The Awkward Couple in the Red Mansion

The author did not handle the character of Qin Keqing well and forcibly "slut///shamed///humiliated" Qin Keqing. Under the feudal ethics of cannibalism, Qin Keqing was originally a vulnerable group. The author did not provide a single well-founded analysis and directly said that Qin Keqing had misbehaved and crawled // Ashes. I felt very uncomfortable when I saw this. Other character authors have their own opinions, and they all make sense. Only the analysis of the character Qin Keqing instantly made the heroine possessed by cancer and made people lose their favor.

When I was a kid, I liked Feng, Bao, and Chai very much when I watched the 1986 version of the TV series. When I grew up and read the novels, I slowly changed to Feng, Bao, and Chai. This time, I really don't like Feng. It's a pity...

The writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of bugs in the details. A concubine cannot be straightened, so a second wife (a concubine from a good family) can straighten a wife. When a concubine becomes a concubine, she becomes an aunt (which means her status is elevated). On the first day the couple traveled through time, they still had no memories of their original lives. Let's not talk about whether the heroine went to ask Mother Jia to make peace with her, whether it was a protective rule or not. How did Jia She pass when he went to the palace? It's definitely not possible if you don't understand! Any slight mistake would be disrespectful! There is also the way the maids around Jia Mu are called, which is not characteristic of the Red Mansion at all. The reader feels: The Red Mansion definitely did not call the maids this way! There are also those who deal with the eldest maid and Yingchun wet nurse. They are all born in the same family, and their parents and relatives are all in Jia's house. If you sell these two, and others don't deal with it, you don't know how they will take revenge on you! Also, the royal family will not reward gold, and even if it rewards gold, it will not exceed one hundred taels (in ancient times, gold was not used as currency, and was mostly used for burials and gold jewelry processing.), And the exchange rate of gold and silver is not 1:100 as the author takes it for granted! Usually it's only 1:8-12. Also, the heroine sends a New Year's gift to her natal family in Jinling, and it arrives in a few days. The description of Red Mansion's trip to Jinling refers to the delay of two months for Jia Lian to attend the funeral for Jia Min, and the delay of at least one or two months for sending Daiyu back to Beijing. Yangzhou falls under the jurisdiction of Jinling. Also, let Kapok go to Suzhou to find Yinglianhua, and only pay 20 taels for travel expenses (did you think Suzhou is only 200 miles away from the capital? A girl who travels and stays in the city is not afraid of being sold by traffickers! Isn't it necessary to call a valet and an old woman to come forward for this kind of thing!). She only asked for acknowledgment of marriage in Meng, and did not give a letter as a token?

Personally, my favorite in The Red Mansion is Xue Baochai, who was also hacked. 😭It is true that Xue Baochai is a very scheming woman, but on the other hand, she can recognize reality clearly. To put it simply, Xue Baochai's family consists of orphans and widowers, and her brother is a prodigal and a loser. There is not even a single top man in the family. In that feudal era, it was not the modern society of the 21st century, which was struggling. In the social background of that era, ordinary girls are mostly ignorant and at a loss. It is understandable that Xue Baochai wants to find a backer for the whole family and the family to survive, and it is understandable that Jia Jiaxu and Jia Jiaxu have to deal with it. At least it was different from Sister Lin (actually she was naive and ignorant). Lin Ruhai's family fortune was handed over to Xue Baochai, so Xue Baochai's consequences would definitely not be as tragic as Sister Lin's. Lin Ruhai didn't tell his own daughter about the huge fortune he left behind, but gave it directly to Jia Lian. He must have known his daughter very well and knew that it would be useless to give it to Lin Daiyu. Innocent and cute girls are indeed lovable, isn't it true that they are silly and sweet now? However, Sister Lin just lacks the last sweet word. When Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu were together, they made a lot of noises and cried. However, Xue Baochai was deliberately flattering. Although he was scheming, he had no ill intentions towards Jia Baoyu. He also repeatedly persuaded Jia Baoyu to read "serious books" even though he knew that Jia Baoyu didn't like him, even if he was less beaten. As a parent, it is obvious which one to choose for the sake of your children and grandchildren. It was clear that Jia Mu loved her only daughter so much and turned to Lin Daiyu, but in the end she changed her original intention to support the "golden and jade marriage"? It was not discovered in the end that Lin Daiyu was indeed not suitable for Jia Baoyu. Simply put, Lin Daiyu was not suitable as a mistress to take charge of a feudal family. Although Jia Baoyu was born from the second wife and could not take the title, judging from how much Jia Mu loved Jia Baoyu, Jia Mu's property and a large part of the property of Jia's East Mansion had to be distributed to Jia Baoyu. After all, when Jia Baoyu was about to get married, Jia's mother, the entire Jia family, and the four major families didn't know that the Jia family and the four major families were about to be destroyed.

