Jinyi Wuhuang

Shi Wen crazily suppresses the protagonist, and all the other time travelers have accessed the third realm. You, a reborn person, are still fishing in the first realm through body tempering. Pure fw.

I finished reading 31 chapters in one go, and I have some superficial thoughts and suggestions that I want to express: Advantages: 1. The background setting is good. It takes the Ming Dynasty as an example and gives me the feeling of playing "Nine Yin". 2. The supporting characters in various Long Aotian routines are very interesting, plus the protagonist's prophet plug-in, the whole battle of gods. 3. Although the protagonist's character is a bit bad now, it is still very comfortable to watch. 4. None of the characters are stupid so far. Flaws: 1. It is impossible to systematically understand the settings in the main text. Readers will be confused if they do not read the settings set in the appendix. An excellent novel should allow readers to explore the world at the pace of the protagonist, and the various settings will naturally be deeply rooted in people's hearts. The collection of settings can only be used as a summary rather than an instruction manual. 2. The protagonist has almost become the general banner of Jinyiwei, and the readers still know almost nothing about the internal structure and hierarchy of Jinyiwei. This is the same problem as Article 1. 3. The pace is too fast and the story is too little. After only 80,000 words, the protagonist has become an official. Sun Kewen has already opened up the Ren and Du lineage, and the cheater is not so unrestrained. 4. There are five levels of Jianghu forces, and the third level is about to be wiped out. It seems that we have entered the middle of the novel, and it has the same problem as Article 3. 5. The protagonist skips levels through practice, and also skips levels when playing dungeons, causing some level settings to be completely meaningless and empty. (Although this kind of level setting that is completely not substituted through the plot is meaningless.) 6. Backgrounds such as being a rich young man in real life or returning from studying abroad with an IQ of 178 have no effect at all in the martial arts world of this book, and only add to the poison. Although the martial arts family setting is somewhat useful and is stronger than the previous ones, it does more harm than good. 7. The scene description is insufficient, and the battle scenes are especially perfunctory. This belongs to the category of hard writing, and the author needs to strengthen it. If novels are compared to games, if they are not well written, they are equivalent to primitive word games without pictures. If they are well written, they are equivalent to 2018 3D masterpieces or even VR games. The gaming (reading) experience can be judged differently. Suggestions: 1. There are many places to explore in the protagonist's past life, such as why the protagonist is reborn and what happened in the previous life. If you were killed by someone else, should you take revenge in this life? Or fulfill some unfulfilled wishes from previous lives. These can all turn into wonderful plots. Of course, the author may have these ideas, but if there is no foreshadowing in the early stage, it will be very poisonous to suddenly unfold in the middle and later stages. 2. The protagonist's past life memories should not only be used to grab adventures. It is impossible for a modern ordinary person to adapt in a short time to a world where the weak and the strong can face death at any time. At this time, the protagonist's mentality and experience can play a greater role, instead of just passing it by. Overall, the setting of this book is quite interesting, but the plot content is too spacey. If you compare an excellent, complete and clear-text novel to a strong man with a strong body, and compare the crazy formulaic writing of great masters to a slightly weak fat man, then this book is like a skinny and hungry man. Everyone has imagination, and what a writer should do is to process this imagination into a full and three-dimensional world. I was tired of typing late at night, and my words were a little incoherent. I hope it didn't cause any great trouble to the author's reading. Come on.

