The Legend of Cloud Neutron

Nuwa has not yet created anyone to become a saint. She just wants to know how I accepted Master Xuandu as my disciple. Who can tell me?

The realm is so hard to remember and so confusing

Every time I see "Tiandao is above, so-and-so..." I just want to say that you have traveled through time, and Tiandao knows nothing. If it had known, it would have wiped you out long ago. Have you never heard of anomalies?

Because a lot of people wrote about The Ancient Times before, but they ended up writing The Ancient Times poorly, so it's much more difficult to write now. The author chose this subject that is not easy, so don't criticize him. You said his writing style is that of a primary school student. I think it's okay, and it doesn't affect the reading. Although the plot is not new, I haven't watched The Ancient One for a long time, and there is 1 recommendation vote to express my feelings. I am really worried that no one will write The Ancient Times in the future. After all, I have followed it.

I laughed so much that I peed myself! ! Xuandu? ? ? ? ? You are really awesome! The human race hasn't come out yet! Your Xuandu jumped out from the cracks in the rocks! ! !

Should Yun Zhongzi have a popular moniker? What's it called? 🤔

The first chapter is poisonous? Countless poisons? See the end of the first chapter? A white cloud ☁️ just gave birth to spiritual wisdom? If you just kill people and grab treasures, forget it! As soon as someone's spiritual intelligence was born, you used it to block the knife. Do you owe others karma? So you want to kill others? Is this another hint that the cloud is Yunxiao? If I want to kill you, just kill me? So much nonsense? Didn't you die after that? Does a newly born intelligent cloud have to forcefully lay mines? Are you poisonous?

The earth spirit bead is the best innate spiritual treasure. I laughed.

The Yun Zhongzi he wrote on it was so real and crazy. You see, during the battle between the lich and the Buzhou Mountain, Fuxi calculated a plan against Yun Zhongzi, and Yun Zhongzi beat Fuxi in front of the saint Nuwa? Aren't you afraid that one day you will be beaten to death by Saint Nuwa when you go out?

I feel like one or two Yuanhui in your prehistoric times would have caused countless calamities. One or two hundred years will make you a golden immortal, and the refining of spiritual treasures will be calculated based on the sky. Pangu was so miserable, his body was dead and the sky was open, and he would be finished in just a nap.

It's not the human race. It hasn't been created yet. Why is there still Xuandu?

The writing style of junior high school students is a group of authors with poor literary quality.

Yuanshi Tianzun smiled bitterly... Shocked... Curious... Successfully brought down the boss's style.

I find the novel written by the author incomprehensible. I am constantly threatened and asked to kneel down. It is really not like something that could be written by a carbon-based creature. I can't stand it anymore and I have blocked him.

The three words Yun Zhongzi appear too many times before. In Chapter 5, I roughly counted that cloud neutrons appeared 60 times in this chapter! ! Admire:)

He obviously told Dayu in advance that he planned to kill him, but in the end, he even gave the Kongtong Seal to Dayu without retaliating. His cultivation would be ruined or his head would be beaten! Fengshen Sanxiao clearly told Sanxiao about the Buddhist plan and asked Sanxiao to place the Yellow River Formation directly at the foot of Lingshan Mountain. However, the protagonist got hard again. He insisted on taking the blame for others, and he was very happy to take the blame for Zhundi who had just plotted against him. You say you hate threats the most, so why not just die with Zhunti!

Yun Zhongzi's greatest skill hasn't been written down yet, he's a copycat master.

After reading Gou Sheng, I can hardly read other ancient works.

The author is garbled and the protagonist is verbose. I'm impressed with you.

It's too verbose. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence must be repeated over and over again in three or five sentences. The water injection rate is about two-thirds.

It feels like you can't express a single meaning in ten sentences. It's so long-winded and boring to read.

Saints who have used Hongmeng Purple Qi to become saints are not the same ants who obey others, but are just a little stronger! Write as if you are very noble. Hongjun imprisoned all the saints for his own rule!

That piece of trash dim sum is written in such a sexy way, it's a person with a worrying IQ.

There are so many bullshit things, there are so many bullshit things in the first few chapters that are ruining the whole story. . . Poisonous

Borrow a treasure land, Prehistoric: Yunmeng Serpent

It's funny to me. It took a long time for the protagonist to cultivate to Luo Tian, ​​but he quickly cultivated to this level when he became Zhunti and accepted Yang as his disciple. Aren't you contradicting yourself?

What the hell, it has died hundreds of times without that aura,

Refining the body has reached the beginning of time! The current author would not be able to write a book if he did not practice the body. How to practice the first cloud in the sky, the first ray of clear air, etc., And how to cultivate both the body and the law. The prehistoric era is talking about the basics and the three thousand avenues. The ancestral witches are not called body training.

If it weren't for the interception of the immortals, the Twelve Golden Immortals of the Chanjiao would have been on the list of gods in the morning.

Really no one can beat him. He almost died three times in the beginning. I don't believe that Huanglong would not snatch your innate spiritual treasure and actually help you. If you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth.