Arad and the Legend

First person is very poisonous

Just by looking at the writing style, you can tell it's a newbie 😅 Come on, young man🤭

I'm tired of reading it... The writing is not good, it's a bit white, and it's a bit embarrassing to read in some places.

😂😂😂The first person view looks so awkward

Now in the first person, it looks very weird

It's tiring to watch in the first person, and the protagonist's thinking is too out-of-the-box. It's not like he's so eager for success ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭

My Sword Emperor is as beautiful as a flower! Wish upon a Star Top.

Originally, as a dnf novel, I would have taken a glance at it, but I was not that tired from reading the article. I always said that I had no passion and walked away.

After reading Chapter 3,,,,, as expected, I still am not used to the first person,,,, but author, please do your best! ! !

Today's DNF novels are either ghost swords or magic, hey!

It's just the first person, you'll get used to it after seeing it too much

What the hell? It's so annoying to watch. It's so useless.

I have nothing to say to people who call themselves fat nerds.

After reading two pages, I realized that it was written by a newcomer, and the writing style is not good.

Which edition did you base your background story on?

The more you write, the better. Come on, I recommend it.

No spoilers? 🤫