Card Star

After reading a hundred pictures, I couldn't understand it more and more. The plot was too blunt, just like playing a game with no side tasks except the main task. It was not very interesting.

Why do you keep holding on to the plot of Yan Ruxi and Jia Mingxu? I only collaborated with Yan Ruxi twice, and there was no in-depth communication. He was not even considered a friend, just a casual acquaintance! When a couple has a problem, just express your condolences! Why does the protagonist repeatedly consider whether to intervene in other people's family problems? Or the method that results in breaking up the couple and putting the husband in jail! The protagonist doesn't even have the position to offer advice on this kind of thing. You're not his parent or brother, right? You, an outsider with a mediocre relationship, cannot intervene in other people's family problems at will based on your own assumptions and speculations!

First of all, I really like this novel, it's very well written👍! Of course, I also have my own little wish. Regarding Zhou Ya, she is a woman who is almost thirty years old, and the protagonist is still so young and her age is inappropriate. It would be better not to use her as the first heroine. And to be honest, from the first time Zhou Ya seduced and coerced the protagonist, wasn't it agreed that it was just a transaction? Moreover, is Zhou Ya so valuable this time? Is it so valuable to ask the protagonist to write a good song just for one night's sleep? You should pay more attention to these works of the protagonist. They are all high-quality products and should not be distributed casually! If you want to trade it, any woman can sleep with it! Why hang yourself on an older woman whose contact is not pleasant? It's all a deal anyway! The protagonist must not trade guns and show off his feelings, and don't say that he will be responsible for sleeping with a woman for whatever reason. What era is it, and he is still obsessed by this woman's tricks. How can there be so many bad things, and every time the woman still charges so much, the price is so high. If there are bad signs or the woman needs to find a girlfriend, if it doesn't work, just find a sex partner or find another person to trade with! Let's end this relationship with Zhou Ya as soon as possible. It's because she can't stand the protagonist, and the follow-up charges are still so expensive! At best, we can just be ordinary friends in the future. I feel like I really can't accept Zhou Ya as the heroine or the first heroine!

That Ye Cunxin is from the military art troupe, right? First of all, as a member of the task force responsible for finding the location of the crime, he acted alone without discussing with his superiors. Is this what a soldier should do? Secondly, knowing that he is a very professional kidnapper (probably a repeat offender), he actually led people to go to dangerous places. I am afraid that military discipline has been forgotten somewhere. Thirdly, he brought easily exposed non-professionals to investigate. How does this look like professionally trained soldiers? ? To be fair, soldiers who have received combat training must have learned how to infiltrate and investigate, and they will never be exposed so easily. If they act privately without professional training and without orders from superiors, they may not have to go to a military court if serious consequences occur. In the author's writing, Ye Cunxin was born into a family of police officers. I felt so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. Do authors who write about urban entertainment not like to use their brains? ? ? Not to mention stripping off other people's clothes while videotaping a fight in front of them. You also need to learn the basics of magic. You were found to have super powers every minute, and you were sent to study slices. Why can't urban novels have a protagonist with a brain...

Alas, the author's name is useless! The book is actually good, but the title puts it off.

It's extremely toxic, the protagonist strips off the female host's clothes in front of everyone! You said it was a magic show? Why don't you strip your women naked and perform this? This protagonist is so damn..., He's so poisoned! ! !

After reading Chapter 146, it was really a force-fed drug. Originally, the protagonist of this book had a good personality and a good golden finger. I wanted to continue reading. However, the author insisted on arranging such a plot to reduce intelligence. The protagonist had a beauty pill and did not keep it properly. He gave it to a female star with whom he had not had much contact. How could he say that it was given by an old Chinese doctor? It was really weird.

It doesn't matter if there are too many poisonous points. The problem is that the author treats the poisonous points as commas and enjoys it endlessly, enjoying himself very much.

Chapter 34: Defeat, even a policeman like me can't stand it. Which policeman and soldier would be so ZZ?

Chapter 407, then the two eldest young men have clearly arranged for the protagonist's mother. The protagonist's mother was so frightened by the two encounters that she was slapped loudly. They said it was not a disaster for the family. Let's see how the protagonist handles it? Even the little guy didn't understand it and didn't tell him. He knew the mastermind behind the scenes, so he explained what he couldn't do now. This branch line didn't appear in many subsequent chapters. Are you someone who has been cheated on? Even my mother has been arranged by someone. If you don't immediately confront them, there are so many function cards and other things that are easy to use for picking up girls. If you encounter this kind of thing, it will be useless! ! ! Besides, the two of them are still trying to figure out how to fuck your mason, Zhou Ya. I insist on telling such a plot but can't handle it well! ! ! Clothes.

I hate fat people, I'm sorry for being biased, so I won't watch it.

