The Inheritance of Demons in Marvel

I don't like this style of writing, it's not exciting at all, the protagonist is unclear, and it's completely different from the imaginary demon.

The author looks at what they say, you might as well cut it off and write a new one would be better. It's so confusing, the protagonist doesn't even feel like the protagonist anymore, and what is the devil? It's still a demon. Aren't extraterrestrial demons going into other people's worlds to steal resources, kill people, and practice martial arts?

The title of the book is "Heritage of the Demon"... The introduction is "Venom"... The pig's feet I saw in the text are Grandpa Goldfinger's... Sorry, I didn't have the heart to read the rest. . . For example, it's like cream cake with salty bean paste and seaweed and egg drop soup.

Sorry, some unsatisfactory things have happened in the past two days... I can't change the chapter names, but I promise to revise all the chapters tomorrow. I am too tired today, so I need to rest first... The chapter may disappoint you a little, but I was a little nervous in the afternoon, mainly because I forgot to save it, and then I needed to rewrite it.

I usually reply when you comment, but I just found out today that the messages you reply to me will be listed separately. I usually only read the comments every two or three days, because I am afraid that someone will say that what I wrote before is not good... Although it is indeed not good →_→ Sorry, I didn't know much about reading comments before...

The effect of persuading people to quit is super good, it is a book that you don't want to read once you open it.

I will always support you🤭

The author should carefully study the nature and ability of the demon. What kind of demon do you want to write about, and how can he transform into a free demon? Or some other type? ?

Moreover, the main plot is also very vague. It is better to write that the protagonist transforms into the demon of freedom, accidentally comes to the Marvel world, and strives to achieve the status of the emperor of freedom.