Quickly Travel Back to the Past Life to Counterattack

The author should remember to update another article, it's so good 🌹🌹🌹

Saying that she cultivated immortality just for a man dissuaded me, couldn't it be for herself?

A story has written more than seventy chapters and is not yet finished. . . I'm really convinced that Shuicheng is like this

After reading the comments about male protagonists, I wanted to say, wouldn't it be great if there were no male protagonists? Why add a male protagonist?

Wow, I've read five stories, and they all disappeared after completing the tasks. It's too miserable. Can I die of old age quietly? Heaven's way is not that far behind for decades. It feels like it's unfinished to leave like this

Emmmm, I know the author has a hard time writing the article, but a great master who has transcended tribulations and is about to ascend has to do the same things as a primary school student. He is really clueless, and the plot is also very bloody. I can't stand it. Bye bye

Can the author not be good at it? A recent story could have been solved in twenty chapters, but it was over 120 chapters too long. There were too many useless plots, and the main plot was dragged out and boring. This was entirely the author's own pleasure! When it comes to fast travel, what we look at is instead of . If the next plot is like this, I can only say that there will be no end to it, and my money will not be blown by the strong wind.

Let's cook some chestnuts. If an important thing is broken by a child, an adult should either give him a beating or let him pay compensation, or let his teacher or parents teach him a lesson. However, this adult just wanted to hang out with his little friend. After many months or even years, he finally found the opportunity to break something equally important to the child, just to let the child experience the same pain... Is it necessary to cut it? A lot of stories feel like this, dragging on longer than necessary. Quickly travel quickly, the narrative pace must be fast. Even if it takes the protagonist hundreds of years to accomplish one thing in the story, it doesn't mean that it takes hundreds of chapters to describe what he did every year.

No wonder my grades are so bad... I'm afraid I can't even read it.

The story of "I am the White Lotus You Can't Get", I had to deal with it with a group of top-notch people for 90 chapters, but it broke my heart. It took so long, so many scenes were played, and so much evidence was collected. What was the purpose? To make the scumbag feel guilty? Wouldn't it be better to just get a divorce? In other novels, 90 chapters are enough for the heroine to make a name for herself. Also, a fake bag incident only took away nearly 10 chapters. If Qidian can award a hydrology master championship trophy, you, the author, will do your part.

Twins can be diagnosed in one month of pregnancy, 66666

My wife's writing is very good, and then it's not really slow. Fast travel doesn't mean completing a story in a few chapters, so what's the point of reading the plot? You can't even finish it, right? Fast time just means that it is described faster than a normal novel, and there are not so many irrelevant side plots. In short, just follow it at your own pace. Believe in yourself, your book is great.

Bloody drama. Disgusting feelings.

Weng Weng's article is very well written! The psychological activities are delicate, the plot layout is reasonable, and the rhythm of the story is sometimes as slow as flowing clouds and sometimes as fast as a storm, making people unable to stop reading~ I really want the author to make more updates! ! However, in view of the author's health reasons and other trivial matters, it is better to update on a daily basis. Don't interrupt and bury unfinished chapters. I hope you can update one or two chapters a day normally. Just add more during holidays! ! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

There are so many chapters in a story, which is not compact at all and contains too much water.

I hold it in my hand, but how can I tell if I kill it?

The conflict is awkwardly written.

Princess, this story is too long-winded and frustrating! !