Traveling to Another World and Becoming a God

He came in just looking at the gods, but he ended up being betrayed!

The writing is a bit poor and the narrative is a bit long-winded! I personally feel that it is better not to write about the reasons for time travel at the beginning of the novel. The writing is awkward and I skip the boring narrative at the beginning. The author's writing style is not very attractive. From the beginning, he starts to criticize old people.

To be honest, after seeing the disproportionate number of words and grades, I wanted to ask the author of Yili Di how he persevered.

I wish you all good luck in the new year and peace to your family

The author is Emperor Yili. Now the popular Zhutianliu author can open a book to test the waters.

The protagonist was really stupid when he heard that the Chinese tribe didn't respond.

It feels good to read the current chapter from the beginning. I hope the author can give the protagonist a perfect ending.

The perfect villain, who has no past or future, and spends his whole life just to disgust the protagonist. Just like the 5-player team in LoL, completely giving up the other 2 lanes and only capturing the protagonist from beginning to end. In the end, the opposite base was demolished, and the protagonist was really happy to win 0-20.

I saw your reply, the author, and I hope you can finish this novel smoothly and wonderfully. The monthly ticket is not much, but it can be regarded as my support for you, the author. Come on, look forward to subsequent updates! 👌😁🤝

The writing is a bit verbose and makes me anxious to read it.

I can't even stand the first chapter. Am I too strict?

A long review has been given, in the book list review section.

What about becoming a god? ? ? Shouldn't this be a farming stream?

I really can't stand it after reading the latest chapter... Although the writing is still good, this Gu Shuo and Zi Yanyu are really disgusting. No matter what, we still support it! I hope the author can quickly eliminate these two scourges...

The genre is too niche, so the author's writing style won't be so miserable. Let's write in another book.

What about the one who promised to become a god? What a lie!

Make a place for yourself.

😁 Fellow Taoists, have you tried poison?

It's been a while since I read it, and I thought it was very well written. What they wrote was good until you rescued Princess Ziyang later, but I didn't expect that you would act like a stranger and keep away from strangers, but then you would be so obsessed with that kind of girl that you would start a harem? Ziyang is much better than a scumbag like Ziyanyu. I am really disappointed with this book... The choice of the main female and the character creation are all entangled and brainless. You also dragged the scumbag Gu Shuo to make him a disgusting protagonist... Do you want to write it so unpleasantly? It's really disgusting. I'm sorry that I really can't support it anymore. I blame you for letting the male protagonist marry this scumbag Zi Yanyu and letting Princess Ziyang down. I don't want to watch it anymore! You go ahead, my patience is at its limit anyway. Farewell…