The Most Powerful Death-Seeking System in Football

I just read the beginning, and there are some things that I feel uncomfortable with. The author is also an old author who has written many books. Why is the character design of the article so careless? Is it difficult to score 10 goals in three years including training matches? Even if the position is goalkeeper, goalkeepers are everywhere in the world who score goals. Do you need to rush with the ball yourself? What about IQ? Can't free kicks and penalty kicks be used to score goals? If your foot skills are not good, won't it be good after practicing for three years? And after three years of playing the goalkeeper position, and others can't do anything to him, why can't he change positions? With such a big backstage, do you need to be stuck in the goalkeeper position for so long? The protagonist in the book has been tested by various online texts and various systematic texts. What is the result? I've been fooling around there for three years and still haven't figured out anything. I tentatively think that the author intended to write it in a funny way, so that it can be more enjoyable to watch. However, the way the first few chapters were written did not make me feel happy at all, but rather disgusted. The protagonist's previous life was a scumbag. After getting the system, the protagonist has no IQ. The protagonist completes the task by muddling through without knowing how to work hard or adapt. Such a character will later transform into a superstar. How much effort does the author need to write beautifully? If you don't have a lot of power, if you force the protagonist's character to be normal, it will feel too conflicting. Therefore, there is no need to come up with some loser style, because Chinese football is all loser style, and it is easier to accept a normal character.

The protagonist is not pretending to be crazy or acting stupid, he is really stupid. It's extremely poisonous, I hope all non-readers know.

It's acceptable for the protagonist to pretend to be stupid, but now it seems that he is really stupid. . .

After reading three chapters, the author wants to imitate Vardy, but with all due respect, there is a difference between being a scumbag and being funny. Your protagonist is a scumbag.

There is a difference between being uneducated and joking

Funny words can be used as embellishments, but if you deliberately write funny words, you will become stupid and look too imbecile.

I feel that the author has always wanted to write a protagonist with a strong self-esteem, but in my opinion, it is a manifestation of the protagonist's extreme low self-esteem. If you are not qualified in any normal test, why are you so famous? You take yourself too seriously. Normal people should face their own weaknesses, lower their position, and seriously study and exercise their shortcomings.

Do you mean to be funny, not to hurt others? If someone is on the phone, throw a bucket of water at them? Isn't this a bullying incident? If it weren't for the relationship, I wouldn't have beaten him to death long ago.

At the beginning, I probably wanted the protagonist to be funny, but why did it seem so silly? Even though I endured it, I was still put off by the first ten chapters. Where did the IQ of normal people go? Systematic writing does not need logic?

Would a filial person still speak dirty words and do evil things?

Are you really an old author? Why has it gotten worse over the years instead of making any progress? Are you serious about writing books? I don't feel it at all!

The protagonist's character is annoying and I can't stand it

I guess the author used software to write it. Is it interesting? You just do it for a living without taking it seriously. Stop writing. It's a waste of energy.

Later, I discovered that part of the plot of this book was plagiarized. Yes, it was Mark's story. I was sure that I had read a book before with almost the same plot. I can't remember the title. It was about the protagonist being the head coach of Nottingham Forest. . .

After reading a few chapters, I feel really uncomfortable with this pig-footed scumbag and gangster hybrid. Even a normal Shinobi wouldn't say it in a dirty way!

The character of the protagonist is not likable at all, and the whole villain looks like it. It is difficult for this novel to be successful.

I wanted to read on, but I lost interest. The protagonist can be cynical, but he is so unqualified. Perhaps, the author is such a person.

Writing such a disgusting protagonist is the reason why you are still just a V2. . .

After reading the previous chapters, it was extremely poisonous. The protagonist is not a funny guy, he is a scumbag and a gangster