The heroine is an overseas Chinese who received elite higher education overseas. The male protagonist can't even write a 500-word composition for an elementary school student! How is that different from being illiterate? ? I asked them how they fell in love with each other in their previous lives. ? Isn't this level difference too big? ? Let alone love, we can't even talk about it, can we go together? ?

After reading Chapter 46, I just want to complain about the author's point of view. Why is Bao's second daughter-in-law having an affair with Lian Er? It would not be a pity for Bao's second daughter-in-law to die a hundred times? Lian Er deserves to die for this kind of thing? There is also a mandarin duck who is only four or five years old. He is not humble or arrogant when he rewards someone with a gold bracelet. I am speechless.

Sure enough, women are the worst at scolding women? In order to prove that Qin was not a woman, this female author used sharp words that put me to shame as a man 🤤🤤 There is no need for her to be just a character and she had no choice but to write a novel with too many private goods, which neither satisfies the curiosity of male readers nor the empathy and compassion of most female readers. There is no way to please both sides. I can only feel happy with a very small number of fans who hold the same opinions as my own. To put it simply, it is just self-pleasure.

Marked. I had already packed my schoolbag and was going to the library to spend Saturday. Unexpectedly, I came across this book by chance. I was immediately fascinated by it, so I read it all morning.

I don't quite understand why the stepmother's natal family is not considered a serious relative? And what Jia Cong's mother said about Fu Zheng, Fu Zheng's concubine turned into his wife, it is a black history for a first-class general to have a concubine as his wife. I remember there was a crime called taking a concubine as a wife, I don't know the details, but most people would not do this.

All the online writers who write about celebrity wear are all dissatisfied with Jia Jing. It's just like political correctness, it's really puzzling. First of all, Jia Jing can be said to be the only sober-minded person in the Jia family - he is the only one who can see that the Jia family is about to be destroyed. The whole Jia family is full of pig teammates and is hopeless, so he can only be a monk by himself. Secondly, Jia Jing is also stated in the main text of The Red Mansion as the only talented person alive in the Jia family - the two ranking Jinshis. The other Baoyu and Jia Lan all infer the future ending through foreshadowing or judgments in the previous text. Finally, Jia Jing was the last person in the Jia family to serve as a high-ranking official in the imperial court. Jia Jing's appointment was a sign that Jia's family was completely defeated and far away from the core circle of power.

The whole Red Mansion has to say that the scheming bitch must be Xiren. The original article also said that Xiren only has eyes for whichever master he follows. He makes it sound like he is loyal, but in fact he is following the master who is causing trouble! Jia Baoyu's whole house of maids was beaten to death and dispersed by her secretly. What about herself? After the Jia family fell into disgrace, he married Jiang Yuhan. She is the maid who has the best ending in the Jia family. Since she was so loyal, why didn't she follow Jia Baoyu until her death? ! Who is Jiang Yuhan? Liu Xinwu made it very clear about the Dream of Red Mansions, and he was also a key figure in causing harm to the Jia family! Such a black-hearted bitch is actually broken up by the protagonist, and it looks like the ending will be good. It makes me angry just looking at it!

I have read the whole article, it is a good article, but I have to say one thing here: right and wrong are judged by the self-feelings of the protagonists and the couple in the book. They think you are good and bad can be made good. They think you are bad, so they don't think about the people around them.

