Jun Lingyu

First of all, the writing style is a little lacking. It is recommended that the author greatly increase the vocabulary for describing emotions, actions and other similar words. Secondly, I personally feel that the story of the novel is pretty good, especially if you read it in sections, it feels more comfortable. Finally, it is recommended that dialogues with large dialogues should be written with more connotation and not be too straightforward, otherwise it will lower the quality of the entire work. Because the story is a really good story.