I Build a Cave in the Imperial Capital

First, finish scattering flowers. This author's first book is finished. The ending may be considered bad, but the process is already very good. Secondly, I would like to talk about my views on this novel. In the beginning, this book is a farming style. It is very brilliant in the early stage and is considered the best among newcomers. However, in the middle and later stages, there are many twists and turns, and the writing style is a bit novice. In the later stage, due to various reasons, the author wanted to write a more grand world but could only do it hastily. However, it can be regarded as a work that is not a eunuch. This alone is a dedication. (But those that are malicious and unfinished are not counted) Objective evaluation: Xiaobai's harem is a good article, but the author's writing style needs to continue to be refined. Some of the words in the article are too exaggerated and gorgeous, the characterization is simplified, and it does not reach depth, but the daily life is very good, the world view is okay, but not detailed enough, etc... Finally, I look forward to the new book. I first saw this book from Free when I first came to Qidian, and I followed it all the way. It was also the first time I joined the book club group, and it was also the first time I joined a book club group. After that, I joined other book club groups one after another. I got to know the young authors of Qidian briefly, and communicating with book friends also meant a lot to me. Lastly, as for the book club group, drive less and discuss more. After the group was founded, the group was quite chaotic for a while, so it still needs to be regulated. Maybe I need an administrator for fun, Laoxu, will you give it 🤭

I read more than 20 chapters, but they have nothing to do with the topic.

Fortunately, I only read the first few dozen chapters, and I felt that something was not quite right. Maybe the author wanted to write some good and impressive endings, but I'm sorry to make it clear that this is Dian Niang's territory, and this kind of ending will not be accepted here. Maybe some readers will accept it, but I believe that most readers will not. To put it bluntly, does the author want to write a famous book? Still want to publish?

After reading Chapter 47, I feel like the author may be a crook! Disgusting! He is actually writing about gay men having sex!

Didn't you say you have land? Where is the land? I read several chapters but didn't see it

Passed subject two. I'm so happy. I won't reward you with more than 1,000. Please help with likes and comments.

This book is still very readable and even old bookworms enjoyed reading it. The content in the front is very practical, like a fresh meat bun with a mouth full of gravy. The setting of the five heroines is very good and rich in content. It does not exclude the harem at all. As long as there are not too many people, it will be fine. However, there is a lack of content to explore the new world. You still have 382 love rivals that have not been included. Only a roulette lottery is added to arrange the plot development. It feels perfunctory. It feels like the author has written it wrong. Are you lazy and don't want to use your brain? I hope there will be more scenes of exploring and seeking new species in the future, and more interesting things will happen when the characters collide. After all, the world is so big, there is no need to rush to upgrade. There is still a lot of room for exploration in this book. Don't be lazy

For those who are exempted from this, please note that this book is about harem but not sentimental, arrogant but not brainless, there is a heroine dressed as a man but not disgusting, please delete the book if you can't stand it. Personally, I think it is a good urban farming harem novel. This book has a small audience, but if you want to take issue with it, please come here and I will accompany you. Thank you. It's not easy for any author.

Story background: Yang Xing, who lost his parents when he was young, was adopted by Uncle Li's family, a well-connected family. Li Ling'er from Uncle Li's family grew up with Yang Xing. Because of his mature soul, Yang Xing has already regarded Li Ling'er as his daughter. But Li Ling'er, who loved Yang Xing deeply, realized that Yang Xing's love for him was not the love of a lover. After he committed suicide on the day he turned 18, he even discovered that Yang Xing was actually gay deep down and had no interest in women at all. After applauding once, there was never a second time. In desperation, Li Ling'er met Mo Han, his good friend when he didn't know Yang Xing. After getting to know each other, Mo Han decided to pretend to be a man who likes women's clothing and became Yang Xing's roommate to help his good friend correct her boyfriend's sexual orientation. Because Yang Xing believed that Mo Han was a man, he put aside his worries about "how to fall in love if the gender is different" and fell in love with his roommate without any precautions. ❤️❤️❤️

This book is a good book. I am used to seeing the protagonist being a loser who gets slapped in the face all the way at the beginning, the supporting characters being stepped on and dragged into the whole family, or being outsmarted and tense and depressing throughout the whole process, or being dark or passionate. Now I suddenly like this kind of relaxed farming novel. Although the book has some flaws in the early stage, they are all minor flaws. This is because the author's skills in the early stage are not mature enough, and it is much better in the later stage. This is a book worth adding to your bookshelf and reading every day. I recommend everyone to read it.