Unified reply to questions about the protagonist's character: This is probably the one that has been criticized the most. As of now, the author has lost count of how many people have criticized the protagonist for being inhumane, having no bottom line, being unscrupulous, a scumbag, etc... A unified reply to this: The protagonist does do whatever it takes to achieve his goal. This is the character's character. There is no other way. But you say that the protagonist has no bottom line, and the author disagrees with this. From the first chapter to the present, the protagonist is indeed unscrupulous against his enemies. There is nothing you can't think of and there is nothing the protagonist dares to do. But Lin Dao is unscrupulous and has no bottom line when it comes to his own people? Tao Dongyuan, a foreign general of the Taoist government, was hunted down by the Shushan Sword Sect and defected to the protagonist. In order to protect a foreign general who was not very powerful, the protagonist would not hesitate to start a war with the entire Shushan Sword Sect. Is this called having no bottom line? Yu Wan'er has never given the protagonist a good look, and her strength is not very high at the moment, but the protagonist never minds it. Is this called having no bottom line? After Lin Dao decided to rebel against the Ming Dynasty, Guo Jia once advised Lin Dao to hide in the Taoist mansion to prevent the Ming Emperor from sending people to assassinate him. However, the protagonist flatly refused in order to save Gao Shun. Is this called having no bottom line? After deciding to rebel against the Ming Dynasty, the simplest way to deal with the hundreds of veterans who were loyal to the imperial court in the Dao Mansion was to kill them directly, but Lin Dao decided not to kill them and sent them back to the northwest. Is this also called having no bottom line? If there is really no bottom line, why would the protagonist do everything possible to send people to pick up his wife and children in the Forbidden City? Wouldn't it be simpler to not care about their life or death and not be threatened by Emperor Ming? Martial arts is already so difficult, so why should everyone stare at the books written by me, a desperate author... Fortunately, in a few chapters, the last volume of this book will be opened, and I can finally tell the story I want to tell. No matter what the results are, at least I can live up to myself and not give up halfway. To the readers who supported this book, the author Jun Jun bows and expresses his gratitude. Without your support, I would have been scolded long ago.

I boast that I have read a lot of dark-flow articles, but this is the first time I have seen someone as bad as the protagonist with sores on his head and pus on his soles.

I've been following your book since the beginning. It's really good. To be honest, it's better than mine! I won't say anything else, let's support them all. They are all fellow martial artists. I will reward you later when I have royalties. . . There is really no money now. . . Sorry🙏

It really became more and more poisonous. In the later stage, there was no martial arts at all and it became a battle for hegemony.

The most annoying thing is the brainless son of luck. If it were really that hard to kill, a lightning strike from the sky would have killed all the protagonist's enemies. Give up the trap.

Isn't it actually delicious? It still feels good to be tortured in the game.

The author worked hard to help Pig's Foot create an opponent, for fear that Pig's Foot would not be enough to aggrieve him.

In Chapter 30, two of the protagonist's enemies meet Tongmai in a strange way. The protagonist is still a scheming person, and they are scheming in Jin Yiwei...

I can't stand the novel at all after reaching seventy chapters. I don't know what happened to your family and how disgusting you feel to write this kind of novel. Forget about being brainless. The character of the protagonist is the worst thing. The protagonist has become like this in two lives. Those who can continue reading are extraordinary. Anyway, I gave up. Goodbye.

Later in the writing, the protagonist is worse than a beast, and his subordinates take advantage of him at will. I can't stand it anymore.

It seems a little different from the published books I read.

After reading ten chapters, you were successfully shortlisted for my novice writing group

! I'm so excited! A physical book suitable for reading with classmates in 2019! I was fascinated by the male protagonist, I like this character so much! It's different from those bulk goods, and I found it at the starting point today! Marvelous! Ahhh

Chapter 1 Ran away? 😅

🌹 Kangai Space supports.

Hidden knife, what's up, say something?

Anti-system. . . First time watching

It's too awesome to know so many adventures after just one month of rebirth.

There are indeed some pitfalls that have not been filled, such as the pit of God of War and the King of War system.

Jhhgg

It writes about the Jinyiwei in the last years of Wanli in the Ming Dynasty, starting with the Battle of Sarhu, and gradually becoming stronger with the embroidered spring knife in his hand; the title of the book: Jinyiba Ming; please support it! The introduction is as follows: An embroidered spring knife can kill all the demons and monsters in the world. In the Ming Dynasty, officials are constantly talking and talking, and parties are constantly fighting for power. Everything arises because of power, and it will also fall because of power. In this era when the emperor is pretending to be stupid, the eunuchs are waiting to be released, civil servants are fighting for power, and military generals are afraid of death, what should I do as a royal guard? Who said that Jin Yiwei is just a sitting dog? Who said Jiannu was invincible? Who said that those who command troops are inferior to others? Who said that the imperial power is delegated to heaven? Who says Han people should be killed? I don't consider myself a good person, but I can't say I'm a bad person either. It's just that the knees on my legs are a bit hard and I can't kneel! Make me a slave? Impossible! I want to stand, but you don't agree? Then I can only use this embroidered spring knife to kill you. I am no one else. I am just a Jin Yiwei who came down from the Shura field called Sarhu. My name is Qin Feng! History has changed from this moment, and the era of kings in brocade is not far away...