Rebirth: Walking Out of the Mountains

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was really too miserable. The protagonist's situation, his relationship with his relatives, his selfish and indifferent grandparents, and the only one who had some warmth was his sister who couldn't speak!

Suddenly the heroine was changed, and I was convinced. Qin Yaru showed the protagonist her sister for several years, and then suddenly she couldn't see it in the article.

I was really shocked at the beginning of the book I was looking for today. I haven't seen such a good book at the beginning for a long time. It can be said that if the author keeps this quality, it will definitely be a high-quality product. Once it is on the shelves, it will lose the campus style and it will be poisoned to death.

The author really has no common sense at all! First: The age is confusing. Six years have passed and the eldest sister is still in kindergarten 😥; Second: The price is confusing. Since it is set in Guizhou, the price in the front is so cheap (four rice cakes cost 50 cents). Why is it that when I help the school to repair the cafeteria in the back, the prices are so high that it costs ten yuan for two meals a day (junior high school student)? There were 800 people and I was really drunk! My family works in engineering, and anyone who works hard can eat. I have been in charge of accounts for the engineering team for two years, and buying oil, rice, and vegetables is all my business. I can honestly say that when an adult was 11 or 12 years old, eating in the cafeteria could not cost more than ten yuan a day. Our engineering team is relatively small, with only more than 30 people. We eat three meals a day, and lunch and dinner must be two meat, one vegetarian, and one soup, which is close to unlimited! The more people there are, the less money you spend on food, because the more food you buy, the lower the price will be. Please ask the author to clarify common sense issues, they are almost becoming poisonous weeds!

The introduction is very tempting. First, the author is a left-behind child. Second, the author is an invisible rich man. This is telling us (come and hug your thighs quickly).

The character of the protagonist's father will trick his son sooner or later. Not to mention anything else, your older cousin spends all day hooking up with female students at school. As long as one incident occurs, your family's cafeteria will be ruined, and your family's reputation will also be ruined.

I am from Dejiang. The three high-speed railways, the fifth railway and the first port are almost completed.

There are always rebirth novels, where the protagonist is looking for his wife from his previous life. Does it make sense? Can't you broaden your horizons when you're born again? Are you still looking for something interesting around the small mountain village? If you are still looking for someone from your previous life, just let nature take its course and work hard to become a better version of yourself, and a better partner will come. If you accomplished nothing in your previous life and she was willing to be with you, it doesn't mean that you have money. Some people can share hardships together, but they can share wealth and honor.

Wow, back to the ravine, why did this early masterpiece of a book collapse? It's a bit of a pity.

What I wrote earlier is very touching. What will you write after the heroine comes out? The author has changed! The style of painting has changed drastically, all the characters are distorted, and the supporting role sister is missing. I am not sure about the group portraits, so I think I should have taken them away.

I feel that the descriptions in these chapters are not detailed enough and the emotional scenes are too sudden. We should consider the harm it will cause to the heroine and her family if gossip occurs. As a person who has been reborn in the information age, the protagonist should not be unaware of this situation. After all, people's words are scary. And when it comes to engineering, how does the protagonist ensure quality? These should be described, right? Without mentioning anything, the project was completed and accepted. There is also the matter of kickbacks. As a reborn person, you should try your best not to leave any clues. Even if there are hints, there should be a hint or something, right? You can write about all of these. How can I put it, these recent chapters are not vivid enough. Just like describing a withered tree, you can't just write "withered tree", right? For example, the ancients' "withered vines, old trees and dim crows" can readers imagine the tree themselves? Just writing a random article, I hope the author can write a better article.

His mother's monthly income is several thousand. This must be the 21st century. My grandfather was born in the first decade of the 20th century. The age difference between his grandfather and grandson is more than 80 years? It's a bit outrageous, right?

I like the interaction with my sister and the various twists and turns that pig's feet make to improve my life. To be honest, I don't like how I behave in school. As an adult, everything from class to teasing classmates seems awkward and childish. Personal feelings, the author should write according to your own wishes!

What the hell is this written about? Running water?

What a pity. You can still watch it before going to junior high school. . The writing collapsed later.

I was still raising it, but I clicked it to take a look...

I can't write anymore. It's too late to be reborn

The first few dozen chapters are okay and well written, but when it comes to women, well, it's too emotional and artificial, which is really uncomfortable. It's like eating apples with mustard, they don't go together well...😅😅

No, I just started reading this book because it was too slow to update. I wanted to read it, but the author was killed in advance and sent to the palace?

I'm still raising it! Just a eunuch!

As soon as I raised my mother's egg, I entered the palace.

Can you build a 3-story, 70-square-meter building for me to see?

So the author is an invisible millionaire?

Dude, don't give out red envelopes for recommendation tickets. If you really think this book is good-looking and worth doing, then set up a reward forum. When you sign the contract, hehe, you know

Well... Another one who was tricked into this by a damn brilliant advertisement. Yes, that's me. It's really strange. Why do the elites in the advertising industry come to write novels?