When I saw the poisonous death in Chapter 146, there were already several poisonous points before, such as giving up my seat to the fat man. I wanted to know that a girl who comes from a military family and went to a military academy is like this? ! And instead of reporting to the public security department, the girl who gave up her seat insisted on dragging the protagonist into sneaking into the investigation. What kind of drama is this? ! Did the dog eat the education he received? This is how a policewoman like Shenfan appears. Every time I write about this kind of girl, I have to write it in a hot style, but I don't see many good ones. It's totally fucking unreasonable, and it's so witty! I saw the protagonist being fucked by a woman, and then the fucking action was followed. This woman can't even hide. Haha, if you're not a novice, just leave. I don't care enough. Although I am just an old guy who has been reading Qidianwen for 10 years, I still read Xiaobai's novels, but I can't help it, there are too many poisonous points. It's gone, it's gone

The writing is okay, but there is one thing I can't stand. Is the protagonist in the emotional drama dominated by his lower body? At first this week Zhouya crawled into the protagonist's bed for medicine, and then the protagonist became upset and said that he would never have anything to do with her in the future. As a result, the law of true fragrance emerged, and love continued for a long time. This girl is really bad. Not to mention that she is so different from the protagonist. I don't think she likes the protagonist. When they met, they were conquered by the protagonist's sexual ability. One of them knew that the protagonist had good things and wanted to invest in them. In fact, it's okay for you to have a harem. The young lady is quite nice. It's obvious that she likes the protagonist. She showed signs of obesity when she was fat. Yan Ruxi is also okay. There's also Fang Junru, but it's Zhou Ya. Wow~ I really can't accept it.

There's nothing wrong with being fat, but there's something wrong with being fat and wretched. Being fat is temporary, being insignificant is lifelong. In the beginning, the protagonist wants to speak for the fat people. Why are we fat people discriminated against? Why are there so many injustices to fat people? Why are fat people disliked and wronged? Why do fat people do no good things? I almost thought that the protagonist was going to let Fatty counterattack, and I thought, it would be interesting for Fatty to be the protagonist, but in the blink of an eye, Fatty lost weight. Then is there any use in setting up a setting where the main character is fat? It's better that you weren't fat in the first place. Why do you even look down on fat people and still keep nagging about fat people? ... ... In addition, talking about storage space. This is the biggest cheating finger, okay? There are enough people singing, dancing, acting on TV, making movies and writing novels, how can we not follow the trend? The most immersive thing about urban entertainment is the sense of realism, so authors with good scores write the details very well and very realistically. And this book is floating throughout. First of all, parents and family members may know more about their children than the child himself knows about himself. The parents of a child living with his parents know everything about him. Suppose parents have an ordinary fat son, and suddenly the child can do everything, including singing, acting and magic. What will the parents think? What would you think if you had a 6-year-old son who couldn't count and could do calculus the next day? ... After reading a little bit of this book, I don't dare to read any more. Those who write about black technology must consider rationality and fix the loopholes. Those who write about entertainment are simply fed up with being ignorant and knowing everything. People who truly reach the top spend their entire lives doing just that one thing. Suddenly, someone inexplicably reaches the collective peak that only dozens of people can reach in a lifetime. .... There are too many articles about entertainment, and the routines are all the same. You can always see shadows of other books in one book, and the feeling of déjà vu appears from time to time. ... There are too many movie kings, movie queens, and singing queens in this world, and the magic world has been over. I haven't read this book, so I don't know what happens next, so I hope the protagonist can switch to the profession of magician. .. As I said before, there are too many smart people, and everyone has gone to the entertainment industry to join mainstream careers. There is no way, there is no space. I hope Fatty can write more about magic. Only interested in this. ... Space can really break the magician's ceiling casually. With this, you don't really have to waste your resources. I'm tired of seeing other movie stars, singers and the like. .. The entire starting point is not written seriously about magicians. I know writing about magicians will be popular. But some of the shows performed by magicians are really original, which is too difficult for the author. I really hope someone can write a novel about reaching the pinnacle of human magicians by virtue of hand speed, skills, props + space.

Are there any entertainment novels in which the protagonist is neither wise nor wise, nor meddles in other people's business but eats farts? There has been a shortage of books recently

Author, think carefully about why there are so few recommendation votes and why your grades are not good. You should try less plots that lower your IQ. Otherwise, even if you don't hit the street, your writing will be in vain.

Chapter 6, disgusting plot, disgusting protagonist, slip away

I read Chapter 160. The author wrote this emotional drama. I felt embarrassed after reading it. This is because he wanted to start a harem and forced the drama to be extravagant. . . Dodge people

Run 100 kilometers a day, 50 days in a row! Urban entertainment novels, it's not that I don't support the author, it's just that my perspective doesn't allow it! !

It is a good thing to exercise to lose weight, but it is actually a bit inappropriate for the protagonist to promote running to lose weight 250 pounds is really not suitable for running to lose weight. It will cause too much damage to the knees and ankles. Not to mention fat people, a normal-sized person who has no habit of exercising will probably suffer from knee pain if he suddenly runs ten kilometers. This has nothing to do with perseverance or anything else, but is determined by physiological characteristics The protagonist relies on his own system to recover and proposes a big plan to travel a hundred kilometers a day. Of course, it is nothing just to do it by himself, and to make reasonable use of his own advantages; but to invite others to spread it without warning, it is irresponsible for the health of other people! This behavior is not approved.

This dance? ? Is this a new book?

I saw the latest chapter, is this the finale?

Uh 😓, not much to say, just hot chicken,,, forced wisdom, I was convinced,, why is it so difficult to write a good novel?

Haha, it's quite interesting to read this book, especially it lists a lot of anecdotes, which is quite fun! ! The young readers don't have much money, so they only use the gift coins to read the book. They owe it to the author. I give all the votes every day. I hope it can be helpful to the author. Thank you so much, come on＾0＾~

Is it over? Sakura Anime(❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

The routine is so bad, it's so addictive to watch.

Elementary school students write essays, but they can't read two chapters, so they give up.

This routine makes me want to vomit! I keep being fucked by others, and it happens again and again, and I feel nauseated.

Why was the director of the music department banned

Omniscient and omnipotent stars are more real than less perfect stars. It was quite interesting at the beginning. The protagonist did not take an unusual path, but later it turned into an ordinary routine novel.