The Leader of the Prehistoric Demon Sect

It's a bit ridiculous that the River Styx doesn't want the Sea of ​​Blood.

Is the author still alive? I can't write Superman yet. I'll have to wait for a year. Remember to say something when I change my vest and write a new book 🙂

Is this the author of "Superman Doesn't Need to Practice" 🤔

I feel like there are some problems with the worldview, time, and distance in this book. For example, Luo Hou's sword energy spans 30,000 miles. Isn't that a joke? At his level, the sword energy is only so much. If you think about how big the earth is, they can probably destroy a planet if they are so powerful. Then it's time. It's only been 10,000 years since the beginning of the world and the war between the three races has come. Think about how long it took for human beings to evolve? How long did it take for the earth to evolve? If you want to correct the Eight Meridians, how can life evolve so quickly? It is estimated that the world is still barren in only 10,000 years, and most life is still evolving, and the calamity in the prehistoric era is always one calamity of hundreds of thousands of years. The war between the three tribes can not be regarded as a calamity. After all, the whole world is involved, including birds, animals and the aquatic tribe. Moreover, it is said that before the three tribes, there was a tribe of wild beasts. They were transformed by the Chaos Demon God and were bent on destroying the world. They were later destroyed. That was considered a calamity. After all, it was aimed at the entire prehistoric life. The so-called calamity mostly means that the whole world is involved, such as the later Lich and the Conferred God. The occurrence of such big events often takes a long time and cannot happen in just ten thousand years, especially when the sky opens. The above is my personal opinion. I will continue to read the book. After all, these will not affect the plot or anything, but it doesn't look very impressive. If you know how to read it, you know? A retreat can last for thousands of years, or the world can be destroyed at every turn, but one strike with a sword must destroy at least countless people, or the sword energy is very condensed and will not be too big, but it must be awesome. If you can't hit someone, you have to say that the sword energy explodes after hitting the ground, and then the big place will die, or no grass will grow for many years, or just say what will evolve here after tens of thousands of years. To blow the atmosphere, if you can create the world, then I can create the universe containing countless small worlds. If you can create the universe, I can create chaos containing countless universes. If you can create chaos, then I can create Hongmeng. Hongmeng evolves into countless chaos. This book by the author Jun is too stingy. What about 10,000 years? What about sword energy stretching across 30,000 miles? It's not exciting enough.

It feels pretty good. I don't read many other prehistoric novels, so the setting doesn't have any problems for me. Doubiliu is pretty good.

When I have ideas, I will come here and post book reviews. I post them as I read them. If I don't post them, it may be because I feel pretty good or I have left. I still like Honghuangliu novels. Although I still keep complaining, I will insist on reading the tens of thousands of words so far. After all, there are not many words. The things worth complaining about right now are the time and distance, not enough atmosphere, and the characters and other things are just passable. The important thing is the plot. It seems that the author is a novice, so I won't bash you too much. Just keep going, after all, people will always make progress. It's hard to agree with everyone. It doesn't matter if I don't like it. It depends on the opinions of the majority of people. I hope the author will often check the book review area and the chapters, especially the chapters, so that he can intuitively see what people think is bad, what they think is irritating, etc. Opinions are for reference only. Don't let the outside world influence your emotions casually, but you must be serious. It doesn't matter if this book is not good, as long as you can keep writing it. It will always be good. For example, I stopped reading this book in the end, but maybe in a few years, your next book will have you perfected your writing skills, and I like it very much, then I will be very happy. I hope there will be more authors, so that there will be less book shortages. I see that many people's books ended up not being written. I hope they just changed their names and started over, instead of leaving completely.

Not bad, the writing is very nice. Please update it.

🤝 I hope the author writes better and better

It's not good. The ancient world emphasized cause and effect. Yuan Hong stole Yang Jian's skills and became Yang Jian's substitute. How do you plan to repay the Pangu essence and blood that you stole from the witch clan?

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At this time, the Second Saint of the West should not have magic weapons like the Flag Golden Lotus, right?

Can't the time span be wider? There is no majestic feeling at all. Ten thousand years since the beginning of the world, there has been a battle between dragon and phoenix. In just three months of cultivation, the Golden Immortal has been able to refine several innate spiritual treasures.

The rest of it is pretty good, but it's just a bit off at the beginning. It's not atmospheric and doesn't feel like the Golden Three at all. I feel that the author is more suitable for the urban genre. After all, although the second part is good, it is not particularly exciting and too bland. I might as well leave. This book is not as good as the one on my bookshelf. I have hundreds of books on my bookshelf but I don't read many of them. Most of them are saved for reading. I started reading one a few days ago and found that it has been saved for a year, but it is still very good. There are too many good books and I don't have enough time. If I read this book, I would probably keep it until it is finished or unfinished. After all, I don't really like it, so I just left and talked a lot of nonsense. My hobbies are reading and talking. I talk a lot. Goodbye.

A mountain with half a person, how big are these people?