Become Marvel's New Hero

Although I really dislike the Japanese, they are really good in some aspects. Maybe I read less comics, but every book I read where the protagonist is underage will emphasize that underage people cannot drink. Maybe the author likes to smoke, and it is not illegal or morally wrong. There is nothing to say, but no one can deny that smoking is bad. In the first chapter of your work, you write about a 17-year-old child (18 years old, a child, no objection will be accepted) smoking heavily. Maybe the author thinks it's cool to write like this, but it's really bad. Smoking is useless. Just smoke it yourself. Please don't publicize it. Thank you.

Does the author think that too few people are watching it and are you planning to let yourself go? It's really unnecessary to have a personality inside. It's better to have your subconscious mind take action on its own after passing out. The protagonist's psychology is too weak, and he wants to be a salty fish in a dangerous world like Marvel? Several truly powerful people dare not think this way. The character here is awesome all day long. Did the protagonist in this new chapter come out when he was fucked? Can you work harder to express your personality? Only those with strength are qualified to talk about salted fish. Now that you can't even protect yourself, be careful that you are really salted to death. Just let yourself go before it goes on the shelves, be careful not to get it on the shelves.

I don't want to watch anymore when I see this character appear! When I saw that both personalities must exist, I just gave up! To be honest, I feel that people are selfish, especially when it comes to their own bodies. For example, if there is a clone's exercise method for you, but the clone you cultivate will not help you and will oppose you everywhere, and will imprison you in a small dark room forever, will you still practice?

Young man, I have the invincible system you need here. With it, you can consider it in seconds.

It was painful to watch. At first I believed the protagonist when he said he didn't want to be a superhero, but in the end he had to make trouble in various plots. It's understandable that Peter was not interested in Polaris at first, but then he was recruited again. I didn't even think about the trouble he would face if he met such a character. Stark stock is even more ridiculous. Even pigs know that they disappeared for 3 months, but they rushed to buy stocks as soon as they disappeared. The father of the loser is still the Wolf of Wall Street. Protagonist setting failed

Hey... Transform into a dragon? What kind of skills are these... Do you want to pursue science fiction or cultivating immortality?

Damn it, I can't stand it when another personality appears.

There is something wrong with the protagonist's ability setting. Since growth is set, it is an upgrade flow. But there are no obvious goals such as practicing skills, collecting treasures, and upgrading. At this time, upgrading seems useless and lacks a sense of expectation. Things like explosive seeds and breakthroughs before battle also require various preparations beforehand to feel satisfying. Like the Naruto classic, climbing a tree, and then a fight breaks out. It's not just being beaten up and then exploding, it's very "fake". It seems that the protagonist is not trying too hard and is messing with the plot. Human X-Men movies also include training (X Academy) and treasure hunting (Wolverine Evolution).

When you become white, you will turn into a Chinese dragon instead of a foreign lizard dragon. How weird is this!

A great god has more fans and more negative fans. Which author doesn't get scolded? The key is his work. A great god's work is good. Although he is criticized a lot, he has more fans, so he becomes a great god. If the author is all anti-fans and has no fans, then you have to find the reason within yourself. In addition, the author is also a public figure. You must bear the scolding. If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight. If you don't even have the mental capacity to bear this, you can't even think about making money from fans (readers).

The real name of the Avengers is - Black Widow's Ultimate Harem.

I have to give you a Chinese name. I look tired, so I'll leave first.

Already ordered, this book is great! Slightly toxic, this book highlights the terrifying butterfly effect! But I feel like the only BUG is Hela.

The more I write, the more rubbish the book becomes. It's really rubbish. I don't want to criticize people, but it's really rubbish.

It has a different plot and puts new wine in old bottles, which is good. Unlike most of the initial plots written by Marvel such as Spider-Man, Iron Man, Captain America, and The Avengers, they are almost broken and I don't want to read them at all.

The author is an old man. How can a good young man smoke? Do you understand that it is harmful to the body?

Who travels through Marvel and still wants to live an ordinary life, moaning for no reason

There's a problem with the timeline. The little boy wearing an Iron Man helmet who was saved by Big Shit in Iron Man 2 was Spider-Man when he was a child, but then the protagonist and Spider-Man saved people in Iron Man 1? Wtf?

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It's been so long and I haven't tried Hela yet. I'm feeling dizzy.

The author can't stop yelling, it's such a mess

Would the author consider writing Venom?

It's been 13 days, where's the update?

Are you a eunuch, author? ? ?

It's already 2019, author, have you still filled the hole?

I don't know if the way the author describes Marvel's speech is correct, but I feel it's very awkward.

Regarding personal factors, after watching American TV series, the most disgusting one is The Flash, which is so cowardly. The one I want to kill the most is the daughter of the adoptive father in it. Gold Watch? Holy Mother? Green tea? Are there any suitable adjectives that you can recommend..., So the conditional reaction flashes first 😓

Volume one, okay. In the second volume, my mind was confused and my writing was messy. I couldn't even keep it updated. In the third volume, settle down and start to slowly lead to the main line. Conclusion: I hope you can point out the bad points and let me correct them. I also hope you can give me more subscriptions.