
Konoha's Child King
木叶之孩子王
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 479k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Author, I have some suggestions, although it feels like nonsense and boring.
①. Real orphans usually grow up in orphanages and do not have their own house. ②. Orphans should not do anything too outrageous, as they can easily be regarded as spies. Anyway, you are an orphan and have no power behind you. No one cares whether you die or not. You can first contact Kabuto's ANBU dean and go to school through her, otherwise you may not be able to get into the ninja school. Ninja education is not compulsory. ③. If a stranger celebrates your birthday, I'm afraid you won't call the police directly. Maybe children won't think too much, but people around them won't think so. Also, how do you know his birthday? I don't think 3-year-old Naruto even knows it's his birthday today. If I really want to celebrate Naruto's birthday, it would be best to become a neighbor, open a cake shop or other food store, and work as an apprentice at Ichiraku Ramen. The first two orphans are useless, and the third one is a fantasy. Generally speaking, Japanese people will not accept apprentices at will. If they do, they will be responsible, that is, once a teacher, a lifelong father. Basically, many craftsmen in Japan will not easily accept apprentices. Many shops with a history of hundreds of years are inherited by the family and rarely accept outsiders. If it was just an ordinary part-time job, I probably wouldn't have children.
This book has been written by Shen Nong, but I have been deeply addicted. The main reason is that the protagonist always swears, and the writing is not good. I suggest the author change it. Moreover, the IQ is still low. If he approaches the Nine-Tailed Jinchuuriki in such a daze, he is not afraid of Danzo! Also, please change the bad language, otherwise the results will definitely be bad. I suggest the author not to delete my comment. I suggest you change it, otherwise it will be deleted.
Coming back in 2020😊, the author's Naruto satisfies the little white text I wanted. I hope the author will work hard. 😊
To be honest, this is a very nonsense novel, it is completely personal YY and not a fan.
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Seeing that the comment area is basically full of various questions, I will give it a try. I have a few questions. First, the background of the protagonist is not introduced well. Even if Konoha absorbs the orphans of the Third War, you should spend more time introducing it. Second, the status of the Oniden family in Kirigakure is... Needless to say, the Fifth Mizukage has not yet taken power, and the power of several major families is still very strong, so how can the Ghost Lantern clan have any orphans left behind? Thirdly, the protagonist celebrates the prince's birthday. This part is quite good, but the scene of a three- or four-year-old child making noodles. . . Finally, I want to say that as an author, when writing, you should not have the tone that your characters serve the author in an all-round way. Such a plot will appear inexplicable, but if you look carefully, there is no problem. This is what many readers call a poisonous point. The above is just my personal opinion.