King Zheng of the World

Nothing else, I just don't like this pig's feet.

When I first read the first ten chapters, the writing was very good, and the language and character descriptions were very good. I was surprised why it wasn't popular. Only after reading more than ten chapters did I realize why the protagonist was made to make some mistakes knowingly? It makes reading feel uncomfortable. Isn't this forcing readers away? If the author is not strong enough in writing, there is nothing he can do about it, but it would be terrible to deliberately write some plot points to embarrass the protagonist and make the plot twists and turns. The end result is that everyone is unhappy, votes with their feet, and reads other books. When writing a book, you must be careful. Don't deliberately write mistakes and difficulties so that the protagonist makes them himself. Everyone has no problem with the hell difficulty opening, but they are particularly disgusted by the protagonist who makes stupid mistakes. Look at the protagonist of "Qin Li". After reading it, I only found one similar problem, that is, once the protagonist accidentally revealed his hostility towards Zhao Gao, he was discovered, and the number of enemies increased, which still made everyone unhappy. The more well-written a book is, the fewer plots the protagonist makes on his own. Your book contains two chapters in less than twenty chapters. Once, the ancestral temple made a mistake, and then he gave advice to remedy it, and then was mistaken for rhetoric. How unhappy!

The author always shows off his poor literary skills, which is embarrassing

It's really nonsense, and the narrative ability is surprisingly poor. All kinds of self-righteousness. It's really weird, even more embarrassing than Xiaobai's article

Damn it, I watched Jin Ba Chun Qiu, and I have to say that the author's previous writing was rubbish. The protagonist's ability to commit suicide is too strong👍. The author needs to know one thing: No one likes to watch a mentally retarded protagonist. It's weird if his grades are good. Jin Ba Chun Qiu must not write the protagonist as mentally retarded later on.

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The protagonist has been taken for granted several times. When it comes to life-threatening money-making plans, he still takes it for granted. The way to make money is figured out by sitting indoors for a day. Then I didn't investigate the market and understand the market demand. I took it for granted that high-quality wine would be popular and that I could make a lot of money and make quick money. You must know that it takes a period of time for a new product to be launched and accepted, and this period of time is related to the market demand and the product's fit. So this method of making money is a failure. Although I don't know whether high-alcohol wine will be popular in the Spring and Autumn Period, but I don't have the right to say it without investigation. At least you should make some preparations before coming up with this method. It can be seen from between the lines that the author does not take it for granted in some historical time travel novels in Qidian, but he has made the same mistakes himself. It will give readers a bad feeling of 1+1>2. The author's writing style is actually quite good, and the entry point of Zheng Guo is also relatively novel. If more careful attention is paid to this book, it is worth looking forward to achieving good results.

"The Wandering Earth" has been hot enough recently, so let's turn our attention to our nearest neighbor India. "Seven Days of Crisis/Tik Tik Tik", known as India's first space science fiction, tells the story of an Indian stealing a Chinese nuclear bomb to save India. A meteorite will fall into the densely populated Bay of Bengal in six days, and the entire India will be submerged by a tsunami and wipe out the country. The only way is to blow it up with a 200,000-ton nuclear bomb, but the largest nuclear bomb in the world is only 20,000-ton. But! The important thing is this. The Indians discovered that an infrastructure madman built a 200,000-ton nuclear bomb and secretly hid it on the space station. So the Indians flew into space on an American space shuttle and went to China's space station to steal nuclear bombs to save the crisis!

Those who came here in July, raise a paw

I haven't read it yet, but I opened the book and saw that the heroine is Wen Jiang. I remembered that it was described in Spring and Autumn I am the King, so I came in and took a look 😁😁😁. I was curious →_→

Although the author has wanted to finish the book as soon as possible, please don't let the quality be low. It's strange that the transportation environment was so poor in ancient times. You could run from Luoyang to Shanxi in three days, and then run back to the main city for support in one day and night. It's unbelievable.

When you kill people and get promoted, you have to talk about winning. If you just mess around and get promoted, don't say that the princes are everywhere. That's what doctors see everywhere. The Qin State's military system was plagiarized. The author has laid a big trap. I suggest you refer to "Qin Officials", which is very detailed.

This is no longer writing history, but science fiction 🤔😠

The update is not strong enough, this book is considered useless, and so is the author

Author, we know you are taking the postgraduate entrance examination, but please tell me when you will resume updating, otherwise I will tell readers that you are a eunuch.

I was very excited when I saw that the author said it would be updated again. I recently watched the documentary "Eight Hundred Years of Chu", which was well filmed. Another pre-Qin game, "Qi Hege Spring and Autumn", your friend Qi Huangong is about to be launched. I hope the Spring and Autumn Hegemon can catch up. In addition, Zheng State seems to be relatively close to Chu State, so why not seize the Nanyang Basin before Chu State rises? , And stabbed the Chu State a few more times. If it was too late, there would be no chance. The Zheng State really had no strategic depth. The north was too difficult. Anyway, the ancestors of the Chu State had already been driven away once, so they probably wouldn't mind being driven to southern Hunan again!

Although there is a special reason, the author stopped updating for too long. Even a great master cannot bear this blow, let alone a newcomer. If you want to recommend and fully subscribe, you need to work hard for many years to refresh your life. Moreover, Pre-Qin is considered a niche among the niche. The author works hard.

Another niche-themed novel has come to an end.

The author always talks about classical Chinese and I can't quite understand it.

You really think of yourself as a person from the Warring States Period, don't you know the vernacular? The novel is a mess. If it is not complete, there is very little written about the history of the Warring States Period. It needs to be written in bamboo abbreviations. You can write less and save money. Your translation is a mess.

What era is the new book from? Give me a preface and look forward to it. Don't end it like this again.

It's so well written, I was amazed!

Qi Jiang in history is really a bit of a trap.

I find that novels about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period always make the protagonist look like a fool at the beginning, which makes it difficult for readers with a sense of substitution to accept it.