The Road to Enlightenment and Transcendence Among the Heavens

Why are the protagonists all missing their ex-girlfriends, their parents have forgotten about them, and they have been reincarnated for several lifetimes, so there is nothing to take lightly. . . .

This book is very awkward to read The words are gorgeous on the surface, but in fact they are empty. At the beginning of the five reincarnations, even if the average life span is forty years, it is still two hundred years old. There is nothing that cannot be let go. In reality, I dare not say that there is nothing that cannot be let go by the age of forty. This is the growth of one's mind. It can be seen from this that the protagonist has a weak character and low intelligence. No matter what he does, such a person will not achieve anything, let alone practice martial arts and achieve a transformation in the essence of life. Forget it, I suddenly have no interest in talking anymore, so let's leave it at that.

Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism are the same family... When will the Hu people's religion be comparable to our Han tradition?

The protagonist's highest achievement and destiny are only as high as the Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea. Any talk about Journey to the West and Conferring Gods to the Wilderness is all bullshit! Out of reach!

It's a bit like a virgin, and the heroine listens to whatever she says and has no opinion at all. That heroine is a fucking jerk. Damn, it's perfect for a birth mother's chart. It is simply an insult to the Tao. You still practice the Tao without having clear ideas. The protagonist is an obedient dog. Do whatever the heroine says.

Suddenly, I felt that the more alive the protagonist became, the more childish he became.

Try to keep as few historical figures as possible. You wrote about Su Shi, who looked great and upright, but somehow I thought of Su Shi's miserable concubines. I have always disagreed with the values ​​​​of the ancients. How can you make friends with these ancients when you travel to ancient times? What if someone suddenly asks you to exchange concubines?

This book hasn't been put on the shelves yet, but the author keeps writing. I really admire the author's writing spirit. I don't know why you are so energetic. After all, 99% of authors definitely want to make money when they write. I don't know how much you can make every month by writing like this, but I always feel that it is too much of a loss. Come on! In fact, I only read part of it, mainly because the writing is really unpopular. The golden fingers of the protagonists are at least Pangu, Hongjun, Chaos Pearl, Gate of All Realms, Gate of Wonders, System, etc. No matter how bad they are, they are Taiqing Laozi, Yuqing Yuanshi, Shangqing Tongtian, Nuwa, Jieyin, Zhunti, and the six great saints. In the second place, there are Zhen Yuanzi, Fuxi, Hongyun, Kunpeng, Minghe, Donghuang Taiyi, Dijun, Twelve Ancestral Witches and other great powers. In the end, your golden finger is just a little Luzu Chunyang, which really has no future. It doesn't suit me anyway. Maybe this is just a one-sided view, but people have to live! If many authors encountered this kind of situation, they would definitely have moved on. They have no subscriptions, no rewards, and only rely on Yue Quanqin's royalties. How can they survive? Of course, the author may just like writing! I can only wish you good luck! Come on!

When will the plot of Double Dragon be finished? I always feel that the protagonist's character is very awkward in this plot.

It's very nice to watch. It promotes my orthodoxy and kills all the barbarians and foreign teachers.

After a few lives, will all the things in the previous life still become obsessions? After all, for mortals, after so much, they will only become memories, and if you practice Taoism, these will become a kind of indifference, otherwise you will not be able to get through the inner demons. Of course, if you don't need to cultivate your mind and just give this secret book, if you have enough spiritual energy and the like, you will definitely succeed, just think that I am talking in vain

Why! There is a shortage of books, so click in and take a look! Vomit... Extremely poisonous

The Shooting Condor is on the verge of being broken. Tianlong is on the same level as Jiumozhi, so he can still learn from it. No matter how different it is, it's not that big of a difference.

The beginning is really poisonous. I get drunk with this routine when I go home. What a fucking fifth life.

