Notes King of Football

The pace has slowed down. It's time for the Chinese Super League to withdraw after winning the championship.

The writing is very good, especially the media comments, which are so interesting. It turns out that it is not that domestic leagues cannot be written, but that some authors cannot grasp that point and always start writing about the five major leagues. The writing is very down to earth, and I hope there will be more updates.

①The title of this book is "The King of Notes". I suggest the author change it to something like "Green Ball King" or something like that. "Notes" doesn't seem to fit well with sports, especially football. The protagonist only takes notes in the early stages of his football career... ②Introduction to this book. It is recommended that the author change it, because the writing is not passionate enough (football games are inherently passionate and passionate), and it cannot arouse readers' interest in reading very well. Such as: In his previous life, he was a Chinese quasi-professional F1 racing driver. He possesses calmness and reaction speed far beyond ordinary people, as well as infinite Bi's keen judgment and unparalleled observation ability. In this life, he is the well-deserved king galloping on the green field... This is the rebirth of a domestic quasi-professional F1 racing driver into a 16-year-old who has just been eliminated from a Spanish youth football training camp. For a young man, everything starts from scratch, step by step, and he ascends to the highest throne on the green field. ③The growth and development of the protagonist. I saw the author's reply to a reader's comment, "Recently I have deliberately suppressed the protagonist, not wanting him to look too awesome for half a season." The process of a person's growth is long, not accomplished overnight, and cannot be smooth sailing. Growth is divided into many aspects such as physical growth, football skills growth, and the protagonist's psychological growth. The growth of physical fitness, especially football skills, is a process that requires perseverance and slow advancement. Some football skills (such as Messi's high-speed dribbling) cannot be learned in a short period of time even by a genius; even if they are learned, it is hard to say whether they can be demonstrated in actual combat with ease. Therefore, the author only needs to write according to the normal development of things (the protagonist's football skills growth time). As long as the protagonist's growth process can be well written, the subscription performance will not be bad. This is related to the "sense of substitution" of the novel. ④The heroine of this book. Personally, I don't recommend harems. Nowadays, harems are not as popular as they used to be. If the writing is not good, it will easily cause resentment among some readers! Secondly, it is recommended to find a gentle and virtuous heroine who has something in common with the protagonist and can help the protagonist. ⑤ Regarding the off-field life of the protagonists in sports novels, I can only say that "every carrot and cabbage has its own preferences." But as long as the author writes well and is not poisonous, most readers will still read it. After all, if you only write about the protagonist's life on the field and nothing else, it feels a bit like playing a single-player game. It's too fake! As the author said, sports novels cannot be written entirely according to the formulas of fantasy and online game novels. They should describe some people and things encountered in the life of the protagonist, "red flowers go with green leaves", and try to make the novels more real and interesting. The author can consider describing the storyline of the protagonist being invited to participate in some well-known European and American TV/interview/live/broadcast programs, attending/attending/charity/evening/parties, hanging out with friends who are close to the team, etc. In addition, he can also briefly describe the protagonist's investments and the like. ⑥Management of the comment area of ​​this book. It is best to find a moderator and manage the book review area so that the whole screen is filled with plus/fine/book reviews. Secondly, don't add/refine any comments! Book reviews that are meaningful and well-founded can be encouraged by adding/refining/enhancing them.

I would like to make a small suggestion. Sports articles are enjoyable articles. Most people don't want to popularize science, so don't mind the occasional loopholes. In addition, be sure not to design setbacks. Even if you want to advance and suppress first, you should finish it in one go. Sports categories have low stickiness to readers, so please pay attention. In addition, you are top-notch in terms of new sports books, so keep up the good work. PS: The quality of the chapters has dropped in recent chapters, so the author should not be interrupted.

Okay, back to football itself, it is really necessary to practice small skills and long passes. Qingyun's style of play has been greatly affected by injuries. Fortunately, there are no serious injuries now. In the future, we will face more lethal defenses. Let's change quickly. Careers must be extended

The author probably wrote about Heishen Fangjian. Although I don't like him either, his appearance rate is really high.

The writing is getting more and more procrastinating and watery, and it doesn't look good.

This chapter is so heart-wrenching that even though I'm not a fan of Guoan, I already like Guoan a little bit. Just two updates a day is too little.

Why is there no training and upgrade after arriving in the UK? The process of the protagonist becoming stronger step by step is also more enjoyable.

Hey, I think that for Arsenal, even if the protagonist goes, can Manchester City really beat that season. I find it very mysterious. Moreover, the truth is that Arsenal has been in decline for such a long time, and its popularity is indeed not as good as before, with very few fans.

During the game, he called his teammates "brothers." It was really embarrassing, and those who didn't know thought it was Water Margin.

It seems that the author is under a lot of pressure. It's okay. I'll try the first book to find a good rhythm and improve myself.

I'm confused, I didn't think the protagonist's character was weak at all.

Don't write too much about national football content. If you write too much, you will attract a large number of fans.

Damn, oh, oh, oh, oh, these two pieces of writing are so irritating, so cute, I almost want to go behind my wife's back and give her a reward of 10,000 yuan. It's awesome, I'll give you all the monthly tickets at the end of this month.

Normally speaking, you can only have the chance to become the football champion by going to Arsenal. They do not have the Champions League and have not won the league for more than ten years. They are the incubator of the football champion.

There are very few protagonists in Arsenal. Think about it. Wenger is also a legendary coach. In reality, it can't be done. Let us Xiao Li help him^_^

Okay, Nana is good, she can fulfill Mr. Bean's Champions League dream

I haven't read it yet, but I just wanted to ask if this book has any awkward systems. (I don't like system texts)

I just want to ask if the update will be stable. I'm worried.

I even forgot that the pig's trotter girlfriend is named Jiang Yun. This character was written, pass, right?

Yes, 90-year-old Na fans give you support. Four reasons for joining Arsenal: 1. A quasi-rich club with 0 Champions League results. If you play well, you can become a legend. 2. The player structure is reasonable, but it lacks a leader and is not strong enough. Qingyun used to be the boss. 3. In London, a big city, there are many girls. 4. Arsenal

I looked at the gift and wondered what kind of gift I would receive if I were a football star. Suddenly I remembered when I was a kid in the first or second grade playing football on a field full of weeds. I didn't understand anything at that time. A bunch of people were playing football like rugby. I was running toward the goal with the ball in my arms, but someone cut me off and knocked out a tooth. Eh...