Burning Heaven Path

Playing with so many men and still saying you love the main character? What kind of logic is this? It's so poisonous that you don't want it.

Cow, cow, cow! Rise up big and strong! 🤭🤭

Two-dimensional literary and romantic genre? The literary talent is quite good, but I guess I don't have enough experience in writing books.

I hope you can continue to work hard and finish the book, thank you!

I have only read Chapter 5. I just want to say that the author had to make the protagonist a cold and cold male god, but I saw that he is just a scumbag. If the character and language cannot express that he is a male god, then you'd better not write the protagonist as such a person, because it is disgusting to watch. Saving people does not necessarily require the protagonist to repay kindness, and repaying kindness with revenge is enough. But what you wrote is that the protagonist is indifferent to life, and treats his own life as strong and alive as a grass. Unfortunately, he does not feel it, he only feels like a dead person, so it is very ugly.

I feel that too much text is wasted on some NPCs. It would be more compact to mention some unimportant people in one stroke.

Come on, it will get better gradually. It seems that my recommendation vote is of some use. How many collections are there now?

Please update faster, I will vote twice a day 😁