The number of words in this book is still relatively small, and I don't know if I can continue writing it without being confused. Speaking of it, the name of this book is similar to others, and it is not attractive at all. To be honest, I clicked on it because I was reading other books accidentally. When I came in, I looked at the table of contents and thought about taking a look, but after I came in, I found this The writing style of the book is so ancient and literary, but there are still many shortcomings. I will talk about one. The book seems to be written in a gorgeous way. It quotes various poems and even depicts scenes and characters. It also seems to borrow a lot from others. But I am still attracted by the author's literary skills. Secondly, this book has a big weakness in the plot connection and the progression between the characters. I I have read many books like this one, but this is the first time that I have seen the shortcomings hidden under the gorgeous words. Perhaps the author has painted the surrounding scenes and characters very well in order to enhance the artistic conception. However, the dialogue between the characters and the progress of the plot are not so satisfactory. To be honest, it feels very awkward. The way of speaking is ancient and modern, and the way the characters act also feels very fucked. It is not as cool and comfortable as the words introduce it. And It's just that martial arts is not good for fighting scenes at all. I really feel like a child playing house, and why is the protagonist still so obsessed with the past in Samsara Five? Isn't this nonsense? Your hundreds of years have been in vain, and the introduction to Quanzhen martial arts is not comprehensive. Speaking of which, Did he learn the innate skills? How many generations of Quanzhen disciples did the protagonist have? It was not mentioned at all. If he had learned the innate skills, the protagonist should not be so weak. If he had not learned the Quanzhen martial arts, how many martial arts did the protagonist know? Did he learn Jiuyin? Trash games like Double Dragon and Fengyun are not martial arts but fairy tales. They are very fake and inexplicable. I'm saying that I personally don't like books like Huang Yi. If the author's outline has been decided, then I didn't say it. I just hope that some new games will appear. Just don't write about Journey to the West and Fengyun Fengshen. It would be better if there is some original world. I just don't know why the author writes in the fan column. Is it to practice writing or what? Anyway, it is currently supported and I hope to write different new materials. 😆

After reading more than 10 chapters, I don't know what I want to express.

Damn it, can I write a book coherently? What does it mean to write a book with a few missing chapters?

I feel like the main character is just a piece of wood, without human emotions. Bao BuTong scolded him, but he didn't fight back, and he stayed to eat other people's food. Others scolded him the same way. Wouldn't he be angry? He put himself into the character, and it just made me feel depressed. The writing is okay, but now that Internet literature is popular, it depends on whether the plot is good or not. If you feel comfortable with the plot, then it will become popular.

It feels like the protagonist doesn't look like a human being, and the writing doesn't look like a living flesh-and-blood person.

The author should not listen to what some people say. The protagonist enters Taoism through martial arts, so why should he have no desires or desires? Even a monk who has nothing in common is full of evil and hypocritical. The Tao is illusory, and blind persistence will only lead you astray and become an inhuman machine. Whoever should be killed should be killed, so what if everyone in Buddhism and Taoism is dead. Love whom you should love, and it doesn't matter if you have one or two wives. As long as you are not pretentious, as long as you don't have a harem, you can do whatever you want without losing your true heart.

It's very annoying that there are arrangements and big bosses giving opportunities.

I don't know why I don't want a female protagonist when I look at these gods now 😥

I would like to express my personal opinion. There is no immortal matter in the Zhetian world, so any elixir that prolongs life will be ineffective as soon as it is taken out in the Zhetian world. Even flat peaches and ginseng fruits will become the king of medicines that only last for hundreds of years. The same goes for the monks themselves. The immortal matter in the body of Zhetian will be absorbed by the world, and the lifespan will basically disappear. It is completely impossible not to have any impact.

The author listens to everyone and says, go and join the factory. You are not suitable for writing novels.

If the limit of covering the sky is Tai Yi, the Taoist should be equivalent to the Great Emperor. After all, there is also the Red Dust Immortal.

Xianxia novels, you write according to Gu Long's writing style, I'm here to read fast food, not to see your writing skills.

Can you please stop writing about Shi Qingxuan and practice Taoism well? . Desireless