Bronze Long Song

Is it appropriate to start poisoning in the first chapter? The eldest son of the family was scolded by his servants, and his goddess mother was raped by his father, but he was still a loser.

The half-immortal civilization lost contact after listening to it 😥

Emmm This book is full of fantasy writing routines. The author said that he doesn't want to be in the limelight and knows that strength is the fundamental result. There are still all kinds of pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines. Moreover, emmmm, he neither sees how domineering nor how transcendent the protagonist is, nor does he feel the slightest bit of immortality? Breath. How can I put it? It looks awkward, and what kind of national system and title palace, all kinds of proud men are stupid, they just look at you, try again, emmm, the IQ of the supporting characters is definitely not high, the combination of fairy and fantasy is really not good, the level of power is high, all kinds of intrigues, killing and recklessness , if you don't think about how to practice, the juniors will do all kinds of things, and the elders don't want to practice. They will help the juniors to do things every day, and then let the protagonist kill themselves to give the protagonist a wave of experience. When they are completely defeated, they will give money, give people, and give their daughter, and then beg the protagonist to let themselves continue to bully other people here, emmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Different world, different books.

The battle scenes are well written! Tired of harm!

Why do things like "I glared at my servant, but was beaten up by the servant", "Obviously I am a member of the family, but you can bully me just because you are a servant", it just feels like it is against the law, this is not how the loser-liu forces the plot to be reasonable, right? I never realized that if I bully my brother and my father won't beat me, why is it okay for you to do this! How weird!

To be honest, after watching it for a long time, there is a soft difference between cultivating immortals and cultivating gods.

What you are cultivating is an immortal, it is not a system. You can pretend to be slapped in the face, and you have been ridiculed for so many years. What's the point in running out in the end? Just kill the servant, and then rush out. When you are successful in cultivating immortals, you will have cause and effect. This is so powerful. What's the point of jumping around in a small family just for routines and creating conflicts?

I don't know what the hell it's about.

Please support me 😴

Somehow, I thought of Doupo

I feel that the level of immortality cultivation is so low, it is not as long as ordinary fantasy life...

I hope this book will be able to become a god in one book

It's so well written (✪▽✪), keep up the good work!

The book is very good, but it has two major shortcomings. The number of words is too few and the names are too confusing. Han Ming and Han Wei were confused when reading it.

The first time I saw it, I saw it as a bronze training manual. Long songs wet my thighs.

Why do you like sci-fi in your comments? Then I like pure cultivation. . I'll come back when I'm fatter. . Hope there is no harem. . 😚