examples (for example, I was stripped naked by the system), but I didn't read the book after I stripped naked. I didn't feel particularly motivated to read it. What I'm saying is that I hope the book has some great plot points. Because the early stage of the online game is so clever, I usually followed it until the completion. Personal opinions, treat with caution, there are risks

My writing is okay. Take your time and work hard.