It is a relaxing novel. There is no monster-fighting or upgrading in it, only a relaxed and comfortable life, and occasionally some exciting battles. What I like the most is probably the thrilling plot! Hey hey hey 😍

Coming from Infinite Divine Clothes, it can indeed be seen that the author must have made great progress when writing about Infinite Divine Clothes, otherwise this book would not have poisoned me in the first ten chapters 😂 It is not on the same level as Infinite Divine Clothes

If the author's next book flops like this one, let's burn him 🙂🙂🙂

It's a very good book, but I don't like tragedies. I suffered in life and was abused in the book 😭😭. The most important thing in reading novels is to make people happy. I hope the author's next book will not have tragedies, and at least the ending will be more heartwarming 🙂🙂

I feel helpless every day when I read the bad books recommended by the editor. How to break.

I really hate that the author wrote everyone off one by one for the sake of completion and the need for the next book. I would rather not have the last chapter and end it directly after the protagonist becomes invincible. Now my mind keeps thinking about the pig Chong Ling'er, the man disguised as a woman Mo Han, and Ai Li who keeps calling her daddy. Uncomfortable. What the hell is it that ps keeps failing to publish platform upgrades these days?

When I saw the author repeating three times in the introduction that Lu Han is the heroine, I felt relieved to be fooled.

This is an enjoyable article that is most suitable to read when you are in junior high school. It is very enjoyable, but only after more than 10 chapters. The old bookworm took his leave. The feeling is indescribable

After reading the introduction and comments, I have a very simple question. They all have elixirs and other systems, but they can't live forever. Do you want to imitate Jiangnan in writing famous books? 🤭. I am not targeting this book, but the author. I believe that the public has a sharp eye for this book. But I haven't seen it but I'm here gibberish because I'm allergic to seeing such good food.

Are you still you after reincarnation?

It's an ending that people can't let go of for a long time.

I just read a few chapters and I got hooked. I thought it was a novel with multiple female protagonists in a harem 😅. I'm going to continue reading. I hope I don't fall in love with one of them when I meet them, then I won't be able to stand it 😡

Although I know that there is no such thing as a banquet, I still feel a little sad when I see so many former friends dying. When reading other novels, I always can't help but think: What will the world look like a hundred years from now? Will the protagonist walk the world alone? But I always subconsciously avoid these questions and try to focus on the wonderful things in front of me. Lao Xu did not avoid these questions, or he was full of awe for the rules of life. He calmly faced a stage that everyone must go through: death, just like tearing open a bloody wound to show you, but there is a trace of calmness despite the pain. Although the performance of Lao Xu's book is not very good, I feel that great responsibilities will be handed down from heaven and people will do so. This is where the training of an author lies. Come on, Laoxu, I'm waiting for you in the new book.

This book cannot be searched. Searching for the full name cannot show it. If there is another book on the bookshelf, I can't find it.

Is this a prequel to Infinite Armor?

This is the most watery version of Daluo Jinxian that I have read in the book

I thought there was only one female protagonist (after all, you said it in the introduction and said important things three times). Who knows at least 4 to start with (I knew when I read Chapter 10 that there must be more than one female protagonist, and not less than 4)

It's the author's birthday today. I don't have many coins left, so I'll reward you with 1,000. In addition, if it's the author's birthday today, he won't consider updating chapters 20 or 30. If you're happy, we'll be happy too, so why not do it? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

I'll give you the monthly ticket~ Come on, Laoxu~

Come on, author, keep writing. Think about how so many unknown planes are constantly sending special products across planes as Ling'er's spirit-gathering physique continues to upgrade. In the end, even the planes were attracted to merge with the main plane. Haha, it's so interesting to think about it. Come on, author. I hope the author can keep writing. After all, millions of words are not enough these days. Come on, come on, I will always support you.