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It's so beautiful. I was so absorbed in watching it that I forgot about Chinese food, hehe.

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The author asked me to give it a try. Let me tell you my feelings. First of all, there is nothing wrong with the writing. The author also put his heart into it. You can tell by looking at the chapter names. It is very traditional. This completely fictional historical novel feels like a traditional time-travel novel. The advantage of a completely fictional historical article is that the author can compile it at will without consulting a large amount of historical materials, which can quickly increase the writing speed and leave readers with nothing to complain about. The disadvantage is that readers have no sense of identification or involvement, because it is a history that we are not familiar with. Therefore, there is only one way out for such a completely fictional historical novel to achieve success, and that is to be funny and pretentious. Internet literature books are just fast-food articles. The first three chapters cannot catch people's appetite, so this book is basically useless. I read this book before because it is completely fictional. I read it again today and only saw the word "time travel" in a chapter of the first chapter. If you don't pay attention, it will be ignored. In the first chapter, you must emphasize that the protagonist is a time traveler, so that all readers can see it to increase the sense of immersion. For a completely fictional historical text, if the first three chapters are not funny or eye-catching and cannot catch the readers, then it is almost impossible for you to achieve results. Author, your book obviously failed to do this. If the first three chapters do not catch the readers, it will be difficult for people to read the rest. Author, you may be wondering why so many great masters start like me and can they succeed? That's because they are already great writers and have a fixed readership. Masters such as Ziyu 2 and Chen Dong can write like this, but Mengxin writes like this, which is not only a slap in the face, but also a slap in the face. To put it bluntly, online literature is a kind of text product that needs to be packaged. The first three chapters are its wrapping paper. How to catch people's attention, I suggest the author first read the first three chapters of a hundred fine novels, I believe there will be gains. If you want a novel to be successful, you can't write what others have already written. The work you write must be innovative and not similar to other people's works, otherwise your book will have no meaning. Well, having said all this, I don't know if it will make people hate me.

Good! I hope to continue writing and get better and better!! [Fn=5_1][fn=5_1]

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I just finished reading it, and I hope the author will make this book a hit.

Must give a thumbs up. The novel is awesome, I support it.

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Good article, wonderful ideas, unique ideas, good writing style, please support me

ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏThe rhythm is very good. Keep up the good work. It can be seen that this is a book that has been carefully written. It was not written in a hurry.