Chapters 14 and 15 are really poisonous. They miscalculated the value of gold and silver, and even miscalculated their own relatives. They even sent girls in the house to deliver gifts and letters. In the first few chapters, they just wrote about the First Grade Lady, but later she said she was of low status... There were so many common sense mistakes that I even ate the settings I wrote. I really got used to it.

After reading the author's reply on sewage discharge, I still don't need to read it. The intelligence is touching (｀Δ´)!

After reading a few chapters, I feel like I have read a fake Dream of Red Mansions before. Why have all the characters changed? In fact, the author borrowed the background of Dream of Red Mansions and the characters in it. The story is different. Dream of Red Mansions is too advanced. The author couldn't think of the plot in it, so he had to change the characters.

Not much comment, but the author may not have read the original work, but only watched the TV series. Sister Qiaoer is married to the son of a landlord, not Grandma Liu's grandson Baner. The author made a mistake when writing

Is it necessary? He gave several capable maids to Lin Daiyu, and even his own daughter did not have such outstanding maids. The heroine was probably obsessed with Dream of Red Mansions.

The handling of the maid at the beginning was very annoying to me. You can exercise your authority, but when you return to Jia Mu, you should start by saying, "What should I do if I am a mother?" Is this what a daughter-in-law should say? What qualifications do you have to compare with Jia Mu? You go back and forth, and you can't handle the relationship well. I still feel that I am very witty and skillful, which is extremely embarrassing.

Xue Baochai and her mother deserve to be down and out.

At this level, what can I say about Red Mansions? I am ignorant and fearless.

To be honest, the original work doesn't leave much space for people to play. Everyone is flesh and blood, so they are not suitable for the background of online novels.

I cried like SB in the last few chapters. This is my favorite Red Mansions novel. I originally read Red Mansions novels just to watch the rich, handsome and beautiful women fall into love.

It's quite embarrassing to read the review, maybe just as embarrassing as the title of the book.

I want to say why I have to move and resign. I changed the plaque. I just need to remove the illegal things at home. It feels a bit unnecessary.

It looks okay at first, and the angle is quite novel, but the protagonist is too much of a virgin. Everyone wants to save her, and everyone wants to take care of her. Do you think you are the savior and can do anything? Yingchun Jia Lian and Jia Cong are nominally their own children, and it is normal to treat her well and save Yinglian, but even Wang Xifeng wants to break her away. It is undeniable that Feng Lazi has her personality charm, but her true nature is hard to change. Later, she really thought she could save the Jia family. Mrs. Wang seems to be the only bad person in the book, but the Jia family's decline is rotten to the core. There are also ghosts and gods in Red Mansion, and the plot is based on fantasy. It is so easy to change one's fate against the will of heaven, like a novel.

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After reading Chapter 29, I feel that it is not the Dream of Red Mansions that I want to watch. Although I have not finished reading the book of Dream of Red Mansions, and the TV series is also so-so, I want to watch it with respect for the original text and change some things based on the outline of Dream of Red Mansions. I pity them, especially Lin Daiyu. When I was a child, I felt that she was very unfortunate. She had no home and no good health. I accidentally read some stories about the modification of Dream of Red Mansions. I wrote novels and stories, saying that Lin Daiyu kept crying in order to repay a favor. I am quite curious about this. This article is a bit uncomfortable to read. I don't have a good writing style and cannot write such an article, but I will try my best to write the story I want to see. Although I don't know when I will go there, and I haven't finished Dream of Red Mansions. It may not be suitable to say such things, but I want to leave a comment here. Don't worry, no need to comment.

It's a novice article, but it's just a mental look.

Embarrassing, I have read this book before, but I have no impression of it. I came across this on my browser today and saw it quite late. Then when I saw some chapters, the more I read, the more familiar they became. I went back to the book store and searched, and it seemed that it had been on the bookshelf for a long time. Looking at the progress, it's 86%, but the subscribed chapters are intermittent. I really don't know when I read it 😅

I just want to ask: When will the new book be released? . .