Dad's Wanton Life

This time the limit is very good, this book has been confirmed! Jesus can't stop me, I said so!

I read the first few chapters and couldn't stand it

Do you particularly like the word "he"? After reading the whole novel, it was "he". After reading the plot, I didn't remember much of the plot and my mind was filled with "he" 😥 You may have a mouth habit like this, but if you write it into a novel for everyone to read, please be careful not to use too many words that have a bit of a curse. It can be understood if you use it occasionally (down to earth), but "he" is used everywhere and it will make people uncomfortable. . . Your novel is your hard work. I hope you will take a look at it after you finish it. In some places, the "he" can be slightly changed and replaced by other words. This way, avoiding "he" throughout the article can also make the text more refined??? Um, I don't have enough vocabulary. I don't know how to express it 😅 Anyway, it's about the same meaning.

I've been too busy recently. I've been stuck for several chapters. If I can't finish it, I'll just finish it.

It's not good at all, so it only took me two days to read it.

It's not good at all. I only saw it at 4:30 in one go. I'll book it all later.

This book is as exciting as the slap in the face at the end. You will never guess how it happened. I guessed a third of the time correctly but lost two thirds. This is what attracts me. The author's imagination is truly amazing!

It's really well written. I hope this is a novel with a single female protagonist.

Build an official name collection building. It's too hard for Yusheng to choose a name. I don't want to choose a name anymore. If you have any good names or characters you want, please tell me below this post.

I saw going to Tianshan to save people. There are a lot of poison points. . I feel like I'm being poisoned. My wife didn't let me touch her before if she didn't have any feelings, so how could I have a child? And there are so many antiques in the house. How big is your heart? Isn't it strange that the background of time travel is at all? There are still a bunch of bugs. . I'm a little speechless.

The author's writing is great, and I enjoyed reading it. To be honest, I didn't really want to read this book at first, but after reading the first three chapters, I wanted to laugh. But then the more I read, the more I became addicted. You have to send me a wreath when I die suddenly 😁

I couldn't get through the first three chapters of this book. It's so damn toxic. I was a killer in my previous life, but in this life I'm a funny dog-licking self-pleaser. This character is completely toxic. I'm very curious about how those good reviews in the comment section came about. I want to ask how your salary is like. If you have money, we can make money together. I want to find a part-time job recently...

I read less than ten chapters. Let's not talk about the plot. I just want to ask you what kind of thing you created as the male protagonist. Killer? Can this kind of character be a killer?

In fact, I just want to say: I traveled through time to be a successor, and then took my predecessor's daughter to pursue my predecessor's wife. Why is this the same routine? I just want to say, have you written anything of your own? Don't let one person write like this after he finishes writing. I just want to say that there are so many authors who want to be the successors?

There are always people who don't like a novel, but I like this one

I feel like the whole article has nothing to do with dads, it's an entertainment thing I think the author should learn from god-level dads and do everything for the sake of their children

I think this is a novel about a nanny. Why do you write so many chapters about the protagonist pretending to be sexy?

I read Chapter 2 and then looked at the table of contents. The plot seemed quite attractive just by looking at the table of contents. Unfortunately, the first chapter was too toxic. It's obvious that dogs and men must suffer from Qiong Yao disease.

It has the same setting as that literary man named Dad. Even the title of the book is only two different words. Please be careful.

All of my dad's articles are awesome, but all of them are very low-key. He is afraid of becoming famous, so he tried his best to hide them. The last one was exposed. Oh, so many of them are because he is so awesome. Why did he help his wife? He was afraid of finding out. Then he posted dozens of pictures, but he didn't know what he wrote.

After reading a chapter, I wanted to ask. . . If you don't like it, don't sleep. I hate it so much. Do you still feel that thing in your crotch? ? If you pull up your pants, it's not you anymore? ? ?

Today I saw a book on WeChat with 700,000 words and only 300 clicks. I contributed a subscription and 6 recommendation votes.

How many chapters did that fat man die in battle? It's so annoying. I don't know how many people were persuaded to quit by this character.

I couldn't even finish the first chapter. . . . . The poison is so deep that I can't get over it. . . . .

After reading a few chapters, the setting looks like shit.

Travel back in time and be a licker

I can't stand the game anymore when I see it. Games are so easy to make money. Who would work part-time?

Newbie author, wouldn't you be comfortable if you didn't write narration?

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This guy is awesome, too much is not enough.