Star Martial Arts Battle Royale

The writing is not good enough, the sense of dissonance is too strong... To put it simply, the author's God's perspective is brought to the protagonist... From the first scene where the protagonist first enters, the psychological quality of the protagonist is too strong. Well, let's just treat him as the protagonist. After all, the author did not explain in detail. The background settings at the beginning of the first scene look okay, but there are problems with content connection. Many of them are known to the author but not to the protagonist (as an agent, is it okay not to tell the protagonist anything?) The most dramatic part is the section where King Su in the Palace of the Earth is defeated in the third game. Regarding the materials requested by King Su, according to the previous description, the protagonist should not know anything about it, but why does the protagonist say that he doesn't know most of them? Don't talk to me about the mall. The setting says there are only these four. Also, as for the emotional drama issue that some people have mentioned, I can only say that novice writers are like this, and old writers will automatically block it. As for the character growth that the author mentioned, if it means character upgrading, I will pretend that I didn't say that. But so far I haven't seen any growth in the protagonist's character or mentality. How was the first chapter? How is it now? It's almost two hundred chapters away...

I don't know why, it looks so awkward

The author is not very good at writing this book. He is wrong and you can tell by looking back. He is suddenly caught and you don't know what the audience is.

It is obviously a five-star book😊

The story is quite strong, but it's a pity that it's too blunt in places. For example, the agent Zimo and the female characters in each copy.

After collecting it for a while, I just discovered today that you are also the author. Ha ha!

My writing is okay now, much better than before.

How can a person still be in the mood to save a beauty when he is in a desperate situation? ? Since you are writing a dark novel, you must grasp the pig's trotters' character well. Hesitation and kindness are not suitable for writing dark novels. Old readers are not interested in this kind of dark novels because of the kind-hearted pig's trotters. On the contrary, they are poisonous.

Only five? Your writing lately has been a bit messy.

You have missed so much. If you had known me earlier, you would have made a lot of money😁

Lots of eunuchs today, hang in there man

Will Big Brother be released at the end of the month 😁

This book is much better than those that forcefully collect tens of thousands of recommendation votes with 10,000 in it!

Give me some motivation, don't be a eunuch, as long as the writing is good, I will keep subscribing.

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Thanks to D Luochen for the reward of 500 starting coins! I was pleasantly surprised... In addition, I am soliciting complaints and suggestions. As long as you put them forward, I will take them seriously.

I feel that the chicken-eating content at the beginning can be used as a book, and the story after the game can be used as a book. In fact, it looks okay and the story is not vulgar.

The subject matter is OK, but the writing is not! The especially emotional scene was so embarrassing! I only watched two scenes, one involving an affair with a woman, and I was moved and sympathized with in various ways!

I really didn't expect this plot🤓

Damn it, why have I finished this book? I originally wanted to finish it with 200 chapters!

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